EARLY ACCESS: STORMWEAVER 2 - Chapter 23 [ROUGH]
Added 2022-07-29 14:52:10 +0000 UTCSecond half is super rough sorry. Posting as I finish it.
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A few rules & reminders:
- Chapters will be dropping as Bryce completes them. That means anywhere from every 1 to 2 weeks on average, though sometimes waits may be longer.
- Recall that these are rough chapters, with no editing other than a single pass-through as Bryce writes.
- On a similar note, we are not asking for advice or corrections at this time. If Bryce wants feedback, we will certainly reach out, thank you!
That's it, so without further ado... Enjoy!
Comments
WOW, just, WOW!!!
Joanne Hans
2022-08-01 16:00:09 +0000 UTCAnyone else notice that Catcher's first duel of sectionals is against a carbon copy opponent to his first duel of the intraschools? A sword wielding phalanx! Also in abandoned depot....Catcher won that close battle (intraschools) by collapsing the environment down around the opponent as a reminder. edit: any appearance of criticism in my statement here is not that, in fact this might be the best duel of book II (if you include chapter 24).
Scott Hayward
2022-07-30 18:21:12 +0000 UTCReading your stories just makes me happy, even the so-called rough drafts. If you were in a litrpg you'd be one hell of a Bard.
Joanne Hans
2022-07-30 17:46:13 +0000 UTCI think that is part of the fun of the rough drafts. Reading it as presented then trying to figure out the intended words.
TrakN7
2022-07-30 01:24:09 +0000 UTCOooh yeahh, Awesomeness!!!!
George Van Buren
2022-07-29 19:44:41 +0000 UTCAwesome!!!!
Buddy Wooten
2022-07-29 18:15:24 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. I wonder if we'll get to read about Reidon's grandfather's reaction to one of his fights. That would be pretty cool.
2022-07-29 17:31:54 +0000 UTCCliffhanger........sob.....
Joanne Hans
2022-07-29 17:15:03 +0000 UTCPage 8 Is it just me or everyone read this and think Hmmm kinky… “waving as they approached before stepping in ***bending Aria*** once they reached him.”
Shreyam Kumar
2022-07-29 16:37:17 +0000 UTCOh this was so good. Loved the outside perspective on Rei’s fight and Catcher’s fight is going goooooooood!!
Shreyam Kumar
2022-07-29 16:35:19 +0000 UTCNoooooo. Where is the next page.....
Cam Musser
2022-07-29 16:16:21 +0000 UTCThat’s such an evil way to end the chapter, i reckon Catcher can tank it though
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2022-07-29 16:12:59 +0000 UTCNooooooo!!!! Whyyy? 😭😭😭 You're evil lol.
Cora
2022-07-29 16:03:19 +0000 UTC
