Is this melody & rhythm too confusing? [Song sneak peek]
Added 2018-12-04 09:41:40 +0000 UTCHere's a melody idea for a new original song I'm working on (hopefully for this week). I'm delaying the keyboard one because it's really different from the channel is used to (in a good way) and I want to do it right.
Anyway, let me know if you think the rhythm/lead may be too confusing or if it's fine. I hope you guys enjoy it! This is a rough sketch recording, so all of this will be re-recorded tomorrow (some parts might be off-tempo at the start as a result). There is a TWIST to the melody, which is one reason why I'd like to make it work (but if it can't, it can't). I included a teaser for the twist below, but if you would like to be ""surprised"" with everyone else (if I use it), you may refrain.
I hope you enjoy!
