Disobedience and Devotion - Chapter 5

While I'm nervous about how Lockwood will retaliate, I feel like they made actual progress in this chapter!! Thanks for sharing ;)

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FUCK YEAH!!! THE FLUFFFFFF

Aww, that's really awesome to hear, I'm happy you enjoyed this one! It might just be my favorite to write.

I finally finished reading this one and I just- there’s an energy in this fic that is just *chef kiss* also like bratty Lena turning desperate I MEAN-

Thank you, I can't wait to work on the next part!

Lordt this is sweeter and steamier on rereads. Bravo👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾🌹🌹🌹🌹

Thank *you* so much!!! :D They weren't connected in the beginning but from here on, their connection is going to strengthen (although Lena's not going to stop being bratty any time soon). As for the pregnancy stuff... :)

This was just a flawless and amazing chapter from start to finish! They are on fire in this story and my god I think I need a cold shower!! Love a bratty Lena and even more I love that they are finally connecting in a way that I have ever really seen in any other story. I love this! And damn if Lena isnt pregnant by the end of that.... ;) Thank you so much!!

Lockwood is still an unresolved issue, and Lex... he's still kind of awful but he was being nice because Lena messed with one of his enemies, so he's seeing opportunities for them to potentially work together in the future and/or other ways of using her to better his own reputation. Lol. They are very compatible despite seeing things different ways and taking different approaches to solving problems. Lena is still 100% determined to upset the status quo, but she's trusting Kara for help now and, if it has some fringe benefits besides for their sex life, she's not going to complain. ;)

How about a valkyrie? :P

I thought something bad was going to happen because of Lockwood so it's good that it's he that got in trouble lol. I am surprise Lex is still in good terms with Lena, maybe I read too many evil Lex that a nice Lex is an extinct animal XD. So Lena goes into heat again, I guess Kara trigger her heat. Kinda surprise Kara isn't in rut. They both enjoy some light BDSM like they are really compatible sexually which is good cause they can go crazy at that element. I don't know but I see Lena will always break some rules so she can get punish lol. At the rate they are going, they will pop a lot of children out every year lmao. It's nice that Lena start to trust Kara to handle the omega problem, she still probably going to do some impulsive action and get in trouble again but it is a start.

Boa and I, the Lazarus Gang!

Sappho82

Girl, SAME!!! Sextual is whatever the opposite of the four horsemen of the apocalypse is because she kills me on the regular but I always get resurrected iunno🤷🏾‍♀️

First off... *revives you* :) Fuck, I just sleepily hit the enter button prematurely because I’m writing this while half awake, ahem. I’m happy the food was how you like it, and you enjoyed the part with Kara putting her foot down - and that other part. Lmao.

bitch what the fuck!!! this came for my NECK and i am ded. deceased. killed. no longer alive. i am not okay!! ye gods, that denial was...unf. kara putting her foot down and letting lena just stew in her own juices until she's pruny and delirious with THORST 😭✊ bless me Lord because these eyes have sinned. SINNED! thank you thank you i feel like you know my hunger and you just feed me this filthiness and it nourishes my soul 🌱🌱🌱 Lena having a taste of herself after she's impaled herself on that D??? fuck!! ALL THE SAINTS IN HEAVEN deliver me from this hellfire!! oh my god okay i will go sit down

Sappho82

Lost Girl gets removed on 4/17 sadly. I'm enjoying it alot. I took alittle break to do other things like read this story. So thanks. ♥️😁

Jbzq21

Really? That's awesome to hear! :) Thank you.

She is, and what can I say, he deserved it. :) Lena got two things she wanted at once... Lockwood's punishment and Kara's attention. I hope you're enjoying it! Today's the day it comes off of Netflix, right?

Yeah. Lockwood's vendetta against Lena is not settled. As for babies, well.... they are definitely doing everything in their power. x)

this probably has to my fav chap so far. one of the hottest chaps and that confession was just a double KO for me.

Blake

Lena forever a glutton for Kara. It was so deliciously evil to see Lena buying the apples just for everyone to humiliate that ass of a wood. 🤣 🤣😈Lena always find a way to be bratty just to get pleasurable correction. Kara had so much restraint but got nice hard and fluffy sex. Now these two are gonna have sex everywhere now. I think that was Lena's plan along. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣♥️♥️♥️♥️ I'm off to finish the other stories. I'm on season 4 so the stories are on my list but I had to read this after I saw the posting.

Jbzq21

How long will it take to build up a dam? Should I wait to post content? Haha. They are both bending more and more... and now they just have to deal with some trials outside their marriage. Petty? Lena was just being kind to a bunch of children. ;) They are finally moving on from the disobedience -> devotion aspects of their marriage. Sort of.. I'm glad you like it that much that it ranks with your favorites. Thank you!

Also, I’m scared at what Lockwood is gonna do to get revenge. I just want them to be safe and have beautiful tenacious babies. Girl, if Lena isn’t pregnant with twins after that I don’t have words.

Oh my lord🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾. I think this made my levees break. 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵 Damn. God. Fuck. I am breathless. Oh my god. This was 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Shit. The tenderness, the recognition that Kara is totally gone over her. Lena being a total beautifully petty brat by giving the kids apples to throw at Lockwood 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 The restraint that Kara showed 🤯🤯🤯 Lena’s fervor and also her devotion that’s just starting to be kindled 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 This one is definitely right up there with ES and HGHD for me. Just beautiful 🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