OYHS - update 6/8
Added 2025-04-27 19:05:42 +0000 UTCI meshed two sections together. So that’s why it isn’t out of 9 anymore
Also I would suggest starting from the beginning cause I tweaked some code. I also added a few features like historical facts, glossary and I’ve made it very clear which options raise Rebellious and Obedient points
This section is about transition, change and the two most important relationships in Sky’s life.
Any coding issues, you know what to do.
Yours truly, Jude.
Comments
Hi! In the last scene near the fountain when Olivia/Roger with Sky, I can see paths for both genders.
Alex
2025-04-28 17:17:19 +0000 UTCIt's interesting that Mallory is so determined to succeed in Hollywood but also wants to protect Sky from the industry. Rebellious Sky was very hurtful to Olivia/Roger after the "I love you." What I really love is that Obedient Sky is just as messed up, they're just a high achieving people pleaser so it's less obvious. It's great to be able to see the different ways that Sky's personality can branch based on the same trauma. I appreciate having the Obedient route because those behaviors are usually considered admirable even if they're not necessarily healthy. I was surprised to see Sky graduating from Stowe. I thought they had gone to LA permanently but it seems like that was just for the summer. More random notes: * from the prologue - cool to see that Sky retires from acting and lives in Manhattan like Garbo. I assume this game is full of nods to Old Hollywood that I'm not catching. * Greer wearing red swim trunks with a white belt? Perfect. * I love that Magenta wants to be with someone in the same profession who takes it seriously and is good at it. I love that you're introduced to Magenta and she essentially says "don't touch me" and then, "...that's it? Not good enough." In general, it was cool to be introduced to two ROs whose initial reaction to the MC was "skill check failed." Sky's going to have to do better.nd * I'm curious to see where the story goes for a Sky who "needs work on acting skills" AND has stage fright. Even with good looks and a famous mom, that's a lot to overcome. I'm not sure if patreon is the right place for comments like these so let me know if there's a better medium.
skovlund
2025-04-28 11:05:14 +0000 UTCHey so I don’t know where turn is. The numbers assigned to the itchio pages don’t correlate on twine so I need more info on the page than that
Jude G
2025-04-27 23:50:29 +0000 UTCFor some reason I can't proceed on turn 67. There's an extra "if" conditional that probably shouldn't be there
winter
2025-04-27 23:49:06 +0000 UTCIt will be explained later when she doesn’t look people in the eyes
Jude G
2025-04-27 21:20:48 +0000 UTC"The grown-ups' eyes close in on you... the woman next to you looks you directly in the eyes — at least you initially think so — but really she's looking near your eyes." Will this be explained later when we get to know Magenta better or should I understand what she's looking at near Sky's eyes?
skovlund
2025-04-27 21:16:33 +0000 UTC
