Chapter 1068 - Only A Few Loose Ends Left
Added 2025-02-05 12:15:06 +0000 UTCIn the end, Jake’s trip to the Holy Church’s planet didn’t conclude as he’d expected. He had fully assumed it would result in Jake and his faction having an all-out war with the stubborn Church, and he was genuinely relieved it hadn’t gone that far, as it would just have been so damn pointless.
That was also why Jake cut Jacob some slack in this entire scenario. He was still annoyed at his old boss, but it was hard being angry at someone who genuinely just wanted to do what he thought was best for others. With how utterly fucked up the internal politics of the Holy Church were, his life definitely couldn’t be easy either, and honestly... things had kind of turned out pretty okay. And Jake had to give Jacob at least some credit for the ending turning out acceptable despite how fucked the middle had been.
The Holy Church would retreat from the Milky Way Galaxy peacefully. All their elites were slain, and Jake even came out of it looking merciful and reasonable after having not gone all out despite finding himself ambushed by a corrupt head priest and False God.
Miranda would definitely also be happy with the result, and even Carmen had gotten some benefits from killing such a powerful False God, and, despite how much she countered it, it was still a massive feat. All in all, Jake returned to Earth pretty satisfied, even doing so through the capital’s teleportation circle in full view of every random Holy Church citizen watching.
Jacob naturally ensured the set dressing was proper, making it evident that Jake was the winning party and that even if the Holy Church had lost, they still maintained some of their dignity. More than that, though, it was all to show everyone that the Holy Church and Chosen of the Malefic Viper could still be diplomatic despite everything.
Returning to Earth, Jake couldn’t help but let out a massive sigh as he looked at Carmen, who had returned with him. “Could you imagine having to navigate that much political bullshit all the time?”
“Pretty sure I would end up beating a few people to death within a week,” Carmen fully concurred. “But... I guess it’s kind of necessary at times? Even Valdemar and Valhal have Gudrun, and every single large faction has a bunch of political folk walking around. Shit, you have Miranda, and I got Sven and Bobby, who are pretty good at handling all the scheming and politicking.”
“True,” Jake nodded with a sigh as he considered it a bit more. “But having a faction that’s good at politics doesn’t really matter if you aren’t powerful enough. You need that power as a base requirement to even be allowed at the big boy table.”
“You also need power to have a figurehead,” Carmen pointed out. “The average person doesn’t really respect those so-called political masterminds. It’s too damn abstract compared to someone truly powerful, and when shit really goes down, it’s the one holding the biggest stick who shows up to solve everything. Barely anyone respects and fears the Malefic Viper for being a good schemer and a really smart guy... they remember him for wiping out a tenth of a universe. Everyone, even a child, can understand why the Viper is worthy of his notoriety when they see the wasteland he created that still persists to this day.”
“Maybe it’s a lot simpler than we think. People simply don’t respect political masterminds because no one respects politicians,” Jake grinned.
“They totally do!” Carmen countered, acting offended. “They trust the good and honest kind.”
Jake and Carmen locked eyes before both laughing at the notion, Jake shaking his head. “Yeah, sure, because those unicorns tend to really climb that hierarchical ladder. Shit, even Jacob, who has a Path all about just helping people, has to do at least some scheming to have any influence. If he didn’t, he would just be used and manipulated by others... something I feel like he kind of still is half the time.”
“Some things don’t change no matter what,” Carmen agreed. “It’s so dumb. We have fucking dragons now, and people still care about how someone holds a goddamn teacup or if they remember to use the right titles to call others.”
“It is what it is,” Jake sighed again as the two of them teleported one more time, returning to Haven.
Jacob had stayed back with the Holy Church to properly solidify his newfound leadership position while also fully selling the story that the head priest was a traitor and all that other bullshit. He likely wouldn’t even be meeting Miranda, but instead, they would communicate using magic to hammer out all the details surrounding the Holy Church’s total retreat.
Upon reaching Haven, Carmen went back to Jake’s lodge while Jake headed off to meet Miranda. However, to his surprise, he didn’t find her back in her office, and after asking around, he learned she was at Haven’s prison.
Jake didn’t know Haven had a prison.
In his defense, it was definitely a new addition, and while Jake could scan everything using Pulse of Perception, that didn’t mean he fully understood the function of every building. Moreover, the prison wasn’t actually in Haven but a good distance away, likely in case any problems arose there.
While Jake was at Miranda’s office, he used one of Arnold’s walkie-talkies and got in contact with her. She gave him a super brief explanation of the reason she was at the prison and that King Iludar had launched an ambush while Jake was on the Holy Church’s planet. At first, he was a bit worried but was quickly informed the situation had been entirely under control from the beginning and that it had effectively been a trap, the hunter being the hunted from the get-go.
She didn’t elaborate more but just told him to meet her at the prison for them to talk. Jake agreed and headed out, and after a few minutes of flying and using One Step later, he reached the prison. The entire thing just looked like a large cube slapped down in the middle of nothing. It only had one entrance, and at it, Lillian stood waiting for his arrival.
Jake landed while still looking at the cube, wondering where the hell it had even come from. Lillian noticed his gaze and shook her head. “Arnold made it.”
