Early Access: STORMWEAVER 3 - Chapter 16 [ROUGH]

I loved this chapter! But I felt it was…to abrupt? There was nothing in previous chapters about the team getting notified about their trainers showing up, which would be a big enough deal I think it should be included. That said, loved this chapter!

ABTelford

So excited for Ch17. Hopefully this week Right? ….right…? rit? 😿

gratch42

I am just so excited, about what is coming. Stormweaver indeed 😉

Benjamin Hartmann

Oooh! I love how book 3 has been going so far, since it sets the stage so well. The way you work through the meaty details that we need, while making it entertaining is a joy to read, but I won't lie by saying I haven't been waiting for their training to begin. Now, for the sister to come to Galen's. That's gonna be interesting.

Hayley Maderski

I can't wait to hear Luke narrate the "Hey boyfriend" bit!

Freedcats

I’m just picturing all the sound effects in my head in a GraphicAudio release or something like that. That would be so cool!

Tim Kilgore

GOD D#$NIT DONUT!

Otis Reeves

Wainwright: "Did you hear that faint noise?" von Bor: "It sounded like a tank of water being smashed very far away" Kalus: "Why do I hear boss music?"

Ghostbane

Book 3 has began!

Sugoi

I can help you with that problem. Check out dungeon crawler Carl

Riyon Hutton

Agreed

Riyon Hutton

Don’t forget the dressing down of epic proportions. I wonder who gets to go first?

Riyon Hutton

Love it!!!

Lorenz

This is what I've been aching for... the descriptive writing to set the scene, THE STORY, about to pay out in my mind's eye. Great job, but I do have a request plz, plz, pretty plz return Viv to the fold ASAP. This $#@£ about to get REAL, how dare they imply Rei was their focus interest. Show them FIRESONG... you are not side dishes.

Eric Edwards

Yes, just reread chapter 6, 'grandfather' tries to get Serena on a crossword subscription..

Ivo

Damn so stoked for that fight

Aerial Assault

This is getting to the good stuff. Now I have to wait another 2 weeks for the next chapter, mewl

Linda Thompson

No, anime is a tv show (cartoon based) but I just think that trying to make it "real" would be a disaster. At least with cartoon/anime, it can be made more what is in our heads.

Sam

It took this long for Gemella to link up with Shido, so I suspect it will be months before the rest start to link up too. Catcher should be next if it goes by time met, though it if goes with time spent, Aria ought to be next.

Sam

Thanks! Definitely have to do a sketch of Kalus's active CAD.

Freedcats

I love how observant Rei is. He sees so much. It makes the books both exciting and intelligent.

Lyn Shirley

Hoo, boy. Looking forward to what Kalus's Device looks like!

Zac

Well she has grandchildren so there must have at least been hookups or a test tube involved.

Sam

This would make a horrible movie or TV show. It needs to be an anime to fully do it justice. Trying to make this look "real" would be horrible.

Sam

This was one of the most fun chapters in all 3 books!!!

Devin Jaros

Is there a Mr Von Bor? Asking for a friend

Dougie Mitchell

Woof! I like the moxie, and it takes a tiny bit of the pressure from REI to distribute across the squad.

Jeff McClure

Great chapter! Can’t wait for Viv’s grand return. She’ll have something to peak the trainers’ interests.

Grakyn

"Hello boyfriend, I come in peace" HAS to make it into the final version of the book.

Drew Teter

Good on Firesong standing up for their needs. Kalus and Jetway really getting along. So ready for some smackdown - and maybe a certain CAD hitting B0! with all the new opponent datas! Was there a 15v2 as mentioned a few posts ago - or just wait for the next SSFar?

gratch42

Looking forward to seeing what Viv says when she's back - soon please!

Thomas Corbin

Man oh man! Can we say An-Ti -suh- Pay-shun ... it's making me wait! 😲 😱 😲 It's about to go down... got some baddies 🤪 yeah man... Firesong bout to get got real good, but I believe they're gonna hang tough and give a little too 'cus that's what they be about! Bring it!

K.Impossible

Steffen Spraggins

Awesome!!!!! Great lead in to the next chapter!!

Heather Herren

Ahhhhhh that was so FREAKING GOOOOOOOD!!! Lolol I need the next chapter so bad right now

Lyssa

Ooohhh this is going to be good.

Ibiso Charles

I about screamed "OH MY GOD!" while at work. Caught myself, barely. I NEED More!!!! Holy Shiznits! That was Absolutely Fanfuckingtastic! Cashe with that snap back! Get it girl!

Kirivina

Oooooh boy! My first thought… how high is Wainwright’s Speed spec for a Lancet to get a field name like Jetway?!? But DAMN!!! That’s one hell of a chapter! Can’t wait for the next one to see Firesong go up against their instructors for the first time!! I hope Rei uses Temporal Step, but also I’m hoping the others will link with Shido sooner rather than later. That’ll be epic! Either way next chapter is gonna be epic!

Iron Akela

Ugh, the pain for more chapters is real😭 I need a throw down between Firesong and the instructors today! In all seriousness: great chapter. Love that introduction of the trainers and the buildup for the next chapter!

RickVaughn14

Nice first meet. Viv is missed

Kevari

OOOO Love this capture! Can't wait for all three S type to be amazed at how fast they all grow because of Shito.

Gabe Yohn

Had to take a quick lunch break. Von Bor already playing mind games. I can’t wait to get into the training. They’ll probably all level in some way after this first training session.

chris kizziah

Plethora of typos aside, that was beautiful. I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THE LAST TWO LINES OF THE CHAPTER TO APPEAR FOR SO LONG!! YESSSSSSSSSSSS "are you SURE about that?" *evil boss music begins in the background*

CipherFTW

Thanks for the Chapter, Bryce! You go, girlfriend!

Aubrey Listi

You wouldn't happen to have a time machine I could borrow would you?

Jadon

Exciting! Love how the tone of the training is set up!

Bacon

YES!

dcshort2

Oh, this is getting real good

Kaji Aldewolf

Really, Bryce? Right as I have to leave for work?!

Georgina Shultz