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Chapter 1067 - Finally All Over

Jake kept observing as Carmen finished her ritual, and as the Desolate Child of Loss was fully destroyed, he better understood why bringing her was a good idea. He hadn’t even known Carmen had a skill like this, which was seemingly tailor-made to kill creatures like the False God. It was a creature Jake had theorized how to kill himself several times but had never found a better answer than just destroying the body of the False God over and over again with the expectation his opponent would die at some point.

Seeing the ritual now, Jake doubted that would even work. There was a certain stubbornness to a False God’s existence. In many instances, they were bound to some totem, or they simply had to fulfill what they were born to do before dying, but Jake had no idea what the conditions for killing the Desolate Child of Loss for good were. He also wasn’t confident he could deal more damage than the Fallen King’s final unique skill. In fact, he was pretty damn sure he couldn’t. And if that hadn’t been able to kill the creature, what hope did Jake realistically have?

Yet Carmen evidently had a way to circumvent all that. The runic ritual seemed to target the very root of the False God’s existence as its faith energy was rapidly being drained and turned into nothingness... no, not into nothingness.

She’s offering it to Valhal and her Patron, Jake realized. All the faith gathered by the Desolate Child of Loss was now nothing more than a gift to the Primordial faction, and as the ritual reached its end, Jake felt Carmen’s aura suddenly spike a bunch as she grinned.

“Three class levels and four in the profession,” she said, turning to look at Jake. “Now I feel like you’re the one who did me a favor by bringing me here and not the other way around.”

“Just a win-win, I guess,” Jake said as he didn’t really focus much on Carmen but stared intently at what remained after the ritual. As the final remnants of the False God faded away, a fragment was revealed, floating in its place.

It looked like a piece of the Fallen King, just as Jake suspected. He wasn’t sure where from, as the color seemed off from what he was used to, but he knew for sure it belonged to the Fallen King... because, to his enormous relief, it carried the aura of the Unique Lifeform.

Using Identify, his hope grew a little bit more.

[Fragment of the Fallen King (Legendary)] – A single fragment and all that remains of what had once been the Unique Lifeform known as the Fallen King. Records and energy of the Fallen King remain within, granting this fragment incredible durability and the ability to enhance certain soul-related abilities when used as a catalyst. Has many alchemical uses, especially when used in any soul-related creations. WARNING: Unknown energies linger within that may lead to unforeseen effects upon use.

Especially that last sentence stood out. Unknown energies could be so many things, and knowing the Fallen King, Jake couldn’t help but see a reality where the Unique Lifeform had managed to save some parts of himself. He also recalled that the King had infused the mask Jake wore with something before heading off and “defeating” the Desolate Child of Loss. He still couldn’t figure out what that something was, and honestly, right now, the more things Jake didn’t understand, the more hopeful he felt.

There was just one thing about this fragment that Jake viewed as a problem... it had technically come from the Desolate Child of Loss, which Carmen had slain, meaning it didn’t belong to Jake. However, before he could even say anything, Carmen reached up and took the fragment before instantly tossing it to Jake.

“Yeah, no, I saw that look. I’m not that much of a bitch to take advantage in a situation like this. Oh, and I would be very mad you assumed I would, which you totally weren’t, right?” Carmen said with a threatening smile.

“Such untoward thoughts would never even dare cross my mind,” Jake said with a stoic look as he put away the fragment before smiling. “Thanks. I do owe you one for helping out here today, no matter what. I also hope it won’t be a problem that you helped me fight the Holy Church despite being a part of Valhal.”

“What are you talking about?” Carmen asked, faking a look of utter shock. “I never fought the Holy Church! I was merely informed that a dangerous False God had appeared and promptly went there to face the monstrosity like the true heroine I am! If anything, the Holy Church should be the ones thanking me for having killed a creature that has already destroyed several planets in the galaxy.”

“That is how it will be framed,” Jacob said as he walked forward, gazing out at the nearby land still filled with desolation. “The False God appeared amidst negotiations between the Chosen of the Malefic Viper and the Holy Church, disrupting everything and killing everyone present in the city besides a scarce few. During this slaughter, the Runemaiden was called to help take down the False God for good... everyone besides the four of us dying in the end.”

The Augur looked in thought for a while before looking at Jake. “If it would make you feel better, you can also have the scenario include my death. That would require changing the narrative a bit, though.”

