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A Squire's Wish (writing update)

So... you might have noticed I started posting teaser chapters of Book 2 of the Hidden Wishes series.

I am technically about 19k words in.

And I just decided this morning to dump 17k words of that (basically everything but the first 2 chapters). I started writing based off a plot that I thought was interesting and realised, 19k words in that it's:

- boring

- repetitive

- nonsensical

and non-dramatic. It's just... blargh. It might make a decent short story if it's reworked so I'm going to keep what I have and revisit it one day with that in mind, but I'm going to have work out a new plot and new idea. I know the theme of the story, but the actual plot continues to elude me. 

So yeah, don't expect any more chapters for a bit while I restart.

Comments

Maybe. I'll try to work some of it in. There are a few scenes that might be workable, but it'll depend on how the new plot flows.

Tao Wong

Is anything salvageable from it? Maybe some of the interactions might work without the plot? I’m always an advocate of trying to find value from previous work... lol.

Cameron C


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