“Arnold?” Jake questioned. “When did he have time to make a damn prison? Why did he make a prison?”
“He calls it a containment cube, and from his explanation, it was originally done in case he needed to trap living entities for testing purposes. Apparently, analyzing Sandy’s natural abilities inspired him, and he hopes to find other creatures he can take inspiration from,” Lillian answered.
“That somehow makes a lot of sense,” Jake muttered, not even bothering to figure out when he’d even found time to build the over a hundred meters tall and wide cube. “Why is it used as a prison now, though?”
“Because he has yet to need it himself, and Miranda offered to rent it in return for providing him with extra funds,” Lillian answered, the reason once again pretty logical.
Walking into and through the prison cube, Jake found the insides very basic. Everything was made of metal, and several formations were engraved into the structure everywhere. He also spotted several spider-like drones crawling around, maintaining and even engraving new runes here and there, giving Jake his answer to how Arnold had found time to construct the cube anyway.
He hadn’t... he had just reached a level by now where he could have his creations create more stuff. Scary implications with that one, but oh well.
With his sphere, he could already see Miranda in a room talking with some guy in what looked like a barebones meeting room where she’d brought all the furniture herself. Nearly the entire cube was filled with pretty small “cells” created with thick metal walls on every side beside the front, which Jake suspected to be some kind of glass.
The way to keep prisoners, well, imprisoned, was the classic method Jake had read about before. Formations were placed in every cell that drained the stamina and mana of those within, making them incredibly weak. It wasn’t pleasant, but it also wasn’t the worst.
One huge advantage compared to regular prisons in the old world was the existence of the meditate skill. The First Sage had really done the multiverse’s prison population a solid with that one, as it allowed them to have time pass seamlessly.
Jake didn’t really spend more time analyzing the prison besides that, but he did notice Lillian purposefully leading him through where many of the prisoners were held. On the way, she explained they were some of the elites brought by Iludar, and it didn’t require one to be a political mastermind to understand that Lillian wanted them to all know that Jake was now also there.
Entering the barebones meeting room with Miranda in it, he found her sitting across from an elf Jake didn’t recognize, but by the look the guy gave him, Jake assumed it had been one of Iludar’s soldiers.
“Ah, Lord Thayne, It’s good to see you back,” Miranda said with a smile. “How did your meeting with the Holy Church go?”
Jake instantly understood the assignment as he shrugged. “Slightly better than expected. Things did get a bit out of hand when a traitor amongst them summoned the False God that had destroyed several planets during the event alongside a few thousand of his elites. It took a bit to get the situation back under control, but after they were dead, I managed to reach a satisfactory agreement with the Church. They have officially surrendered unconditionally, and I expect you to handle the details.”
“I see,” Miranda smiled, her facial expression not changing at all besides that. “Mr. Jiulpoar, if you would excuse us for a moment, I will need to briefly discuss this with Lord Thayne.”
The man just nodded, looking deeply in thought as he was led away, now having even more to think about after knowing that even the Holy Church had been fully defeated. Iludar and his men attacked because Jake was gone from Earth, so they clearly knew he had gone to meet the Holy Church so just the mere fact he was back and seemingly unharmed for the most part had to mean things had gone his way.
Once the guy was out of the room, Miranda sighed and leaned back. “Just to make sure, did you exaggerate?”
“Nope, not at all,” Jake said, summoning his own chair. “I did lie, though. About the traitor part, that is.”
Jake proceeded to explain what had gone down on the Holy Church’s planet, gladly making use of the soundproofing of the meeting room. Miranda was surprised at quite a few points but didn’t seem overly shocked when Jake explained what had happened after the fight and the explanation Jacob had cooked up to explain everything.
“I didn’t expect them to have the Desolate Child of Loss... but in some ways, it puts my mind at ease knowing they did. Now we at least know for sure the False God is dead and gone and not some unknown potential threat that could reappear at an inopportune time,” Miranda said after thinking a bit. “I’m also glad to hear you found the fragment of the Fallen King... hopefully it can lead to something.”
“Thoughts on Jacob and what he said?
“I’m not surprised. Say, did the Augur not mention Kindroth at all?” Miranda asked, looking a bit perplexed.
“No?” Jake asked, confused. “Should he have?”
“I would say he should,” Miranda sighed. “He has been working with Jacob all along. To clarify, he isn’t part of the Holy Church, and the Great Bright One isn’t part of the Holy Pantheon either, but they are close allies of the Church. I’m still trying to figure out how exactly we’re going to deal with Kindroth. Still, it’s unquestionable he’s helped us out during this entire system event. He was also the one who tipped me off about Iludar’s ambush and helped set it up to eliminate this hidden threat.”
“Great, just great... I did always think there was something pretty shady about him, so I can’t say I’m overly surprised. I am a bit disappointed, though,” Jake sighed. He had heard that the Great Bright One had positive relations with the Church before, but he hadn’t expected them to outright work together behind the scenes. “What are your current thoughts on handling him and his planet?”
