MLP - Twilight is in bliss (NSFW WIP)
Added 2017-09-17 20:35:36 +0000 UTCThis is a request from Guillermo González, one of the patrons.
Sometimes I draw Pinkie with big nipples (particularly orbed), but this time I wanted to make something different for her. She has totally erect nipples and, like one drawing I've made the last month, Pinkie's nipples are bigger than Twilight's little breasts. Sometimes I imagine a comic where Pinkie Pie and Celestia have met years ago. Pinkie would look very different and details such as big breasts, wide hips and large nipples are made by Celestia with magic or some shit like that.
Just for shits and giggles. :P
I wanted to include some other details such as huge dildos and other toys, but I think two busty women are enough to satisfy Twilight. I'm still not sure if you like the idea.
I don't know if I said it, but I'm not good at writing. I've written the dialogue as short as I wanted, but I'd like to know what other words you would prefer. The basic idea is: Pinkie and Celestia are arguing about who made Twilight cum the most. I think you can write something better than this, and I can rewrite what is written in the drawing in 5 minutes.
This drawing will have another version for you, not for DeviantArt.
Details I'll add:
-Shadows
-Brightness
-Pussy juice :P
-Sweat (the bed has to be wet by that)
-Little stars for Celestia's hair
-Some hearts
-Some steam for Twilight's breath
-Color composition for the final result
Love,
RT
Comments
Ok, the patrons have spoken and they are right. I'll change it for a more appealing look for Pinkie. I actually didn't know why I thought this was a good idea.
2017-09-17 23:06:30 +0000 UTCWhile I do love the stream of literal milk coming out of Twilight's mouth, I've gotta say Pinkie's nipple doesn't look very appealing. Now, I respect that you want to try something different; that's a very smart idea on itself. But I fear this time it's been a misstep. I do not oppose to the idea of Pinkie's nipples being erect, and I love how cartoonisly big your characters' proportions are, but you've always managed to maintain a balance between sexy and exaggerated. This time I'm afraid you've fallen into exaggerated. Now, I assume that the WIPs you present to us are not only to give us a peek into what's coming, but also to allow your viewers to give you their first impression. And for the first time my impression here is not positive, at least, regarding that detail. I am sure that you can portray Pinkie's nipples as stiff, erected and hard without them looking like that. And I encourage you to try and fix it. But that's just my opinion; as the artist you are who gets the last word and who decides what to do with his art. I am just an observer, and those have been my observations. Keep up the great work and never stop improving.
2017-09-17 21:34:40 +0000 UTCLOL that nipple's a little too big for me personally
Josh
2017-09-17 21:03:39 +0000 UTC
