Neighborhood Bull Ch. 12 - WIP
Added 2022-05-27 02:15:11 +0000 UTCThe Bull takes control.
Didn't have this done for that last chunk, but I wound up with a thing cancelled due to weather and had time to finish up the chapter. It's the big payoff chapter following up from Evan's POV right after he's done with Rose. Happy Reading!
Comments
This chapter left me wanting more Evan's POV in the other chapters; I like the tension with The Bull and Evan's personas. Some part of me would love to have it be a fight between The Bull an The Lawyer with them finding a way to break the mold somehow and have the Lawyer emerge from the fog every now and the but reverting to Himbo if The Bull goes too long being ignored and not sated.
Red Panda Seven
2022-05-27 05:55:05 +0000 UTCOoo, I like what that final line is implying as to what happens next. Great update!
Avery Walters
2022-05-27 03:12:08 +0000 UTC