“Before this, I didn’t really have any set plans, but now... I feel like the best approach would be to not do anything but just continue as normal,” Miranda said. “Even with the Holy Church gone from the galaxy, we will no doubt have to deal with them again in the future. Especially with them apparently having quite a presence in the closest galaxy. While we can try to entirely isolate ourselves from them, I don’t see that as realistic, and my guess is that both the Augur and Kindroth also realize this. At least, I suspect that’s part of the reason they chose to work together in this fashion, to have a backup should the Holy Church be thrown out of the galaxy.”
While Jake wasn’t the fastest at political stuff, he did realize what Miranda was getting at pretty quickly. “Kindroth and his planet can function as a compromise. As they’re not actually part of the Church, having them here doesn’t violate their effective ban from the galaxy, yet at the same time, it allows the Church to retain some connection the the Milky Way. We do need to make sure the benefits aren’t all one-sided, though.”
“Leave that to me,” Miranda said with a proud smile that Jake had seen through what she was thinking. “But one headache at a time. For now, I need to deal with all the elite soldiers left by Iludar.”
“What’s the current plan?” Jake asked.
Miranda sighed and leaned forward. “Right now, they have nothing. Iludar is dead, the Holy Church has surrendered, and they have no allies left besides each other. What’s more, Iludar even tried to just leave them all behind to save his own skin. While I’m not saying they will be a big boon or anything to have on our side, I do believe there are some benefits to expanding our fighting force. Successfully integrating them will also reinforce your actions today that even if we are a faction led by the Chosen of the Malefic Viper, we can still be reasonable and merciful.”
“If you think they can be successfully assimilated, go for it,” Jake shrugged, not really having a big opinion. She had been the one getting ambushed, not him.
“I do, but it’ll take some convincing, and I will have every person vetted individually, hence why we’re keeping them here for now. Hopefully, we’ll be done within a few days,” Miranda said. “Could end up being a little longer, though. The negotiations with the Holy Church may drag things out more than I would like. By the way, did the Augur mention anything about how they plan to compensate us?”
“Compensate?” Jake asked before realizing. “Oh... yeah, I didn’t think about that at all.”
“It’s only right to expect some kind of war compensation from a defeated force. Especially when that defeated force is the largest faction in the entire multiverse, and with so much attention on the Milky Way, they need to come out of this looking as good as possible... so I reckon I can get quite a bit out of them,” Miranda said, truly looking in that moment like the evil witch from the Order of the Malefic Viper so many believed she was.
“And that’s why I said you would handle all the details,” Jake gave her a thumbs-up.
The two of them were quiet for a while before Miranda smiled. “It’s finally all over, huh? Only a few loose ends left to tie up.”
“For now, at least,” Jake nodded. “But there’s still a lot to do. We need to stabilize the galaxy as much as possible before the system event ends and the universe opens up more than it currently is. I also suspect it will be more open than it was before the event began... likely even allowing some of those from across the multiverse to come here.”
Miranda nodded solemnly. “Yeah, I’ll make sure we’ll be as ready as we can. You also do your part. Keep being the big scary Chosen of the Malefic Viper that no one dares mess with.”
“I’ll do my best,” Jake grinned before getting up. “I guess I’ll get to just that. See you, and good luck.”
“Take care,” Miranda nodded as Jake headed out of prison and back toward the lodge... where he instantly spotted two of the few people in the multiverse who dared mess with him. Both of them committing a horrendous crime.
Because not only had Carmen stolen more of Jake’s bananas... she had even gone as far as to rope Sylphie into being her partner in crime.
Comments
Tftc
Dave
2025-03-22 11:26:24 +0000 UTCI'm catching up to the chapters too quickly but can't stop lol. TYFTC
Trumangolorian
2025-03-01 14:21:40 +0000 UTCAs of now I see no chance of that happening. Jake likes the strong and independent kind and while Meira has come a long way she’s still way too meek. Also i think Meira isn’t the casual type but more all or nothing and with Jake not the type for a harem I don’t see her holding her own against the competition
Phil Ritter
2025-02-15 17:36:29 +0000 UTCReeeeeeeeeeeee! Sylphie yay. Reeeeeeeeeeee!!! Tyftc
Chloe
2025-02-07 02:44:12 +0000 UTCHe has a god girlfriend that can help him with archery on the ropes. Why would he go for his freed slave. Meira would just try to hold him back if they became a thing.
Issei Hyoudou
2025-02-06 18:28:04 +0000 UTCFix some stuff.
Zogarth
2025-02-06 18:24:50 +0000 UTCThanks!
Trevor Mergen
2025-02-06 17:24:41 +0000 UTC@Corvid the timing without any explanation was just impeccable
Phil Ritter
2025-02-06 08:05:30 +0000 UTCOk I can’t wait for the whole universe to open up and see what happens or where Jake goes. Also I say full send to Jake and Meira!
Pole Fire
2025-02-06 07:12:00 +0000 UTCDefying Jake is probably good aura training.
Michael Ferguson
2025-02-06 03:09:28 +0000 UTC*[Dingdong of the Malefic Viper (Legendary)]
Corvid
2025-02-06 00:12:04 +0000 UTCI want to see a shapeshifted human form of hawkie and mystie. I know Sylphie has said she doesn't care about a human form, but I want to see a Jake/Carmen/Hawkie drinking competition with human mystie shaking a wooden spoon at them.
