Commission for a fellow artist(Suriano)
Added 2020-07-03 10:24:10 +0000 UTCThis made me happy, I got commission from an artist I follow! Not sure if he likes it yet but screw it imma post it.
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Thanks for the feedback. To try and answer your questions: 1. The hand holding the “experimental liquid” I was trying to show it glowing, failed at it as I’m still learning how to do that, so that would explain the difference in shading for the hands. 2. I should have measured the lines better so that one is my fault. 3. No it wasn’t measuring lines, I was experimenting with a different way to shade, I think it looks off to but it also has a strange flair that inspires me to try it again. I do enjoy comments like these as it can only help me as an artist so thank you for all the feedback you’re providing.
Bear213
2020-07-03 11:27:39 +0000 UTClooks good ^^. shading has also gotten better. I only have three issues at the moment and I apologise in advance for possibly sounding cold. 1. why is their left hand a lighter shade than the rest of the body, it seems a bit unnatural to me. 2. the beaker they're holding looks a bit mis-formed. the bottom seems vertical while the tube part is diagonally suggesting that the beaker would look weird if placed on a table and in real life. and finally 3. what are the black lines on the beaker? I am certain it is not shading and if it is meant for measuring it is a bit messy, sorry. drawing measuring lines are hard because the beaker is round and keeping up with the shape would be hard, so I am impressed that you tried to go for this detail.
ObservantLeo
2020-07-03 11:23:05 +0000 UTC
