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Song Feedback Submissions (November) 💎

Submit your song for feedback, advice & guidance on your music!

To Submit:

Drop a link to your track in the comments below and maybe a brief message on the problems you had with it & I'll be going over the tracks in a video soon

I look forward to listening to your song!

-Mors

P.S. Only one track per person

Comments

thx am for the feedback as U were saying the distortion is a lot which was intentional; however I didn't know it was painful to the human ear (I subject myself to that kind of music so to me it isn't anymore😭)

lilRæven

Hey, this my current track progress, still working out the kinks and sound design, let me know how you think its sounding, any suggestions welcome especially for the mixdown too. thank you! https://soundcloud.com/dunners99/dunners-dont-worry/s-Ue6alp6HH9K?si=69ab67a5e3b34fb4a2305e47e45f10e5&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Cian Dunleavy

I only have footage of my Instagram account.I use Reason Studios Daw Software, Acoustica's Mixcraft Daw Software, and Ableton Live. Here is a video link to my IG account with foot age from my Reason DAW. https://www.instagram.com/reel/DCdRH7DxlBb/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link&igsh=MzRlODBiNWFlZA==

sterling brown

Hi, I've recently switched from making "Spotify playlist" focused music to trying for more dance-floor capable tracks, but have yet to get much DJ attention on this track despite thinking it's quite dance-floor friendly myself (😆) so would like any ideas on areas for improvement. One known issue is the mix, it's a bit loud and a there's a bit too much stuff competing in the high end (vocals / higher frequency drum loops), but other than that I thought (before sending it out) that it was in a decent place. Any feedback appreciated. https://soundcloud.com/rudisimon/100-rudi-simon-extended-mix-126bpm/s-pVWeWE2DzHu?si=672384349c714023865f88c5dafd4afb&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Rudi Simon Hoppe

disclaimer actually 2: this is only a feature but I produced a little drop as well starts at abt 0:50 till 1:58 ish 2nd I distorted TF out of that file in the master in this chase an artistic choice. (I used a plugin called BDE - big distortion engine that should give U a picture of what I was going for...) https://drive.google.com/file/d/1hzdF9aDAQe-0GsHKZPCUgKytcu5yDb2Q/view?usp=drivesdk I hope you can access this file :)

lilRæven

Working link https://on.soundcloud.com/T7oLnLcxFF98vyfo8

Tommy Matrix

Hey Mors, here's one of the tracks I've been working on lately: https://on.soundcloud.com/VpZ2gmhwYygWwdAx6 I'm not entirely conviced about the sound selection, sometimes I feel like drums and instruments don't really fit well together. Out of curiosity: what would you do with a track like this (after I've implemented your suggestions)? Look for an artist who might wanna jump on it? Or pitch it for sync deals? As always, thanks for the huge work you do for the community!

prodbyjoseph

just really value your feedback. pleased with this but do feel there is a little something missing - or even too formulaic? https://soundcloud.com/andy-ankerson/set-me-free-feat-jg?si=eacaaf73a9bc4d148c65b38d597006cf&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Andy Ankerson

https://youtu.be/qMfW8RpdZCU?feature=shared hey mors, I switched from BandLab to Ableton and ive been using it for around 4 days now. its still a bit unfinished, but im really stuck at the drop around 1:10, what would you suggest I do? any other feedback is appreciated (ps im sorry for the mastering and sound selection, still trying to wrap my head around that). thank you.

Blue Knight

Keeping the mellow vibes... would love to hear your thoughts: https://soundcloud.com/arlush/beforethetrip-master?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing&si=246110adedbc4eeba89f08fa2474fa4c

carl rush

Hey Mors. Hope you fine. Thx again for your job with plugins and racks - loved it. Here is an unfinished demo. By the time of your review appear, it will be done and send to release most probably. Anyhow, as always looking forward your word. https://on.soundcloud.com/UYuq6kSvLdgTHCB49

Xxx Х

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ER52OgVBfqqVuJgdBdYdRhu0Pop-mGtC/view?usp=sharing This is my first track. The handpan was recorded with my D Kurd handpan. I've really enjoyed the learning curve. Much love y'all!

James Wilson

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1H1-n72qelvFamb8f3z2AGOLzcuyuVYtf/view?usp=sharing Hey, this my current WIP track, still working out the kinks and writing lyrics, let me know how its sounding, any suggestions welcome especially for vocals. thank you

Calum Johnson

https://www.patreon.com/posts/song-feedback-115790006?utm_medium=clipboard_copy&utm_source=copyLink&utm_campaign=postshare_fan&utm_content=web_share

Ruby Taylor

Lmk what you think! https://soundcloud.com/tommymatrix/square-claws-v2/s-43TvotX641k?si=dffd0416b881482fb0ac52e01076bcf0&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Tommy Matrix

Hey, thanks Mors for this opportunity 👍🏻 I think my biggest challenge is getting a good sounding bass and keeping the listener's attention without using too many different parts. I also often find it difficult to make the song really take off without adding too many sounds. I don't know, maybe you can comment on that. I would be very happy. Greetings jo https://on.soundcloud.com/CciEi.

Jonas Probst

Also any obvious glaring issues you find would be great to hear how to solve! Thanks!

Jack Poynton

https://www.mixcloud.com/Ponyon/undo-breaker/ Difficulty getting the vocal chops to sit right in the mix and issues with harsh high end. Also difficulty keeping intricacies in the sounds without it getting messy

Jack Poynton

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jLk4sNTs21jcry-cbhU0P5Du8gXrL6CI This is kinda two tracks with a transition between, I’m trying to figure out how to simplify the first one to make the drops hit harder and not feel so exhausting to listen to. Thanks for your help!

Spencer Cindia


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