Corvid
2025-02-06 00:09:23 +0000 UTCThis is making me think of Rocket Raccoon's path. He would have prison escape skills.
Corvid
2025-02-06 00:07:27 +0000 UTCOn that note, I legit think the whole "LICK IT! You know you want to" was my favorite interaction in the entire series.
Corvid
2025-02-06 00:06:33 +0000 UTCGot it, thanks. It did take slowing down to really let it sink in because there was that little to it compared to the lost child and fallen king fragment
John Durrett
2025-02-05 22:53:50 +0000 UTCI think Villy got trapped and made Jake's escape skill
Michael Ferguson
2025-02-05 22:33:52 +0000 UTCLet's fight!
Michael Ferguson
2025-02-05 22:32:06 +0000 UTCMY BANANAS! MINE, MINE, MINE!!!😋🍌🍌🐒
Michael Ferguson
2025-02-05 22:30:50 +0000 UTCSkills have like, tiers. As they improve, they go up in rarity. And that seems mostly dependent on effort and insight. So you're saying it's impossible for someone sitting in a cell all day every day to focus on making their meditation skill immune to the sapping effects?
Gardor
2025-02-05 22:26:07 +0000 UTCYou could practice a movement skill till you can get out. Jake has an escape skill that worked on Sandy. So it would probably work on the prison. These are people who surrendered. They just want to hold and interview them.
Michael Ferguson
2025-02-05 22:24:51 +0000 UTCYes skills have levels but you dont gain skills arbitrarily. The best you could get I suppose is a skill choice at your next milestone and since you cant get XP you cant get to that. With the stamina and mana draining effects running youre unconcious and unable to perform freeform magic so its hard to train any skills or even do sword meditation like SS. In conclusion its pretty much impossible to make any head way at all on improving while in jail.
Xander
2025-02-05 22:02:08 +0000 UTCWhy would he use the dragon when he has villy
Sam
2025-02-05 21:51:50 +0000 UTCJake used that juice on the demon lord ritual
Sam
2025-02-05 21:50:26 +0000 UTCJacob did release the remnants of the truesoul in front of jake. They "turned to nothingness" or smth like that after leaving Jacob's lantern.
Niklas Österljung
2025-02-05 21:35:20 +0000 UTCI legit forget, do skills have levels? Can't someone just meditate until they get a prison-proof skill? That's just one skill, tweaking a movement skill to go through enscribed walls or something is another option, just off the dome.
Gardor
2025-02-05 21:00:24 +0000 UTCYou just missed that resolution. It was written a few chapters ago. I’d reread the end of the battle and focus on Jake and Jacob’s conversation afterwards.
Jordan Jones
2025-02-05 21:00:08 +0000 UTCHow would you get xp in prison? Is your path to always be captured? You would need to kill the other inmates, which happens in real life. Or work on your profession if they let you.
Michael Ferguson
2025-02-05 20:56:29 +0000 UTCYay Sylphie!
Michael Ferguson
2025-02-05 20:52:55 +0000 UTCAh, reread the last chapter, it’s short but mentions the orange squid
Maverillion
2025-02-05 20:51:31 +0000 UTCRee!
Michael Ferguson
2025-02-05 20:50:22 +0000 UTCJacob released it. It was at the very end of the last chapter. El hakans spirit is gone forever. That was what he was there for. Not to GET it. But to make sure it was GONE
Jacob
2025-02-05 20:48:04 +0000 UTCThinking maybe you should reread the end of yesterdays chapter a little slower
Daniel j
2025-02-05 20:46:43 +0000 UTCBook 12 starts in nevermore still so I think you are a few books off there lol
Daniel j
2025-02-05 20:40:42 +0000 UTCHe gives too little of a shit for that to happen in the near future but I can see him potentially support an enemy with some of his creation if he gets enough compensation. In the end he is someone who sides with whoever is most beneficial to him but cares too little to act himself. So whatever he gains would have to outweigh the risk of making Jake an enemy. But I can also see him making Jake some fancy equipment as compensation for backing an enemy of his
Phil Ritter
2025-02-05 20:37:05 +0000 UTCThere is the chance that she didn’t have all the info or was just trying to keep up appearances in front of her subordinates. Being outwardly too friendly to a potential traitor/ conspirator of an “enemy” faction could be seen as a sign of weakness. Keeping him at more distance could also leave her with more options to gain some kind of compensation be it him giving up all influence or materials
Phil Ritter
2025-02-05 20:34:29 +0000 UTCHe could probably take a lot of inspiration from them since they seem to be the most technological advanced faction so taking their tech and infusing it with void could be interesting. He should also be save with Oras as his backer even if his blessing is just divine nobody would want to fuck with an Eldrich God with his powers
Phil Ritter
2025-02-05 20:28:32 +0000 UTCDoesn’t matter if there is technically competition no one will challenge Jake the holy church especially won’t and Kindroth knows he’s kinda on thin ice and he’s too smart to oppose him. Also I’m expecting there to be a point score hidden somewhere so place 2-5 won’t amount to the same as Jake
Phil Ritter
2025-02-05 20:25:32 +0000 UTCIm pretty sure he doesn’t really have to do anything active with it and just check it from time to time and infuse a little of his mana. It wouldn’t surprise me if he got it as the last thing before ranking up to B-Grade or even after entering B-Grade. Would also be nice if he got the supreme one directly without having to rank it up so strengthens an already peak flame instead
