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OTV: Chapter 1: Page 40

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Poor Asgore. D:

But Alphys is back!  Along with Undyne this time. ^^  We'll be back with the Dreemurr family soon enough, though.

Why is Alphys is so tired?

OTV: Chapter 1: Page 40

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Haha, I'm glad to hear that! I love Undyne's 'undying' enthusiasm. XD And yes, I like to think it's both! haha

AbsoluteDream

Undyne must be a blast to write. You've definitely captured her energy right out of the gate. Also, Alphys must be either so tired or so comfortable in their relationship that she is forever UNFAZED by these outburts. XD

Myshu

Ah so true! Stay determined ;P

Jeeley

Yes, Toriel and Asgore's relationship is better at this point, like reluctant friendship. Toriel still has a difficult time looking past what happened. Also, you are correct with Alphys feeling some guilt over Asriel. Thank you so much for the comment!

AbsoluteDream

Undyne's awesome. XD

AbsoluteDream

FUHUHUHUHU!

AbsoluteDream

I feel like I'm missing the reference haha, but it's the 'paper birds' the kids mentioned making with Alphys. ^^

AbsoluteDream

Yep, there's some progress. ^^

AbsoluteDream

Thank you! I know, for a moment I thought I made a mistake when I was putting the page number in. XD Close to 50!

AbsoluteDream

Man I love Undyne in your style! Can’t believe we’re already on page 40 XD

Jeeley

I like that she’s talking to him and is thankful for what he does.

Bla Bla

Ooh is that a Paper Crane reference? Haha

A_Xenomorph

NGAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!

bluberry2600xx

Pfffh, Undyne's just perfect xD

StrikeYoko

Oh my. Those neck gills are positively unsettling. Looks like maybe Tori's at least past the "I hate everything you stand for" phase with Asgore; though I wonder if that's an effort to reduce the impact their relationship has on the kids, or a genuine detachment from her old stance on him? There's probably multiple reasons for Alphys' tiredness, but at least some of it probably stems from babysitting Asriel, whom she likely still feels guilty about. Undyne's face at the end is great. Her smile goes from wickedly excited to "only marginally less so" when she notices Alphys has become a tired tail. Nice work!

Daishi


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