OTV: Chapter 1: Page 55
Added 2018-12-14 11:18:49 +0000 UTCFigured I should finish this page this week, heh. Don't think I'll have much time to work on it next week. I'm pretty happy with how the mountain turned out!
Here is the final page to chapter 1! It was a little slow, but I wanted to establish some details and info. From here on, it'll get more interesting. ^^
Comments
Yep, it's been two years, things have changed to make it easier for monsters (or even some humans) to go to the mountain if they choose to do so. This is also where the original barrier was. The place where the humans fell through is on the other side, heh. ^^
AbsoluteDream
2018-12-19 14:07:20 +0000 UTCI mean, it's the 1st chapter so I guess things are always going to be a little slower just to set things up, but it flows well :) haha, I just realised MK used the same expression for Toriel as Papyrus did in the last page XD
Jeeley
2018-12-19 13:43:50 +0000 UTCYou know, for a mountain that people aren't supposed to climb up lest they disappear, it looks very... climbable... makes me wonder how it took so long for only eight humans to fall down there in the first place. Or maybe things have changed a lot since the barrier broke...
Tymki-The-Great
2018-12-19 13:40:09 +0000 UTCAw thanks! I'm glad it wasn't too slow then. ^^
AbsoluteDream
2018-12-18 22:05:54 +0000 UTCWhat could possibly go wrong? heh
AbsoluteDream
2018-12-18 22:05:24 +0000 UTCYay! heh, it's a possibility!
AbsoluteDream
2018-12-18 22:04:00 +0000 UTCNice way to end the chapter ^^ After rereading from the start, Chapter 1's pacing flows really well here (especially when jumping between groups), after the slower pace in the prologue
Jeeley
2018-12-15 14:50:02 +0000 UTCHmmm. Leaving us on a foreboding view of the mountain, eh? Toriel looks unsettled. What's your angle, eh? :P
Daishi
2018-12-15 03:57:57 +0000 UTCWOO! And that’s the end of Chapter One, haha! Maybe in Chapter Two, we’ll learn how Asriel got a soul! And how Frisk gets trapped in the other world!
bluberry2600xx
2018-12-14 13:16:51 +0000 UTC