Phil Ritter
2025-02-05 20:20:23 +0000 UTCTyftc. Ok so did Jake and everyone just have a massive ADD moment? Jake went to get the fragment true soul of El Hakan then is distracted by the lost child (false god), then getting the fallen king piece after Carmen’s kill. Jacob never handed over THE VERY REASON for Jake going there. I mean the entire scenario was about getting it back and it’s whitewashed at the end? Feel a bit jibbed
John Durrett
2025-02-05 20:17:41 +0000 UTC@Jeff McCulley I’m really not sure using Jake Juice on the FK is a good idea. In the end it always transforms whatever he uses it on into something completely new so there is a chance he would just birth a new unique Lifeform but not the FK. Just seems needlessly risky since he himself doesn’t really have a clue or any control of what exactly happens
Phil Ritter
2025-02-05 20:15:58 +0000 UTCI can see him leaving for a long time only to go back after many years only to discover he has a completely bonkers garden with an A or S grade professional troll gardener tending to it all this time
Phil Ritter
2025-02-05 20:12:10 +0000 UTCIt will never not be funny for Jake to be offended by others eating the bananas when he himself can’t even use any of the agility because he is obsessed with licking his perception ball
Phil Ritter
2025-02-05 20:09:09 +0000 UTCCould very well be the end of book 12
Phil Ritter
2025-02-05 20:07:30 +0000 UTCIs that a snake ding dong
Taylor
2025-02-05 20:03:02 +0000 UTCYep! The heretic part is what I’m curious about. How will the rest of the order act knowing all that. Hopefully we will see
Apollo Greed
2025-02-05 19:56:09 +0000 UTC👀🥒
Jaroslav Zapadlo
2025-02-05 19:56:07 +0000 UTCYeah tbh other series suck balls! I just love how grounded Jake is... damn this shit, it really is way better than fucking crawler carl! Malefic viper ftw
Jaroslav Zapadlo
2025-02-05 19:55:32 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2025-02-05 19:53:32 +0000 UTCThis feels like the end of a book.
Luke Scheffe
2025-02-05 19:41:06 +0000 UTCBanana thiefs!!!! TFTC!!!
Jose Reyna
2025-02-05 19:02:10 +0000 UTCThe rewards for the system events would be nice but I am guessing Jake fixing palette while going through meditation FS records
Ty Cooper
2025-02-05 18:32:59 +0000 UTCShe was giving him side eye before he (unnecessarily) talked about being a triple agent.
Gardor
2025-02-05 18:32:17 +0000 UTCWouldn't any prison just eventually train the prisoners to be stronger?
Gardor
2025-02-05 18:31:17 +0000 UTCWhich kind of made it silly for Kindroth to even mention it? I also had a problem with Miranda's side eye, or at least what the implications of it were.
Gardor
2025-02-05 18:30:15 +0000 UTCI believe the next part will be him fixing palette, making sure the flame is dominating the Cradle, and raising the rest of the Viper skills to mythical. I do have a feeling that once his flame starts hunting the rest of the other soul flames it will go rather quickly. His affinity soul flame has to have monstrous instincts
Ty Cooper
2025-02-05 18:22:22 +0000 UTCTftc. First failure to ween myself from this on patreon.
Timothy Spradlin
2025-02-05 18:09:42 +0000 UTCI do not believe Misty was able to participate because she consumed the mist bone. Sylphie has part of that mist bone in her from the ritual but the circumstances involved in her creations removed or side stepped that restriction and Hawky sticks with Misty. The book mentions Sylphie going to show off for them and go hunting with them. I do also love the side character stories and pov. I am sure we will get a check in on cgrade Rick and kids and sylphie story time to her parents
Ty Cooper
2025-02-05 18:04:29 +0000 UTCIt was actually stated in conversation with the Viper that most people are rationalizing this as "somehow he used his totally-presence-based bloodline to fake it" and the Viper is just not bothering to correct people.
Benjamin Mages
2025-02-05 17:22:56 +0000 UTCHeck yeah. Honestly the chapters that are Jake just fucking around & exploring (& fighting) the world he inadvertently created / slice-of-life and interacting with regular folks are so fun. Or maybe some interactions with Scarlett & that Frostpeak Wyvern.
Vega
2025-02-05 16:37:18 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Would be good to see Sylphie’s parents a bit. I know Jake’s outgrown them in power, but ever since that happened, he’s barely interacted with them. It’d be a shame if he starts leaving behind characters that are no longer useful to him. What did they do during the Prima Event, given that they are beasts? What do they think of their daughter Sylphie that they sacrificed their time & System item for? Some slice-of-life chapters wouldn’t go unappreciated, either from the POV of Jake or Hawkie & Mystie. I know you’ll have to hop to a different plotline soon, but in between them, I think it would be loads of fun to slow down & explore the lore & world you’ve built! Edits: despite his fucked the middle had been -> despite how fucked the middle had been
Vega
2025-02-05 16:32:13 +0000 UTCSo the Fallen King is soul bound to Jake storing records in his soul. Does anyone else feel Jake is going to absorb the records from the remnant left by the desolate child. Then patches the Fallen King back together reviving him a second time. Doing another impossible thing. Maybe even adding Desolation to the unique lifeforms skills, completing two impossible tasks at once.
