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OTV: Chapter 1: Page 36

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A page that is literally all jokes.  I'm sorry, but I had to. ^^;

I promise things will get more interesting! XD  

Next page might take some time to finish, only because I need to catch up on thumbnails, heh.

I am enjoying these long pages though!


I might tweak the backgrounds/shading of these pages later.

OTV: Chapter 1: Page 36

Comments

I could see it! but I don't think he's as good at it. He tries, and it comes off as well-meaning, but my hc is frisk having the wits about them to make the right statement.

Daishi

Haha, the characters are fun to work with. I love their personalities. XD I like to think that Asriel likes bad jokes, like his mom, heh.

AbsoluteDream

Azzy snickering at his own joke gives me life. Seriously, he's entirely too cute. Frisk with the swift jab from left field, man, where'd that come from haha. I get the feeling MK tends to err on the side of "gives it his best, but still needs help".

Daishi

D'aw, thank you so much!

AbsoluteDream

I'm so glad Casper puts so much time and effort into his work. And plus it raises anticipation for the next page! OWO

bluberry2600xx

Haha, oh yes, Sans doesn't take anything seriously. XD

AbsoluteDream

*papyrus screams internally* XD

bluberry2600xx

Haha, glad it got a laugh! XD

AbsoluteDream

How do you organize a space party? You "Planet" hehe

AbsoluteDream

Ahahaha, Frisk with the uppercut. That kid's got a mean streak and I love it--good thing Sans can appreciate it, too. XD

Myshu

that last joke made me laugh way more than it should've oh my go

Cent

Yeah, I thought so :D

StrikeYoko

Why doesn't the astronaut have a wife? he needs space

bluberry2600xx

Haha, thanks! Frisk doesn't talk much, but will if they need to. ^^ And I'm happy to hear you like the long pages too!

AbsoluteDream

Well I suppose it should wrap up how Frisk saved Azzy at the end, after all they both were on the cover XD

bluberry2600xx

Haha, he gets it from his mom. XD

AbsoluteDream

Haha, glad to hear that! XD Chapter 1 will mainly be about what their lives are like on the surface, but by the end, it will be more focused on Asriel. Other characters will appear, such as Papyrus, Undyne, Alphys, Toriel, and Asgore. ^^

AbsoluteDream

No problem! ^^

AbsoluteDream

Sans’ expression for “but I heard that one” is golden XD And it’s good to see an AU where Frisk talks. And yh I agree now I think one long page is better than 2 short pages a week :)

Jeeley

Noaw cute Azzy boi knows bad jokes too >w

StrikeYoko

These actually made me laugh! XD So what will Chapter 1 be about?

bluberry2600xx

Okay. Thanks!

Tierra Mackey

Haha. XD Well, I mostly try to give big moments big panels, and I try to vary the shots (close up, medium shot, long shot, etc). I'm not an expert at it though, so I'm still experimenting. ^^ Drawing thumbnails of the pages first help explore different ideas without committing to too much detail, heh. Hope this helps a little!

AbsoluteDream

I'm happy to hear that, me too. XD

AbsoluteDream

Pffffft! Frisk is savage!🤣🤣🤣 Do you have any tips on making comics? Like when to make the panels big or small?

Tierra Mackey

Honestly I love hanging on to these moments haha.

A_Xenomorph


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