Jake didn’t even bother giving that a response as he frowned. “You’re really just gonna spin it like that? Blame everything on a now-dead entity?”

“Yes,” Jacob nodded, even if he didn’t look super happy about it. “Assuming you are willing to reconsider reopening the negotiation. As of about a minute ago, I’m the highest authority from the Holy Church in the Milky Way Galaxy, and with permission from the Holy Mother, I have been given full decision-making powers.”

“That head priest guy...?”

“Found himself teleported somewhere with a lot of people not that friendly toward him,” Bertram just shrugged. “While the faction within the Church he belonged to was in charge, that didn’t mean other factions didn’t also have some power. Jacob wasn’t a fan, but sometimes, a few heads gotta roll to get bureaucracy moving.”

“Can’t argue with that,” Jake smiled, at least a little impressed that a trap had obviously been laid to take care of that loose end. Thinking about it, there indeed were only the four of them left as witnesses... besides the gods who knew what had truly gone down that day, of course.

“Will the Lodestar Matron be a problem?” Jake asked after a bit.

“No, she’s not that stupid,” Jacob sighed. “She may complain a bit, but nothing that will ever reach the ears of mortals. In fact, this will likely result in her getting taken down a peg by my Patron as the plans of herself and her allies failed spectacularly. I do find it a bit sad that they lose a war they could have never realistically won, but oh well.”

“Speaking of your Patron, is she gonna be a problem?” Jake followed up. “And did she really sign off on all this bullshit? Because I genuinely thought she knew better, and if she did, that she could at least control her own damn faction.”

“In the eyes of the Holy Mother, this entire sequence of events would lead to the best final outcome. As I said before, the best end the Holy Church could hope for, assuming you defeated Ell’Hakan, would be a peaceful evacuation. Even if we had approached you as an early ally, what would you have given us? A few planets? The Holy Church desire, no, demands expansion. Even if we tried to limit it, the Church’s influence would create challenges down the lines that would eventually lead to our expulsion or something far worse,” Jacob explained with a sigh.

“On the other hand, backing Ell’Hakan, there was confidence the Holy Church would one day rule the Milky Way Galaxy. With Yip of Yore dead, he would turn to the Church and officially become a member, at which point his victory would be our victory. As for you... yeah, no way you would ever give up the Milky Way no matter how much we tried to convince you. Remember that the gods don’t care about short timespans and they view distance as rather relative. The Holy Mother knew that should Ell’Hakan lose and the Milky Way be lost, there still had to be some way for the Holy Church and your faction to coexist... which is where I come in, I guess.”

“So you’re the backup, huh?” Jake said. “You know, despite your negative outlook, I do think there could have been some kind of compromise if you’d simply been straightforward and not actively worked against me.”

“Well, it’s your fault the Holy Mother even approved working directly against you in the first place,” the Augur shrugged, making Jake look at him confused.

“I guess I should clarify... the Holy Mother never thought you would lose. She saw our Tutorial and, from what I heard, a few of your Nevermore exploits. More than that, she knows the Malefic Viper,” Jacob explained. “If the Holy Church had operated with the assumption that you and the Malefic Viper would obviously defeat Yip of Yore and Ell’Hakan, it could have given away the schemes of your Patron. That’s why the Holy Mother allowed the internal faction to run wild despite her knowing how much of a waste it is. Besides, on the off-chance Ell’Hakan did somehow win, she would already have hedged her bet.”

Jake frowned as he considered for a moment. “I had no idea the Holy Mother was also in on the scheming.”

“While I don’t know for sure, I don’t think she was,” Jacob shook his head. “She just actively chose not to hurt the Viper’s chances but inadvertently helped him instead, as if even the largest faction in the multiverse saw it as a real possibility that Yip of Yore could kill the Malefic Viper, it would certainly give the god more confidence. Plus, and this is just my personal interpretation, I also think she viewed this as a chance to see how certain members of the Holy Church would act if given more power than usual. If I’m right, and that is still a big if, I could see her consider yanking back their leashes a bit. While the internal factions in the Holy Church are all legitimately powerful, they are still all below the Holy Mother, for without her, there would be no Holy Church.”

