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What If Bardock's Family Escaped? - EARLY ACCESS

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All I am trying to do is give some advice. Not start an argument. You have two different characters which both have different characteristics. It could get stale in the future if you basically have 2 of the same exact characters act the same way. Does not matter their age. Look at Mario and luigi as example. They handle the same situations but differently. Again keep up the good work. I do enjoy your stories. Just trying to help.

He's like 9, why would he just sit around bored when there is something to do outside with his brother, escpecially considering he has few if any alternatives? Saiyan or not its not within character for any outgoing child to not wanna play and enjoy freetime when you have it.

Devin Andrews

Based on raditz as a character especially a kid. Raditiz would not be the one to just explore especially at night. Now if Kakarot ran off and raditz was chasing after him knowing about the possibility of the moon. That just fits his character at that age. Keep up the great stories though. Raditz has always been a more cautious character.


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