Merry Christmas Guys, G.N. CH 10
Added 2022-12-24 20:54:47 +0000 UTCTo you guys who's support brightens my life in
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Goddamm that's descriptive, very nice I must say, but I wasn't expecting it to go on so long, overall an excellent chapter. Nice to see where hunter Jaune at nearly 13 stands, 4 more years of training should do wonders... it'll be exciting that's for sure
DocBot200
2023-01-05 08:36:06 +0000 UTCJust to read this chapter I became a patron, let me just say that this is one of the best bloodborne crossovers I've ever read and I love the attention to detail and background.
SkeletalPheonix Games
2022-12-25 16:39:13 +0000 UTCSeason's Greetings!!! Thank you for the feedback; I know exactly what you mean. I very much overpressed the descriptions of the Arc parents. I just got consumed trying to paint a picture of the two that my pacing got away from me. I wanted to try and make them as visible as the other characters who are actually in the source content, but I lost track of my writing. I will have to be observant of my future work and ensure I don’t throw the whole chapter off in such a manner again. Thank you again for your comment and your support. They are greatly appreciated, and I hope both can aid me in becoming a better writer. Merry Christmas.
Ace
2022-12-25 00:28:33 +0000 UTCThose descriptions could have had content, when I first started I thought it would be a couple of lines each but then it just kept going and going. I would have liked to see a resolution but, thanks for the Chapter. Have a Merry Christmas!!!
Laplase
2022-12-24 22:56:39 +0000 UTC
