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Comic UPDATED!

Added 2016-03-21 08:15:40 +0000 UTC

Hi everyone!

I've been reading everyone's feedback on the latest comic, and while many of you enjoyed it, quite a few weren't getting it so I wanted to see how the joke could be made clearer (without taking away any of the subtlety).

I realized that the tests needed more attention considering how crucial they are to the punchline. So I've added a new panel (panel 2), updated the tests in the other panels, a pen tweak in panel 1, and also added papers to the blue alien's hands at the bottom.

I think the comic is a lot stronger now! What do you think? (PLS SAY IT'S BETTER)

Thanks for all your comments!

Gregor

P.S. - I've updated the comic on the site, but if you are still seeing the old comic you may need to hit refresh!

P.P.S. - If you didn't see the original version, I will be including it (among with the even earlier alt sketch versions (which are WAY more confusing looking back now)) for the $4+ tier patrons later!