Ty Cooper
2025-02-05 16:23:12 +0000 UTCHe’s about to give her a cucumber instead.
Jeff McCulley
2025-02-05 16:09:18 +0000 UTCOr getting FK back? There’s a reason Nevermore made sure he was topped up on Jake Juice. To be honest, I doubt he tries anything big before he can sit down with Villy.
Jeff McCulley
2025-02-05 16:06:54 +0000 UTC“sitting across an elf Jake” >across from. Otherwise, nice to see Miranda has a new boyfriend.
Jeff McCulley
2025-02-05 16:03:06 +0000 UTCAnd now we are in for the best chapters of the whole series: “jake just doing shit” chapters. I love periods like this because its how we get major story/character development like the sin curse weapon, or fighting a fricken cave mushroom
Josh Hietpas
2025-02-05 15:56:21 +0000 UTCTYFTC. 7th paragraph misspelled week as weak
Patrick Kenney
2025-02-05 15:49:07 +0000 UTCJUSTICE FOR BANANA'S :TFTC
Psyck0
2025-02-05 15:41:24 +0000 UTCI think that would be really nice especially since that whole faction I think is still trying to get into the good graces of the viper right?
Borbino the great
2025-02-05 15:38:55 +0000 UTCDon't even joke about that! Can you actually imagine what it would be like without a healthy dose of Primal Hunter? We'd still have other series' ,like HWFWM, but I guaranteed that 9/10 of us would suffer severe withdrawals. Insomnia being one of the mild symptoms and worse cases being wracked with the shakes and frothing from the mouth... and other places.
Stuart Thwaites
2025-02-05 15:21:38 +0000 UTCCan they ever though? His records are party the size of the Malefic Viper himself due to the drop of blood😂
Ray Light
2025-02-05 15:14:14 +0000 UTCOne of the few loose ends to wrap up? Or perhaps an inciting event for a small new arc where he returns to the Malefic School and shows his flame to that red dragon and him showing how to use it?
Ray Light
2025-02-05 15:12:49 +0000 UTCI wonder when Jake is going to remember the soul flame cradle.
Allie Fischer
2025-02-05 15:08:53 +0000 UTCTFTC Banana thieves strike again lol!
Jack Liu
2025-02-05 14:40:50 +0000 UTCHe’s the chosen of one yes but that doesn’t mean he can’t go there and be a visitor, I’m sure they’d love to have him as an ally
Kyler
2025-02-05 14:36:43 +0000 UTCNoo not the bananas! Also can’t wait for more Sylphie-Jake-Carmen time! Tyftc Zog :)
Lucy
2025-02-05 14:31:25 +0000 UTCwhat do you mean, next arc? I thought this is it. Good night!
Jaroslav Zapadlo
2025-02-05 14:30:51 +0000 UTCloser buys the beer
brjenness
2025-02-05 14:27:48 +0000 UTCI enjoyed this chapter: a good wrap up of the story arc. And now onto the next!
ABTelford
2025-02-05 14:16:08 +0000 UTCI'm still hoping for a war with valhal over the banana's
Taylor
2025-02-05 14:13:57 +0000 UTCSo with Jake being so strong I can see a time skip where he gets suck into a space time portal so everyone can catch up to him and I wonder who the next big bad is going to be
frankie doerr
2025-02-05 14:04:50 +0000 UTCI think he told her about the ambushed and helped her set up the trap but she didn't know that he was working with Jacob or that his God was allied with the Holy Church
Rob Lyon
2025-02-05 14:04:21 +0000 UTCI think we may get some small time skips But I think they'll be worked in to like a montage. He'll get some family time do some hunting do some alchemy maybe once the multiverse is opened up a little bit more Go visit some pantheons. I honestly hope we get a little bit of a break until he hits B grade. I have a feeling in B grade that will be another event dealing with the seat of the exalted prima. So till then it would be good to see some ketchup chapters with him and even chapters from other people especially those from the order so we can get some updates on what they've been doing while everything's been going on.
