Brightshore Pg15 WIP
Added 2022-04-21 23:18:50 +0000 UTCHello there~ Today the nex peek at Brightshore that coming up~ and another OC cameo that I will teel you about tommorrow with the full page~ I hope you like how things are looking~
Comments
You misspelled the second “jealous”.
Stan Verox
2022-04-22 19:54:36 +0000 UTCAlso, assorted punctuations are missing.
Fahzbehn
2022-04-22 03:40:33 +0000 UTCAs a head's up, Kobi. in panel one: I thought you were too old to be...
Fahzbehn
2022-04-22 03:40:00 +0000 UTCMmm, she can't resist the allure of being appealing to her husband even if it means losing her smarty-smarts and saying bye-bye to modest fashion
BioYuGi
2022-04-21 23:35:04 +0000 UTC
