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[NOTE] The last drawing is edited thanks to your feedback

I've read the last two comments I've received, specially from Guillermo, who asked for this. Both comments said that Pinkie's nipple feels really weird and uncomfortable. This morning I edited it and it should look more appealing than before. I thought it would take me one hour, but it actually took me less than 15 minutes.

The reason why I made Pinkie's nipple so long and so big was because I saw it on a doujinshi from the Internet a couple of weeks ago. I wanted to draw that and then I learned that just because it looked great by another artist doesn't mean it should look great by me.

I don't know what I was thinking back then and I deserve every single criticism by that detail. I actually like reading constructive criticisms like those I've received last night because it helps me not to act like doctor Frankenstein. I want to draw girls that appeals to some people and to have fun with that. But you have spoken and you're right.

I hope you like this edit, and please tell me what I should get better. Your feedback is important for me. ;)

Welp, back to work.

Love,
RT

[NOTE] The last drawing is edited thanks to your feedback

Comments

No worries man; I'm glad you're so chill about receiving criticisms. A lot of artists lack this fundamental trait. I see where something like that could figure in a doujinshi, but it didn't translate well into your style. That's fine; not all experiments will result in success. That shouldn't dissuade you from trying new things, though, as long as you are open to criticism so you can tell what works and what doesn't. You clearly are open minded, so delving into that could be beneficial for your art in the long term. After all, a mistake is just that, a mistake, and it can be corrected and learnt from. As for this edit, it looks fantastic now. Well done. Keep up the amazing work! You've got the talent and the mindset to become one of the greats. And even if you don't, at least be comforted in the thought that you have a very loyal audience.


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