“Have I ever mentioned that I really hate politics? Divine politics just sounds like the worst of it with everyone being immortal and stuff,” Jake sighed, remembering that Villy had also used this entire conflict with Yip of Yore to wipe out those less trustworthy. It wouldn’t be weird if the Holy Mother had done something similar.

“I believe such words have been uttered before by you,” Jacob chuckled.

“Eh, just to check, is it alright that I’m also being told all these things?” Carmen asked, scratching her elbow while looking uncomfortable.

“You’re just hearing the personal theories and ramblings of a defeated member from the Holy Church,” the Augur chuckled. “Truthfully, I don’t know, but you should be able to keep a secret, and if you don’t learn it from me, as a Runemaiden of Valdemar, you’re bound to learn things like this eventually. Your Patron isn’t the most subtle or secretive Primordial.”

“I guess,” Carmen shrugged, letting the two people with slightly similar names that some argued could be easily confused continue their discussion.

“What exactly do hope will happen after all this?” Jake asked, getting back on track.

“As we’ve already established, the Holy Church has lost the battle for the Milky Way Galaxy. With that in mind, I would like to officially surrender as a representative of the Holy Church and discuss the terms,” Jacob answered. “I don’t think you want to start a needless slaughter of the average Holy Church member, and needless to say, It’s also something I want to avoid. So, I hope that, at the very least, we can agree to allow the evacuation of every Holy Church member in the Milky Way Galaxy.”

“Is the Holy Church really willing to invest that many resources in saving mortals?” Jake asked, knowing how pragmatic the faction tended to be.

“See, in this instance, it’s rather lucky that there are so many eyes on the Milky Way Galaxy. If we left them behind, there would be many enemies who would use it against the Church, while should we invest a lot to evacuate everyone properly, it will look incredibly good and show everyone how much we care about every member,” the Augur answered, a bit self-deprecatingly. “Besides, the move won’t even be that far.”

“Oh?” Jake asked. “I assume you mean they will remain in the same universe?”

“Of course,” Jacob nodded. “And quite nearby, too. This is another reason why we wanted this matter settled without there publicly being a lot of bad blood between the Holy Church and the faction you are creating. Sure, the relationship won’t be good, we with the agreement today, there will at least be a precedent that we can be diplomatic, which is pretty needed as even if you push the Holy Church out of this galaxy, we’re still neighbors.”

“So the Holy Church has quite the presence in surrounding galaxies?” Jake asked, wondering if they’d even gotten a strong foothold in the Andro-

“The Andromeda Galaxy has, for all intents and purposes, been wholly taken over by the Holy Church. Even before the Prima Guardian event, it was mostly conquered using the Prima Alliance system, and after the system event, I believe the takeover will be complete,” Jacob explained. “Some other factions do also retain a presence there, but the one officially ruling everything will be the Holy Church, of that there is no doubt.”

“I guess I can’t get rid of you entirely quite yet, huh,” Jake muttered semi-jokingly. “I assume you’re also going?”

“Of course,” Jacob nodded before letting out a sad sigh. “I will miss Earth, but I also know going there would only be cause for trouble.”

“You could always sneak in,” Jake shrugged.

“I have absolutely no stealth skills, am publicly known by many people, and entering without permission will no doubt only lead to even more problems,” Jacob shook his head with a chuckle. “I can see that Miranda has her work cut out for her.”

“She does complain,” Jake confirmed. “Anyway... I think rather than me, discussing the details of the Holy Church’s surrender would be better done with her.”

“I expected as much. I just need us to agree on the basic facts,” the Augur said.

“Sure. I already told you earlier. The Holy Church is to leave the Milky Way Galaxy as soon as possible, and you’ll be banned from the galaxy going forward. Even if we go by your story that the head priest was some traitor who lost his way, you’ll still have proven with this meeting that the Holy Church isn’t a trustworthy faction,” Jake began. “Oh, and until the moment of evacuation, Holy Church members are not to leave for any other planets. All other details you can figure out with Miranda, as you already said.”

“Alright,” Jacob nodded, things being as he expected from the looks of it.

The Augur sighed loudly as he looked toward the sky a moment before speaking again. “I guess there is still one important thing left to do.”

Lifting his hand, a lantern appeared in it. Without any huge fanfare, he channeled energy into it and out came... something. It was wrapped in energy for a brief moment as it exited, but this energy soon dispersed naturally.

