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Chapter 321 - Maneuvering

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Hahahahahahhaa

Roombot

Tftc

Black Rose

Though I think the universe got her and her brothers aspects mixed up. She should be a fire cultivator and her brother the ice cultivator bevause her brother is generally calm and collected while she ever burns for battle and glory. Lol.

Pagemaster

I really like it that yang xius character is so straight forward with her pragmatic thoughts totally in contrast to her brother. You write her really well and in chapters with her pov her actions and views make totally sense. In the last chapter you also wrote about her trying to convince kang lin to get things going with her brother. But not like she was trying really hard or anything because she has other things to do and whatnot and that is totally in line with her being. She is just not empathic. Really great characters dear author

Girl Moss

Benton. Dude. Buy an intrigue technique and an acting technique. I realize it's less fun but do it for the sect.

BelligerentGnu

And so shit is heating up and about to go down soon it would seem... I just do hope most of the actual action can be limited to some very entertaining and educational face slapping rather than outright murder and mayhem... it would go a long way convincing Benton's Juniors and disciples that "absolute application of impossible amounts of violence" isn't the standard method of "the Rising Tide dealing with other people/groups/organizations/sects in general" lol 😂🤣 Thanks for the chapter!

Gopard


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