Early Access: KRZ 2 - Chapters 22-28
Added 2024-11-26 14:21:01 +0000 UTC[UPDATE: All PDF chapters have been removed to comply with Amazon's TOS. We'll be back with Book 3!]
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Hi Joseph! Thanks for checking on the continuity--the Ebon referred to in that section is actually an unnamed guard's dragon, not Norrogaul.
Wraithmarked Creative
2024-12-03 18:43:36 +0000 UTCThanks, Janet! As always, these early chapters are released without the final editing passes, so you can be sure this and other errors were caught!
Wraithmarked Creative
2024-12-03 17:58:36 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapters! Just a quick editing point. Norrogaul is described here as being a Royal Ebon, but is described as a Royal Crimson the size of a Royal Ebon in Book 1 Chapter 47.
Joseph
2024-11-28 00:56:55 +0000 UTCI really like the story, but there was a sentence I couldn't understand: "You need to divert the power into your Ability as fast as it comes into or your crucible." It's the into or part. I can't make it fit any possible typo, so I wonder if the authors changed what they were going to write partway through the sentence. Chapter 28
Janet Beane
2024-11-26 23:45:43 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters!
Evan Derdowski
2024-11-26 22:15:32 +0000 UTCgah, so good! thanks for the chapters. reveal was a real obi-wan, eragon, non-surprise--but still nice to have him back on page. final scene was epic
Cliff
2024-11-26 15:16:58 +0000 UTC
