Mermaid Bay test page (very mild nsfw)
Added 2023-10-17 11:47:31 +0000 UTCMornin from here,
Got an update on the comic I mentioned previously!
I've been putting together the first page and wanted to nail down the style going forward. I've been messing with this for about two days because of how picky I am with things like font and colour. The font and text in general I am still unsure of lol
The two main things I want to achieve is clarity and a loose fun visually style that is enjoyable to work with, this first page is maybe slightly more clean and uptight in presentation as we see this salesman beginning the scene.
Let me know what you guys think and if it makes sense what is going on, hopefully I can get the ball rolling with this and make a fun pirate story for all to enjoy.
Also I don't know if it is particularly nsfw, it is just one side nip but thought I should mention
Cheers goys
Comments
the nippeling of 23 has begun
2023-11-09 21:12:50 +0000 UTCThanks, appreciate the feedback! can't believe I missed all these messages on this previous post, first chapter dropping in an hour
2023-11-09 21:11:25 +0000 UTCOh my gosh is that a titty clearly this is worth outrage and cancellation
PocketDiagram22
2023-10-25 12:43:15 +0000 UTCExcited to see comics from you, Mermaid Bay looks like it'll be fun. :D The comic format looks good so far, flows well & seems coherent. Love the perspective shot in the first panel too, nice set up.
Seterra
2023-10-18 01:06:45 +0000 UTClol
Seterra
2023-10-18 00:51:27 +0000 UTCUGHπ€ Iβm so sick of creators always resorting to NSFW ART. Iβm canceling my membership IMMEDIATELY this is a DISGRACE.
Haven
2023-10-17 14:26:13 +0000 UTC
