Manifest Fantasy Chapter 8: Hardale
Added 2024-01-09 01:46:39 +0000 UTCComments
A most satisfying latest chapter to an overall satisfying rewrite to an already intriguing original story concept that you've already begun to improve by leaps and bounds within the constraints of said rewrite. I would be intrigued to see Sera's reaction to a virtual presentation of our world history in general & the history of the "Good Ol' USofA" in particular, should you decide to have her take a tour of both Armstrong Base & Area 51, to reduce her ignorance of the origins of the members of Alpha Team & the attendant technologies they've been using.
David Howe Lee II
2024-01-10 21:57:20 +0000 UTCAnd that how Seraphine Ad Sindis become the first native team member
Nguyen Tien Dat
2024-01-10 16:10:01 +0000 UTCNice chapter.
Blitz
2024-01-09 04:34:09 +0000 UTC
