MK English text help

the ***? ok, already added firsts to scenes, but will update it

Zvitor Franco

I proof read my own edit, lol. Nothing too severe but you may wanna give it a read.

It’s pretty good. If we’re to be picky there’s some grammar and punctuation here and there. Here’s what I’d do: Defeat Kano. A Mercenary, Thug, and Extortionist Thief. Kano is a devoted member of the Black Dragon. Follow the trail of Kano on uncharted island, a place protected by Shang Tsung's personal army. **is “uncharted island” the name of the location? If so, it would be “Uncharted Island”. If it’s just a generic statement, it should probably say “an uncharted island”. 2 -  Go across The Pit to find Goro' Lair, but be careful. A near extinct race of ninja warriors protect that area. They are lead by Reptile, always loyal to Shang Tsung as his protector. 3 - Shang Tsung recruited renegade Lin Kuei assassins. Face them to reach to Goro, Shang Tsung's champion. 4 - **Defenders of Realm **are in Outworld to defeat Shao Kahn. They need go through the Living Forest and stay alert with what are hidden on the trees. **It would either be “The Defenders of Realm” or “Defenders of The Realm” I think. 5 - ***The scorpion's revenge was in vain. The Lin Kuei assassin returned from death and joined Shao Kanhn Forces. We’re talking about the character, right? Do you want to refer to him as the scorpion as a simile or by him name? If name it would be Scorpion with a capital ‘S’. 6 - It is now time to fight the most wild and lethal Shao Kahn's warriors: Baraka and Mileena! 7 - Prove yourself. Defeat Shao Kan and win the tournament. 8 -  The remaining humans are scattered throughout the planet.  Shao Kahn sends an army of fierce outworld warriors to seek and destroy them. 9 -  Kano is thought to have been killed in the first tournament, but he convinces Shao Kahn to spare his soul. Kahn needs someone to teach his warriors how use earth's weapons. 10 -  The Lin Kuei started an automation to turn ninja clans on Cybernetic ninjas. They seek revenge against the ones which destroyed the clan. 11 -  Sindel, the Reborned Queen, is the last obstacle to enter at Shao Kanh' Fortress on Earth. 12 -  Defeat Shao Kanh's Guardian!  (Motaro) Hope this helped! ;)