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Chapter 39 of A Lament of Snow and Magic

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Chapter 39 of A Lament of Snow and Magic

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Very interesting possibilities and aspirations when it comes to identity of “listener” for magic. More truths revealed about curses as well. I am glad Hermione found another friend who is true to herself and others.

Garri Sarkisov

Great chapter, you write very well

Ryan


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