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Early Access: STORMWEAVER 3 - NEW Chapter 34 [ROUGH]

Surprise! Trying to use my getting back from Paris as a reset to do a better job of carving out my writing time in the morning. And as promi

Surprise! Trying to use my getting back from Paris as a reset to do a better job of carving out my writing time in the morning. And as promised, Chapters drop when I finish them haha.

Once more, this is NOT Chapter 34v2. This is a NEW Chapter 34 that will go before Hiroto hears about Sarah transferring!

It's short, but it does a few things I wanted it to!

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BOOK 3 CONTENT/SPOILERS ARE NOT TO BE MENTIONED OUTSIDE OF CHAPTER LEAK ANNOUNCEMENT POSTS. THANK YOU FOR UNDERSTANDING.

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A FEW RULES & REMINDERS:

Comments

Right! The anticipation of their meeting and how it is going to go down is killing me! Will they get along, will they argue? Especially after her comment about “killing him” I cannot wait to see if she will approach him and say she hates her parents too or hates him for existing lol SO many juicy ways this can go!

Bill Hilliard

…. I want to meet the fated sister!!! Give me awkward!!! 😭🤣

Lawrence Dillon

yup! going to toss it up tomorrow along with a 34v2!

Wraithmarked Creative

Thanks for the chapter, but is there any chance we could get a consolidated "the story so far"? Please? I've absolutely no idea anymore which chapter read in which order (last read chapter for me was 25 or so...)

rhymenocerous

That too , could be a possibility….only Bryce knows for sure!

Dan

Has anyone considered Jasper might be the culprit? She requested updates for her boss, doesn’t have children and knows things most will never know.

TDL

I'm so confused with the chapter releases 🤣 feels like I've read the same one 4 time

Travis Snelgrove

I’m going to go out on a limb here with a wild guest on who asked for the ‘update’. Valera Dent. In chapter 15 the brain and neuro scans were classified top secret with the contact person being Valera Dent. I could be totally wrong, but it’s possible

Dan

And, that Kalus is not informed he is conversing with the MIND.

Rick

Might this maybe be the MIND?

Rick

Thank you - really needed 😁

Dee

Those are usually posted every 5 chapters so we should get one with the next new chapter.

Sam

It makes more sense to me that it's Kalus' father -- who's acting as a conduit for General Abel. That's the only thing that works (to me) given Bryce's wording of the messages. Unless it's yet another player that we're unaware of.

Todd Smith

What a wonderful conundrum. I’m assuming that the ‘will they be ready in time’ comment refers either to the imminent end of civilization as they know it or inter systems which does not yet seem to have been announced more broadly. If it is the first that says that Kalus has been read in on something known only to a few people including his father. Given what his father discovered about Aria and Rei when he visited he might well have decided to keep an eye on them through Kalus and the informality of Kalus’s remark about ‘almost raising children’ leads me to think it is him. But that is partly because I like the Kalus character and while I think even assisting his father is despicable assisting General Abel would be much worse. Another possibility is that the Mind has revealed itself to Kalus but that seems unlikely to me as it would not need cloak and dagger address strings for messages.

Gwydion

Any chance of a story so far post? I’m trying to hold off for one but the struggle is real 😂 If it’s not coming soon then at least I’ll know it’s safe to just dig in.

Maria Klein

I HAVE QUESTIONS! SO MANY QUESTIONS!

CipherFTW

I still have not received my postcard. I keep trying to message various places with no reply.

Tom

Me too I accidentally deleted the one before and let's say there was lots of ...lamenting, yeah let's go with lamenting. Because a little old lady shouldn't cuss like a 6 month out at sea pirate denied leave at the Port of Tortuga. ☺️

Sherry

Great chapter and flow on from the previous. Loving it.

Nathan Gallagher

Thank you for this, it flows better and makes the addition of Dice to the training team work much smoother, with a demonstration on what was needed both emotionally as well as training wise for Viv to get back to full power.

Mike Gilbert

This chapter is excellent! Great early week surprise!!! Thank you!

Bill Hilliard

Ok that chapter was phenomenal, it felt well placed and added more depth to the other characters. love to see it 👌👌

Stephen

I think it’s his Dad! Since he says something about “knowing how to raise children”.

Devin Jaros

Is he talking to the top commander lady (I can't think of her name, the one who showed up when Viv was in the icu) or it could be the mind but I don't think so on that.

Kirivina

I love to new content, but honestly, I don't think this needs to be a whole new chapter. I think that this could be included in the end of the current chapter regarding Dice's intro to the training group with a simple statement from either Viv or Dice saying something like "now that we've become friends, let's show this guy what we can do"

Slim

Love the chapters!!! But....I'mma die if we go another chapter without his sister FINALLY showing up!

NerdGinger

I'm looking forward to getting ahold of the story so far. I kind of fell behind and got lost with all the rewrites

Gregory Van Gundy

Haven’t read your latest installment, but I want to thank you for your hard work and making the chapters available. It’s always a treat to get a surprise entry. You do you and I’ll keep enjoying. Cheers!

Szeth

Are postcards done being sent out? I haven’t received mine yet but saw others have.

Travis

Thank you!!!!

Westik

Awesome work. It great to see the small details getting worked in.

Nathan Buckley

New to this patreon and love it here

Jerhett Kellis

Was thinking given Kallus disregard but the other side knowing everything if this is papa Laurent.

gratch42

Sweet!

Iron Akela

Can see Dice yelling out ^%$@! the first time EndWalker goes off and that mummyHead appears right next to you. I wonder if Viv and Rei will keep their user uniques under wraps until they really need them in intersystems - though with the instructors ingraining them in - may be too tough to hold back.

gratch42

This is a very good addition. I am still not sure who Kalus is conversing with exactly. There are so many potential baddies in this book. it could be several people we have heard of and previously seen. The conversation increases the tension but makes Kalus a more beloved player. I like him more each time he appears. Aria’s siblings are good people, which is surprising with an uppity witch for a mother and an absent father.

Lyn Shirley

Yassss we love a surprise chapter!!

Tyler Carley

lets goooo! only read the first sentence but im excited already at arada and dice training. thanks for the surprise drop

Zwil

Gotta love a surprise chapter!

Jordan Clark

Let's gooo!

Daoist Enigma

Woohoo! Love a surprise chapter

JacksAreWild


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