EARLY ACCESS: STORMWEAVER 2 - Chapter 60 [ROUGH]
Added 2023-06-09 13:00:11 +0000 UTCShort but (hopefully) sweet!
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- Chapters will be dropping as Bryce completes them. That means anywhere from every 1 to 2 weeks on average, though sometimes waits may be longer.
- Recall that these are rough chapters, with no editing other than a single pass-through as Bryce writes.
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That's it, so without further ado... Enjoy!
Comments
I agree... I need for him to narrate the next book... Amazing voice talent
Nicole Campbell
2023-06-27 22:41:07 +0000 UTCOh PLEASE stick w/Luke Daniels for Book 2!! What kind of a kickstarter do we need to make happen to support that? count me in! he nailed all the voices - can't imagine anyone else doing Book 2 justice
Nicolek0909
2023-06-16 20:39:23 +0000 UTCWe believe he is yes!
Wraithmarked Creative
2023-06-16 16:54:45 +0000 UTCIdk if it has been said or asked. But are you keeping the same narrator as book 1?
William Sanowski
2023-06-16 15:36:08 +0000 UTCI’m so glad it was a short chapter last Friday! The whole weekend (to include Friday) was a mad rush of preparation and execution for a huge party. I smoked two full packer briskets, one pork shoulder, a turkey and ten racks of ribs as well as from scratch baked beans and elote style corn (for 50 people) for a backyard party. It was the first time I’ve had both my grills and the blackstone all fully loaded and going at the same time. So the brief reprieve was appreciated! I just wished I had a speed spec to engage!!! Lol
Kory Leach
2023-06-12 23:28:53 +0000 UTCYeah, as an army retiree the ISCM ranks push the odd button on occasion. BUT then I put it into the perspective of it’s a completely different military structure as it seems to go from our current enlisted structure to warrant and finally to the commissioned structure as the ranks progress. So I’ve just chosen to suspend my “knowledge” with the book’s reality.
Kory Leach
2023-06-12 23:20:17 +0000 UTCthats a whole lot of set up and culmination. i like it and i dont think it needed to be anylonger though we all always want more.
Lukas
2023-06-12 14:54:33 +0000 UTCOk... Just realized this could be looked at as a way someone wanted to give ideas on how the story should go. I'm really just trying to sort it in my brain if I remember it or it's all imagination so I'll wait until such a time as it comes out on its own...
Tavis
2023-06-10 20:13:34 +0000 UTCSo does mine. May I DM you to see if the aspects of the story I remember line up with what you got planned? Id rather not get more than yes or no on any of them to prevent too many spoilers though
Tavis
2023-06-10 20:02:02 +0000 UTCI think you might have dreamed that, Tavis 😅 Or it's been a while and the mind is just filling in holes. Mine does that lol. -Bryce
Wraithmarked Creative
2023-06-10 20:00:12 +0000 UTCI have never heard/seen/read anything that you are mentioning. So I guess it might be your imagination (I mean this not in a bad way). I’ve had multiple times where I thought certain things already happened, but it was all in my dreams or daydreams.
Philippe Bekkers
2023-06-10 11:35:33 +0000 UTCI'm talking about the exact one he accepted in these last few chapters. Like I said I recall reading Iron Prince back in 2021. I am only trying to find out if there was an earlier draft of book 2 that was out around august-november or so in 2021 as there are events I remember reading that take place later in the story than this draft currently is at.
Tavis
2023-06-10 08:27:38 +0000 UTCrei didnt have a sponsorship earlier in the book he was offered it but never accepted it
saynt
2023-06-10 08:20:05 +0000 UTCSooo.... I have a question. Was book 2 completely rewritten at one point? I read book one back in August of 21 and I think I read what was available for book 2 sometime after. I just finished getting caught up on book 2 again and while most of it was very familiar there was a lot of expansion on many aspects and missing many more. For example I recall some details (will not spoil them) of what happens during the systems with some characters we have only briefly met and Rei having already had the sponsorship we see he accepted in these last few chapters. Did I imagine it way back when and just happened to share a brain with the author or was it published in a much much rougher draft back then? Or did the original version of book 1 include that stuff and was edited out in later copies (hence updated out on kindle copies)?
