OTV: Chapter 2: Page 76
Added 2019-05-10 18:14:03 +0000 UTCThey're just full of good ideas, huh?
I want to add some sound effects for the waterfall, but I haven't figured out the best sound to use, haha.
Almost didn't have time to finish this week, heh. Decided to take out that last panel with Frisk. There were already two close ups of them, so I thought it was a little redundant, haha.
Comments
Haha, I do get it. ^^
AbsoluteDream
2019-05-20 07:41:31 +0000 UTCOh, those are good ideas! Unfortunately I didn't have the time to edit the page, but I really appreciate it! That resource is super useful!
AbsoluteDream
2019-05-20 07:41:01 +0000 UTCOoh I had never fully focused on Frisk's hands before! I think once this chapter's complete, I'll have to give the series a re-read :)
Jeeley
2019-05-16 19:08:49 +0000 UTCLooks like our three protagonists have stumbled into the Upside Down! Get it? It's a Stranger Things reference.
Gam3rPro64
2019-05-16 05:44:32 +0000 UTCVery cool, and good edit decision. For the water, maybe something along the lines of "Shshshshhhh" or "Shaaaaaaa" or undulating patterns of "patter""patter""patter", etc. I didn't really find relevant results on this resource, but it COULD be useful with alternative search terms, possibly for other sound-effects in case you ever want ideas: http://www.writtensound.com/index.php?term=water
ZaCloud
2019-05-16 04:09:45 +0000 UTCIt'd be tough to explain how a waterfall suddenly appeared out of nowhere. XD
AbsoluteDream
2019-05-16 03:52:50 +0000 UTCYou know what, I stared at that second panel for a while trying to figure out what was wrong with it. That was probably a good way to tell that I needed to get more sleep, heh. Thank you very much!
AbsoluteDream
2019-05-16 03:47:55 +0000 UTCThank you! It can be difficult to tell what Frisk is thinking sometimes, haha. If you can't tell by their expression, perhaps their hands can give you an idea.
AbsoluteDream
2019-05-16 03:46:25 +0000 UTCHaha, MK's stretching logic is trying to be reassuring, but we can tell it's not working. Good thing Frisk knows how to push forward in a pinch. XD
Myshu
2019-05-13 01:34:50 +0000 UTCheh, "Where the hell did that come from??" ...the underground isn't exactly unstable, having lasted for so long - our kiddos might wanna start thinking a bit before diving forth. D: [Also Papyrus is misspelled in the second panel] I'm with Jeeley on this one, I love how much body language you give the characters. It's obvious even without the dialogue or context that Asriel is anxious and a bit worried, while MK is kinda confused and trying not to get worried himself.
Daishi
2019-05-11 03:34:09 +0000 UTCHaha, I love how MK curls his tail round in the finals panels there. What with Asriel holding his hands, does Frisk have a tell when they're anxious/nervous?
Jeeley
2019-05-10 20:16:15 +0000 UTC
