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Let's talk about the ideas for Next Episode(s):

Hi! Mbah is here. Before I jump to main topic, I just wanna say for 7 my patrons A HUGE THANKS for supporting this humble Patreon Page:

- Malo Brechard

- Brendan

- K-Box

- John Smith

- TSSMfan3

- stephen

- Tracy Scops

I appreciate your support to my Patreon page even I just barely started, with just small effort for creating a simple fan comic for NSFW Spider-Man. Let's talk about it.

I was fascinated by variety of comics made by fans, from typical AU and SFW to extremely comics involving plots such as gore and vore, which is not my thing. But this sparks my interest to create my version of NSFW comic, especially for Spider-Man. And here I am, finally drawing my version of NSFW comic of Spider-Man. It ain't much, but I'm glad for my story finally materialized into something else instead just stuck in my mind. Also, since Episode Transparent is reaching the final act, so let's talk about this comic and what will happen after this Episode.

The reason it's called Episode Transparent is because Peter still "blank" from his last adventure, before The Snap/Decimation. Colors here represent the female characters who interact to him, a coloring agent for giving Peter his True Colors from each story arc. Three color code will combine into a single story, giving "color tone/palette" for influencing his decision to society after his five years absence.

Once Episode Transparent is over, the next story arc will focus on how Peter joins forces with Jessica Drew to take down Norman Osborn in three episodes. I can say 70% of story is ready, with 30% for creativity space. These Episodes, I called RGB (Yes, Three Episodes are Red, Green and Blue). I have low expectation, but If RGB was success, there are more stories like CMY, or many colors/palettes yet to come.  I divided three color episodes to create a story arc, so Red-Green-Blue, Cyan-Magenta-Yellow, and so on.

Again, back to Episode Transparent. The reason I choose NOT to use many sexual scenes here because I wanna give Peter's understanding about current situation and what he will face in this Episode will affect future. Instead making him like rabbit in heat at beginning, I wanna let him knows how five years has drastically changed, and gives a plot which more interesting and gain your attention. For example, during those five years, the remaining villains who survived from The Snap instead being "grateful", perhaps they will saw this opportunity for gaining power and influence. Episode Transparent is a hard slap for him, a reality check after five years with no memories, with his last memory unfortunately was a sad one (MJ cried calling his name as him turned into dust). I also use this Episode as place to give many potential story starters for future. (Remember the prostitute? She will be important later on another story arc or color palettes. Or you thought I just drew some  random cab driver?)

On next Episode, it will focus on Mary Jane. Episode Red will tell story about what she had been through to those five years, and how she reacts to Peter's comeback. It's still on my drafts, involving many scenarios about how Peter will return to her (or how she will return to him, you know, by the plot).

The reason I never told MJ's situation in Episode Transparent (simply stated by Jessica Drew, yet no explanation), because the ideas for story. Yes, plural. I can't decide yet for MJ's fate during Episode Red, she might have 5 years of suffering(s), moved on or even already engaged. This provides wide opportunities for exploring how Peter to reuniting with her, with traditional "NSFW porn-what-plot" or 50% plot and 50% sexual scenes. Like I stated above, 70% of RGB plot is pretty solid, but again I can tweak it for some parts without changing course of main objective, which taking down Norman. Surprisingly, Episode Green and Blue have better fixed plot than Episode Red, I guess because Episode Red was the first story I thought during brainstorming, even before Episode Transparent. I poured so many ideas which still stand out instead picked one  as "The Sacred Timeline".

So far, my ideas for Episode Red of MJ's fate during her last five years are:

These five ideas stand out of many ideas that I had conjured on my twisted mind (duh). Many ideas that crossed during brainstorming, I recycled them as another plot for different Palettes, which nothing goes wasted.

Personally I had chosen the ideas for Episode Red, but I want to hear your thought about these ideas. Or perhaps you had another scenario? Let me know by comment below, because even if it might not fit for final draft, I can use it for backbone for another Episodes.

I also had this idea for giving poll for giving ideas or choices every Episode (like typical video games' choices, giving critical direction to plot) for another tier, but let's save it for future.

Again, Thank You for all of your support, and I am gladly to hear your ideas and comment for this comic.


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