Rob Lyon
2025-02-05 14:02:37 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Tilen Praprotnik
2025-02-05 13:59:48 +0000 UTCShe would care same as most of the order would care because he basically out of himself as a heretic to the multiverse. I mean they could sweep it all under the rug by him and the Viper coming out and saying yes he's a heretic but he's still my chosen fuck off. But it's still going to have some ripples
Rob Lyon
2025-02-05 13:58:32 +0000 UTCI don't think he'll be a villain I'm thinking more along the lines of Batman He was making a contingency in case Jake goes rouge
Rob Lyon
2025-02-05 13:55:20 +0000 UTCAnd Miranda wasn't nearly this strong in the treasure hunt
Rob Lyon
2025-02-05 13:52:54 +0000 UTCShe knew he was a double agent and set up the ambush as a trap but she did not know he was working with Jacob or how close his God and the Holy church are
Rob Lyon
2025-02-05 13:51:35 +0000 UTCNot hes not The three administrators from the Milky Way for Jake EH and the desolate child. With those two completely dead Jake should be the only administrator candidate left in the Milky Way
Rob Lyon
2025-02-05 13:48:11 +0000 UTCBut he already works one of the most powerful void gods
dash w
2025-02-05 13:43:56 +0000 UTCBesides if the holy church is retreating Jacob will probably have to give up his spot from that Galaxy
dash w
2025-02-05 13:43:18 +0000 UTCThanks for the chappy
dash w
2025-02-05 13:42:09 +0000 UTC"despite his fucked the middle had been." his -> how
MrEarthCreeper
2025-02-05 13:40:24 +0000 UTCBanana musa evolution quest clearly. Can't let such an important character fall behind in the power creep.
Roguewave1737
2025-02-05 13:40:03 +0000 UTCNevermore already said he reminds her of them but better at adaptability and ”multiplying” (arnolds drones)
Profile Name
2025-02-05 13:25:54 +0000 UTCThe Cube only Works for Low Cgrades. I dont think Arnold or anyone in the Galaxy could make a Cube for people with stats like Carmen, the swordsaint or Jake.
Max
2025-02-05 13:20:43 +0000 UTCCorrect I forgot about the end of that chapter
Jordan Rogers
2025-02-05 13:18:43 +0000 UTCNah. Arnold is too practical to make an enemy of Jake. When he met with EH there was the brief POV segment for him where he literally dismissed the idea of joining EH against Jake because he was confident he could survive EH as an enemy and equally confident he would not survive making Jake an enemy. Plus he benefits from being at least neutrally aligned with Jake and the two are too different to really have any points of contention.
MrCynical
2025-02-05 13:17:03 +0000 UTCMiranda killed him already I thought.
Brian Schutt
2025-02-05 13:15:29 +0000 UTCIludar is already dead. He was almost certainly killed in the lagoon summoned by Miranda. The only reason Eron survived is because no one is sure how to kill him yet.
MrCynical
2025-02-05 13:14:10 +0000 UTCree ree. ree.
Jasu
2025-02-05 13:13:55 +0000 UTCInterested to find out if the system back fills the list of 5 with the next highest, or if the administrators select the replacements
Jordan Rogers
2025-02-05 13:12:54 +0000 UTCQuestion is if that priest or Jacob is the servant? With Ildar and the servant, and kindroth and Jake it’s a tie for a vote.
Jordan Rogers
2025-02-05 13:11:50 +0000 UTCYeah, I noticed that too... also its poor grammar to start a sentence with a conjunction unless it is "quotes".
Nate
2025-02-05 13:09:52 +0000 UTChes already dead. Miranda killed him at the end of the chapter.
Xander
2025-02-05 13:06:56 +0000 UTCOk as Iludar is one of the administrators, Jake really needs to get that dude executed before the end of the event. Edit:Iludar is dead, El Cheeto is dead, just leave Jake and Kindroth, with potentially the servant still alive, any chance that was the priest who tried to kill Jake?
Jordan Rogers
2025-02-05 13:05:32 +0000 UTCOh nice my day tomorrow is alredy made Sylphie for Präsident!
Danny
2025-02-05 13:04:56 +0000 UTCHoping some dude rolls in thinking he’s a big shot and gets absolutely humbled by Jake.
Mitchell Calhoun
2025-02-05 13:04:40 +0000 UTCAlso he doesn't have a reason too he didn't go with ell Hakan when he asked and he had the backing of the church
DT
2025-02-05 13:02:22 +0000 UTCI don't think so Ora's his god told him not to make the chosen of the viper his enemy a while back
DT
2025-02-05 13:00:18 +0000 UTCI think Arnold should go to the automata seems like it’d be interesting
Kyler
2025-02-05 12:58:20 +0000 UTCIm even more confused now. Before the ambush I thought Kindroth being a triple agent or whatever was well known to Miranda, then shes giving him epic side eye and her PoV after the ambush says she didnt know, now she says to jake she did know and it was all a setup. Somethings a little screwy here.
Xander
2025-02-05 12:56:26 +0000 UTCA great chapter, thanks Zogarth
Rewdan
2025-02-05 12:55:08 +0000 UTCPretty sure I would end up beating a few people to death within a weak=> week
Michiel Deruytter
2025-02-05 12:54:29 +0000 UTCI doubt a time skip between now and B grade evolution. Too much stuff that people have been wanting to see. Legacy and other Skill upgrades, the results of FS assistance, the contents of the FS book, jake fixing his stomach damage, the death or reclaimation of the moon zombies, how Meira, Scarlet, Reika, and a host of others are getting on etc. I figure Jake will get B grade do a bit of fighting and then we get a time skip before he visits Nevermore or the Minagalopolis opens up in a century.
Xander
2025-02-05 12:53:12 +0000 UTCOh I can't wait for Jake to go back to the order. I'd love to see Jake and Villy walk around the order drinking and having a great laugh as everyone else look confused. The girls will be fine with it. Meira is going to have the most time skip character growth I think. I hope she's more confident going forward.
