Been really loving having an ongoing series like this!
Zarmac
2024-02-14 23:46:20 +0000 UTC
Yes, a continuation of your Asuna punishment story. I've liked your Asuna story since the first one, but I think this one feels too ordinary for me. Maybe next time you can add more stories/narrations that describe situations that are more embarrassing for Asuna or maybe you can also add some bubble text from other students who are mocking or insulting Asuna.