Tavis
2023-06-10 04:01:03 +0000 UTCKlaus, I think we will all be looking forward to your training the team. I’m sure we’ll see Rei’s sister in the next tournament and maybe we’ll get to meet his mother and father so we can hate them more. I’m looking forward to Rei meeting his grandfather and understanding that he was not abandoned by everyone, that someone was looking for him.
chris kizziah
2023-06-10 00:52:14 +0000 UTCSweet!
Nz
2023-06-09 23:30:37 +0000 UTCI don’t know how you did it, but I enjoyed this book even more than book 1!
Lola
2023-06-09 23:05:02 +0000 UTCYea.. I just chalked it up to iscm (had to think ha wanted to call it the system) changing things just because iv learned personally nit picking ruins books for me
Wyatt Slaugh
2023-06-09 22:08:01 +0000 UTCI knew it was going to go this way after he showed up at sectionals! I hope he and aria get along man this is gonna be a crazy first year for all of them!!
Wyatt Slaugh
2023-06-09 22:05:14 +0000 UTCSargent Major is a non commission officer. Jasper called him officer. My army brain go boom
DarthPineapples
2023-06-09 20:57:53 +0000 UTCThere was a previewed Vivilogue paragraph earlier. Guess this puts us at 61 chapters plus epilogue(s). The call to Laurent on his spaceship bumping the last 10 chapters up 1. (?) Though I guess in full book editing some materials may get combined, separated, or recombobulated somehow.
gratch42
2023-06-09 17:30:41 +0000 UTCNot a bad chapter. Would have loved to read the other company's reaction to their failed power play.
independent Thoughts
2023-06-09 15:46:02 +0000 UTCAlso is there going to be an epilogue?
Jacob Clemens
2023-06-09 15:40:57 +0000 UTCIt sucks that book two has to end here, was hoping that we would make it to summer atleast but seeing the pace of the book while reading I knew that wasn't going to happen, still I'm excited for this one anyway. When can we expect book three early access to start?
Jacob Clemens
2023-06-09 15:34:20 +0000 UTCNot... quite. Technically ;) -Bryce
Wraithmarked Creative
2023-06-09 15:10:31 +0000 UTCChapter 60 was the first item on my to do list today. Thanks, it was worth the wait!
Lyn Shirley
2023-06-09 15:08:21 +0000 UTCCool chapter ending and interesting descriptions of Sol/London.
gratch42
2023-06-09 15:06:29 +0000 UTCOh lovely, thank you ….. but big brothers tend to be overprotective of little sisters with boyfriends 🤪
Linda Thompson
2023-06-09 15:06:08 +0000 UTCUgh, I have a feeling I’m gonna want Book 3 soon… this is a beautiful setup you have laid up.
Jeff McClure
2023-06-09 15:00:54 +0000 UTCNice…very very nice
B.m.
2023-06-09 14:52:18 +0000 UTCThere's only one brother. Amina is the oldest sibling and sister. She's on the front having skipped straight past the SCTs
JRatt
2023-06-09 14:49:48 +0000 UTCIs this our wrap up for Book 2? I’m obviously, always, ready for more, but if this is headed off to the editor now….🙃🙃🙃🙃. I REALLY WANT THE AUDIO OF THIS ONE!!!!
Jason Bradford
2023-06-09 14:39:07 +0000 UTCAw what good big brother. Love it.
Cora
2023-06-09 14:16:51 +0000 UTCWas it Kalus that helped their mom during sectionals or was it the other brother? I can't remember.
Kirivina
2023-06-09 14:13:09 +0000 UTC
