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Another Sex Story, Nami dream to become Pirate Queen is being tested by her Captain. This is part 1. Let me know what you think <3. I tried to format it better but idk, I suck at this.

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Of course part 2 may give soo many new unexcepted events which make me even more wait to see it. Thank you for good lecture prix.πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

Kiku waifu

I read this story and OMG, your really touch a sweet spot. Pirate Queen should be loyal to her King what we see there. Without even thinking she gladly join to luffy showing him how much she love him. As always you smoothly introduce us into story creating enjoyable strat. You dont even know how amazing you are in your description. Reading it i literally see in my mind every detail of nami clothes, every change with her body, same as how hard and veiny is capitan dick πŸ˜…. You really pay much attention to describe even little changes in their private places like salty precum slowly leaking. You found good way to use luffy df in creative way. Using his body to bondage and later use G3 while penetrate her was Perfect. Scary to think what may hapoen if you combine G2 and G3 πŸ˜…πŸ₯΅. Im glad luffy filled all her Holes, especially IT looks like he live her mouth, when she looked on him choking and gaged. Belly inflation was peak fiction, i like this theme then imagine her like that make me good πŸ˜…. Ahhh someone must catch that whole semen leaked from her after luffy break her Holes. I am soo excited for next part, becasue of luffy body giving soo much possibility in sex. That new format of reading is too nice, i feel like i read books. Definitely your writing skill rising and every next your story is more and more detailed in description and feeling. I am soo excited for next part and i like how new nami art suit at some point to story with her bondage body 😳.

Kiku waifu

To be honest didn’t notice much of the format change other then it was on β€œpaper” I didn’t mind the old one so whatever Is easier or more popular if go with that one Anyway this is a freaking amazing story. The setup to Nami getting used by Luffy was great and lot only that but her change of attitude once it started getting hot and heavy was nice too. Turned into the perfect slut πŸ’• I love that he throughly used her mouth and throat then switch to her pussy and used his gear 3 to really fill her guts completely maximizing pleasure for both of them πŸ’•I’m hoping we get a part 2 cause I ship Luffy and Nami heavy but that’s just my own fantasy. Plus these stories pair really well with your arts. You know that Nami X Luffy you did a while ago. Where she was on top of him stroking his huge cock while they intimately were looking into each other’s eyes? Well this story reminds me of that artwork. But thank you for allowing us to peer into you mind though these stories. I alway say this to you but you really are a creative genius and it’s such a blessing to get to know you. Have a good and productive rest of your day and weekend and much love. Talk to you soon πŸ’•

Tofu πŸ’¦

oh and the pdf helped with the formatting, didn’t make the reading feel tiring

salamandro

finally got time to give a good read on this. amazing writing on this prix, you’re getting better with each story. I liked how you describe the characters, helps visualize the scene in my head. hopping to see part 2 soon to see how it ends, I know its gonna be a banger

salamandro

Once again a lovely read :D The way you articulate the details are fascinating, I love the way you described what Nami was wearing and how assertive Luffy was with testing Nami's resolve :3 The imagery that came to mind from Luffy breaching her throat was so sexually descriptive, especially when Nami's voice caused vibrational pleasure for Luffy's cock. Nami being the slut she is was incredibly hot, imagining the gags and gurgles from her sexy voice was very arousing. Luffy exploring every inch of her insides was definitely befitting to his character for how adventurous he is :D The visual of Luffy ballooning her belly was intriguing :o!! I think you did a wonderful job, the formatting was more pleasant :) I loved the story, a part 2 would be sweet!

stanebi

This was such a great story, I’ve read it several times now! I love how descriptive you are, I could clearly picture her getting ravaged, and she loved it so much! I always figured Luffy could do fun things like that with his cock, you described it so erotically! I’m very excited to see what happens in part 2 😍

Doshag

I will be reading this soon! Wait for me Prim D: It sounds so hot from the title alone :3

stanebi

will be reading this later, kinda in the middle of the road for work but I know it’s gonna be amazing

salamandro

Hence part 2 :P , its a test, aftercare will come once she becomes pirate queen, she has to pass the test no?

PRIxMAL

I think the format is perfectπŸ‘Œ I can’t get over how lovely you use descriptive language. Right off the bat how you explained luffy’s cock was really impressive. You build the anticipation and foreplay so well in these stories. And I love the more kinky stuff when it’s consensual. Like the ball sucking and a little inflation. It’s quite nice. Your writing is to no surprise, improving even more. Small detail with the stories though, it would be nice to see one in the future with after care of some kind, vs just dropping the other person and leaving sort of thing

Roblovin


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