Abby Chapters!
Added 2021-02-22 07:07:33 +0000 UTCIf you read the chapters I posted for Abby's backstory I implore you to give me whatever feedback you can on them! I don't write much and I know I have a lot of room for improvement in that field, so any thoughts you have would be greatly appreciated!
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Thank you! I totally get where you're coming from, but I want her to get pretty dang big in the course of this story but I don't really want to chronicle like 15-20 years of gaining. I think I plan to have the WHOLE story take about 8 years? And she gets up to about 1300-1500 pounds, so she gains about 150 pounds a year. Pretty dang fast, but it makes it easier to write, and heaven knows I need that. I'm glad you enjoyed it so far! Its gonna go some exciting places, so I hope ya stick around for it!
2021-02-23 01:16:46 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed both of the stories. In general I'm not a super huge fan of speedy gains (her gain of 70 lbs in one semester is insane) but I enjoyed how you executed it and gave us great details about it!
Spectral Spider
2021-02-22 17:52:22 +0000 UTC
