OTV: Chapter 1: Page 40
Added 2018-09-06 09:23:21 +0000 UTCPoor Asgore. D:
But Alphys is back! Along with Undyne this time. ^^ We'll be back with the Dreemurr family soon enough, though.
Why is Alphys is so tired?
Comments
Haha, I'm glad to hear that! I love Undyne's 'undying' enthusiasm. XD And yes, I like to think it's both! haha
AbsoluteDream
2018-09-14 17:16:23 +0000 UTCUndyne must be a blast to write. You've definitely captured her energy right out of the gate. Also, Alphys must be either so tired or so comfortable in their relationship that she is forever UNFAZED by these outburts. XD
Myshu
2018-09-10 00:50:49 +0000 UTCAh so true! Stay determined ;P
Jeeley
2018-09-06 18:43:58 +0000 UTCYes, Toriel and Asgore's relationship is better at this point, like reluctant friendship. Toriel still has a difficult time looking past what happened. Also, you are correct with Alphys feeling some guilt over Asriel. Thank you so much for the comment!
AbsoluteDream
2018-09-06 18:42:47 +0000 UTCUndyne's awesome. XD
AbsoluteDream
2018-09-06 18:40:02 +0000 UTCFUHUHUHUHU!
AbsoluteDream
2018-09-06 18:39:31 +0000 UTCI feel like I'm missing the reference haha, but it's the 'paper birds' the kids mentioned making with Alphys. ^^
AbsoluteDream
2018-09-06 18:35:44 +0000 UTCYep, there's some progress. ^^
AbsoluteDream
2018-09-06 18:34:00 +0000 UTCThank you! I know, for a moment I thought I made a mistake when I was putting the page number in. XD Close to 50!
AbsoluteDream
2018-09-06 18:33:25 +0000 UTCMan I love Undyne in your style! Can’t believe we’re already on page 40 XD
Jeeley
2018-09-06 17:56:55 +0000 UTCI like that she’s talking to him and is thankful for what he does.
Bla Bla
2018-09-06 17:29:14 +0000 UTCOoh is that a Paper Crane reference? Haha
A_Xenomorph
2018-09-06 15:27:39 +0000 UTCNGAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!
bluberry2600xx
2018-09-06 12:42:26 +0000 UTCPfffh, Undyne's just perfect xD
StrikeYoko
2018-09-06 12:26:35 +0000 UTCOh my. Those neck gills are positively unsettling. Looks like maybe Tori's at least past the "I hate everything you stand for" phase with Asgore; though I wonder if that's an effort to reduce the impact their relationship has on the kids, or a genuine detachment from her old stance on him? There's probably multiple reasons for Alphys' tiredness, but at least some of it probably stems from babysitting Asriel, whom she likely still feels guilty about. Undyne's face at the end is great. Her smile goes from wickedly excited to "only marginally less so" when she notices Alphys has become a tired tail. Nice work!
Daishi
2018-09-06 10:41:36 +0000 UTC
