STORMWEAVER: Valera Dent final concept
Added 2024-09-09 13:00:09 +0000 UTCI'm still not in love with her feet, so I maaay have them change that, but otherwise I'm a HUGE fan of this take on Dent for the comic! Not how I picture her, but still works for me!
Comments
This is sickkkkk
Tommy DANGerous
2024-09-29 21:34:12 +0000 UTCYou’re right indeed. She actually has 8 externals. The current record as well.
Philippe Bekkers
2024-09-29 21:28:01 +0000 UTCGotta be honest. That looks like a robot and if I didn’t know the story I wouldn’t even think that there is a human in that armor. Feet are clearly prosthetic or a robots (human foot wouldn’t fit there) and the neck is too long and narrow for there to be a human inside of that armor. The biceps are nonexistent and way too thin at that part of the arm (especially for a warrior). Everything else looks awesome, and I hope I don’t come across as overly critical (I’m not trying to be) these are just things I noticed and will potentially not go over well when this character design goes live.
Vorsayo
2024-09-25 01:07:23 +0000 UTCI feel like with all the sass sent brings, she has a bit more backside than is depicted here. But love the design overall
Josh
2024-09-12 16:53:07 +0000 UTCwait did i misremember dent having only 6 externals instead of 8?
Connor
2024-09-10 00:54:05 +0000 UTCI too have a foot fetish…. I mean issue with her feet.
Colby Golightly
2024-09-09 22:43:07 +0000 UTCI agree with the feet at the very least they are too narrow/thin. I'd also say give her large vision ports and maybe deliniate the face a little bit more so it feels more like a helmet. I'm getting more of a full robot/doll vib just focusing on her face. My last critique would be shorten her hair. Someone as tactical as her would leave a rope as long as she was for an opponent to take advantage of. #ednamode #nocapes
Brendan McG
2024-09-09 21:04:39 +0000 UTCVery nice! Except for the feet but you already noticed that so…great!
ABTelford
2024-09-09 20:50:56 +0000 UTCLooking great, except for the smiley expression on the armor, looks creepy like horror-movie-doll creepy. Better something like a half mask to cover the mouth or no mouth at all
Saint McDaniels
2024-09-09 19:38:14 +0000 UTCTo sum up 85% OK, the other 15 fall under very bad feet and only showing six of her eight externals. Yeah that about sums it up.
Michael Wall
2024-09-09 19:12:13 +0000 UTCMuch better than the previous version. Looks much more like a human body, but especially from the side those feet are interesting. I'm very excited about the comic and maybe anime at some point.
Shannon Bryce
2024-09-09 18:49:28 +0000 UTCI love the body honestly, I can see why you’d like a change for her feet but honestly the externals seem out of place? I’ve always imagined them to have a set size. Comparable to the black orbs Naruto had at the end of Shippuden. Putting that aside, this looks great and I really want to see this comic come to fruition!!
Sugoi
2024-09-09 17:55:07 +0000 UTCDon’t care for the feet, but glad her thighs are thinner. She looks more like I imagined her to look.
Gregory Moses
2024-09-09 15:36:34 +0000 UTCHonestly, the whole lower leg doesn’t look to me like it would fit a human leg/foot. And doesn’t she have 8 externals not 6? It’s awesome art though!!
Iron Akela
2024-09-09 15:14:38 +0000 UTCMake them bird feet not necessarily with talons but with the ability to grab on and hold, it would be so cool to see her as like an ambush fighter hanging upside down from scaffolding or a tree branch and just letting go and dive bombing people. Or even only doing a partial call and hiding up in a arena doing recon
jacob shlagel
2024-09-09 14:36:05 +0000 UTCYeah, the feet NEED work to look like the human foot would fit inside the armor.
Kory Leach
2024-09-09 14:23:26 +0000 UTCHad to go back and checks, she should have 8 externals.
Jacob Clemens
2024-09-09 14:19:36 +0000 UTCWasn't she supposed to have 8 externals
Jacob Clemens
2024-09-09 14:17:01 +0000 UTCDoesn't look like she actually has feet fitting in those thin shoes. If she lost her feet to the archon's that makes sense, but I don't think that's happened.
Paul Sherrill
2024-09-09 13:27:46 +0000 UTCFirst, this is an awesome concept. Artist should be proud. Maybe square the feet like a gunpla? Add a little toe spike or blade for kicks? Also, doesn't Dent have 8 externals?
Nick Haugen
2024-09-09 13:10:26 +0000 UTCMe likey XD But you're right the feet turned out too thin. It doesn't look like an actual foot would fit in there (which is kind of important cause this is armor not a robot XD) Beautiful artwork tho
Morson
2024-09-09 13:09:21 +0000 UTCSame. Not how I picture her but I can definitely tell it's her.
ReadingObsessed
2024-09-09 13:07:35 +0000 UTCAgreed on the feet, great art though !
Rob TheLaughingWolf
2024-09-09 13:07:14 +0000 UTCIs her hair really that long?
Alexander
2024-09-09 13:06:04 +0000 UTCThat is sooooo fing cool
YangThePolarBear
2024-09-09 13:05:31 +0000 UTC
