Complete edit/Rhoun art update
Added 2023-04-22 20:30:13 +0000 UTCSorry its a day late!
https://mega.nz/folder/vjoGGLSY#q5sOyA1VYGCgW8zV7JBLmA
Really really busy here still, but I really want to get back to making things for y'all!
Here is the FULL edited story, from the beginning to the current end at the 2.2 update.
Its a bit shorter, but I think its better and I cut a lot of trim off.
Please let me know what you think!
I'm going to start working on 2.3 again very soon!
May our roads again cross!
-Cryptid
Comments
I love Rhoun so much, he's just the sweetest boi 😭
BarryanaGrande
2023-05-02 10:21:47 +0000 UTCYes no you are correct, that is an old error from when Marruk was from somewhere else, Ill be sure to change that!
Cryptid
2023-04-23 02:01:43 +0000 UTCDo they call equators on any planet a belt? It threw me off because Rhoun talks about the belt on Iyeo.
Tom
2023-04-23 02:00:41 +0000 UTCThe belt is a place on Uriun! Although I can understand if that causes confusion thanks for the note!
Cryptid
2023-04-23 01:14:16 +0000 UTCI didn't really have any complaints before, but the edited stuff is a huge improvement. The only issue I noticed was that Marruk says he's from the belt on day 2, but everyone says he's from Uriun later. Also, unzipped pants+no underwear Rhoun got me actin unwise
Tom
2023-04-23 00:55:06 +0000 UTCThe story is definitely going to be better! Your writing for this story is really one of a kind. Can’t wait to see what you have planned for is in the future. Also good to know are boy Rhoun doesn’t wear underwear. 🤣
Kayko Wolf
2023-04-22 20:47:58 +0000 UTC
