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Added 2018-07-29 19:20:26 +0000 UTCTheir friendship may not have started off too great, but over time they begin to trust each other more.
So the whole idea for this prologue came from some dialogue in the true ending, where Alphys and Sans spoke to each other, but Papyrus was surprised that they even knew each other. Alphys seemed nervous, but Sans jumped in saying "doesn't everybody?" So this is my interpretation of how and why they met.
And that's the prologue! Thank you guys for supporting this project and leaving awesome comments.
Next is Chapter one, "A Second Chance".
Comments
Thank you very much! I'm happy you like the idea as well! ^^ The same thought crossed my mind too for those very reasons, haha. XD
AbsoluteDream
2018-08-03 06:14:48 +0000 UTCAmazing start! I love how you addressed part of the game that so few touch on. Definitely a plausible origin to their interactions. That, and other dialogue with Sans not ruling out there being dogs in the "Labradory", and him for some reason having the dog food in his room at one point. Loving this! Poor Alphyyyy, glad he's giving her some comfort.
ZaCloud
2018-08-02 04:07:58 +0000 UTCThank you! I'm a bit surprised too. XD
AbsoluteDream
2018-07-31 17:44:50 +0000 UTCHey, thank you so much! I'm happy you like the idea of their meeting! ^^
AbsoluteDream
2018-07-31 17:44:21 +0000 UTCThank you!
AbsoluteDream
2018-07-31 17:43:28 +0000 UTCI'd choose comfort her. ^^
AbsoluteDream
2018-07-31 17:43:18 +0000 UTCThank you so much! :'D
AbsoluteDream
2018-07-31 17:42:57 +0000 UTCAhh congrats on finished the prologue man! XD I’m surprised/amazed you managed to keep to that huge goal of 3 pages a week :P
Jeeley
2018-07-30 07:30:15 +0000 UTCYeah, this all makes sense. It was surprising that Alphys seemed to want to keep the origin of their friendship secret, especially when she's willing to visit Undyne (and even bring Mettaton along), unless there was something to the start of them knowing each other that really upset her... aand the big options there are related to Royal Science. I'm liking it :)
Swirl
2018-07-29 21:19:39 +0000 UTCGreat Prologue! I'm excited how it will connect with the main story OwO
StrikeYoko
2018-07-29 20:36:35 +0000 UTC-Comfort Her -Do Not
A_Xenomorph
2018-07-29 20:04:15 +0000 UTCOwO That WAS AWESOME! HOW WILL WE EVER KNOW WHAT SANS TOLD ALPHYS? FIND OUT IN CHAPTER 1?! A STRONG ENDING AND CLIFFHANGER. IT JUST MAKES IT SO I CANNOT WAIT FOR CHAPTER 1!
bluberry2600xx
2018-07-29 19:22:55 +0000 UTC