Ira White
2025-02-05 12:52:39 +0000 UTCTyftc SYLPHIE
A Flashy BR
2025-02-05 12:51:32 +0000 UTCAbout what? The fight with the HC? Why would she care, so long as it’s over?
Arieh Sochaczevski
2025-02-05 12:51:09 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Arieh Sochaczevski
2025-02-05 12:50:39 +0000 UTCNow what possible cliffhanger will we have Friday. Maybe some bomb drop on the system event?
Canis
2025-02-05 12:49:19 +0000 UTCOne can hope, I personally don’t want the series to ever rush into an ending. I’m only in my 30’s so if zogarth wraps it up in about 40 years that’ll be good for me. So another 10,000 or so chapters to reach system slayer status sounds good
Jordan Rogers
2025-02-05 12:47:33 +0000 UTCTsk tsk Carmen corrupting the youth...
mrthorwahl
2025-02-05 12:46:54 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! 😁
Kt-x
2025-02-05 12:46:40 +0000 UTCThe bestest bird has finally returned.
Fyrtue
2025-02-05 12:46:28 +0000 UTCTFTC :) Looking forward to seeing where we go from here. Just to check, if miranda knew all along that Kindroth was a triple or however many agent, which seemed to be set up in previous chapters, and knew about the ambush, why was she giving him epic side eye and saying in her own PoV that she didnt during that chapter? Her knowing makes her having an army in her sleeve perfectly reasonable and the chat before about the dungeon could be a ruse to throw off the last of the agents in her own party, but the PoV stuff doesnt make sense if she really did know. Is she lying to Jake about knowing to protect kindroth from any fall out? Suggested Edits: "acceptable despite *his* fucked the middle had been." should be how "all their elites were slain*, and Jake even came out of it looking merciful and reasonable after* having not gone all out after finding himself ambushed" full stop instead of a comma, ditch the "and" and also the first "after" adding a comma instead. Makes the sentence flow more smoothly and avoids repetition. "God, and despite how" comma should be after the and "few people to death within a *weak*,” " wrong week "just really powerful, and when shit *really* goes down," repeated really either ditch or try truly for one of them "he found her sitting across ** an elf Jake" missing word "from". Though Miranda is becoming Maleficent so maybe she really was sitting across an elf.
Xander
2025-02-05 12:46:05 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
wyattmon
2025-02-05 12:46:04 +0000 UTCAfter this and they recruit all the ambushers and execute Ildar, Jake is gonna have to borrow Arnold’s prison to protect his bananas
Jordan Rogers
2025-02-05 12:43:46 +0000 UTCTftc
Beemoss
2025-02-05 12:42:16 +0000 UTCCan‘t wait for the next arc. TFTC
Eric Haase
2025-02-05 12:41:45 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter.
Loststar7
2025-02-05 12:39:20 +0000 UTCThe real injustice of all of this is how bananas keep getting stolen
Willson Buchanan
2025-02-05 12:38:51 +0000 UTCArnold is going to end up a villain, isn't he. He made that cube for Jake. I really liked him, too.
Matthew Paulin
2025-02-05 12:38:09 +0000 UTCLast line second paragraph, “despite his fucked” -> “despite how fucked”.
Little Silly
2025-02-05 12:36:07 +0000 UTCDamn banana thieves.
Cory Sauls
2025-02-05 12:35:23 +0000 UTCYes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth!
JJB4345_80_815
2025-02-05 12:34:43 +0000 UTCTFTC! I am concerned how his Order friends will take all of this now. Like what is Meira thinking in all this?
Apollo Greed
2025-02-05 12:32:20 +0000 UTCtftc
Matthias
2025-02-05 12:32:17 +0000 UTCMan so excited for what's coming, whatever it may be. I imagine a time skip might happen too. I really want to see/hear the results of the future spar tween the viper and valdemar. And we know some faction or individual is gonna roll into the galaxy determine to challenge the new status quo. tyftc!
Darshar Griffonmane
2025-02-05 12:31:51 +0000 UTCThank u for the story
C0bra$
2025-02-05 12:31:08 +0000 UTCNice thank you for the chapter
joel southard
2025-02-05 12:30:26 +0000 UTCnow only like 500 more chapters till b-grade
eatingpitza314
2025-02-05 12:28:45 +0000 UTCTftc. Glad to read that Kindroth did tell Miranda. I was confused about that at the end of the ambush.
Clint
2025-02-05 12:27:42 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
BlackRazaras
2025-02-05 12:20:58 +0000 UTCAnd Jake had to give Jacob at least some credit for the ending turning out acceptable despite his fucked the middle had been. His—how
Preston bodenheimer
2025-02-05 12:18:50 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Connor
2025-02-05 12:17:33 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
BumAssBumAss
2025-02-05 12:16:03 +0000 UTCTFTC!
Shai182
2025-02-05 12:16:00 +0000 UTCYeah buddy
Preston bodenheimer
2025-02-05 12:15:31 +0000 UTCHahah first. Tyfc
Lawrence
2025-02-05 12:15:26 +0000 UTC