Jake intuitively knew it was the end. Without the protection of Jacob, the Truesoul of Ell’Hakan, the Celestial Child, disappeared and returned to the system where it belonged. With that, the Bloodline was gone from the multiverse, and Jake felt a wave of relief knowing it was finally all over.

In what was almost a poetic end, the Desolate and Celestial Child met their ultimate end side by side... so perhaps, in some way, the False God did fulfill its purpose as the two of them were now one with the system.

“Let’s go,” Jake said, not seeing any reason to be any more sentimental than necessary. He had far more important things to do than waste any more mental energy thinking about a dead asshole.

Comments

Slight typo after the banter between Jake and Jacob, when Jake asks "what exactly do hope" I'm guessing you mean do you hope,đŸ«Ą

Colby Whiting

I think this has been one of my all time favorite chapters.

The Viking

" “I guess,” Carmen shrugged, letting the two people with slightly similar names that some argued could be easily confused continue their discussion. " This is definitely a dig at the webtoon or more precisely it's readers (which I'm not part of) 😂

Daniel Heritage

Tftc

Dave

I wonder if the Viper has any other blessed in other galaxies?

DirePants

Is that a jab at the webcomic? lol I’m in the camp of letting the names stay the same đŸ‘ŠđŸŸ

DirePants

If anything, the Holy Church should be the ones thanking me for having killed a creature that has already destroyed several plants in the galaxy.” -> If anything, the Holy Church should be the ones thanking me for having killed a creature that has already destroyed several planets in the galaxy.”

HDHusky

So your saying there will be a galactic senate👀 gotta screen for old dudes that think their the senate tho

kinglemur

Tyftc

Chloe

Edit Suggestions: - Original Text: destroyed several plants in the galaxy.” - Suggested Text: destroyed several planets in the galaxy.”

mindcloud

I think because of the bloodline and that heretic skill which lets Jake see unfiltered records (which also means the system is allowing this) that lets Jake know forbidden knowledge like the first sage but it’s only the first sage. Villy hasn’t shared any other forbidden knowledge with Jake and it most likely wouldn’t work. Nothing suggests though he’s immune to karmic annihilation

Levi Lowry

I know this probably won't be seen, but it's not really about morality. It's about brokenness. I think both Ell'hakan and Jake's Bloodline would be considered an overpowered by the system. Hence why I compare it to minaga's ability

J7

The first sage is "forbidden" . No one knows about him but Villy and Jake. Jake really shouldn't be able to remember that he exists. It is evidence that Jake is immune to karmic annihilation or at least it's effects. And I would say it is evidence that karma annihilation isn't really a thing.

Michael Ferguson

Jake gets xp penalties for fighting low level idiots. He doesn't want that shit on his records, but he also can't let people take his pray. His build is set up for killing hire level enemy's.

Michael Ferguson

My guess is whenever the system event ends we get a galactic council, and the world wonder will be given out. Then a 93 universe council to decide which world wonders are aloud to stay for integration.

Michael Ferguson

No system updates or levels? He just defeated an army of lower level, but elite fighters and conquered a galaxy. He is also the only remaining seat candidate.

KenTX325

I hope Jake remembers that villy got the first sages bloodline as a reward so if a god without a bloodline chances upon such fortune then we can maybe see that bloodline again. Slightly altered ofc

Levi Lowry

What chapter was that I’d like to go back and look at it

Jordan Rogers

I'm more worried about someone asking for it in an event or something.

Indevan Jones

Thats an interesting idea, due to the kings soul abilities.

Jordan Rogers

I think Benedict because the mean of Benedict is blessed. also we could call Benedict and Bertram B1 and B2

Marcus Evenett

What is next?

Abhishek

That’s true I feel like Jacob is going to get it for some reason later on though if Jake doesn’t kill him by then

Borbino the great

I can't wait to see Villy again. Wonder what he will think of this new item.

Michael Ferguson

I thought he merged it with eternal hunger way back when he was fighting bugs or bettles or something underground

doctordirt

Idk if it would be a sequel, but maybe a side story(s) after jake has ideally gotten to godhood... His kid would have his bloodline, and its basically all about hunting solo So i think jake taking vipers role as basically just an observer, advice giver, bank coffer... and idk how much intervention jake should give to prevent his kids death... on one hand near death experiences are the best times for growth so u kind of have to let people push themselves and feel threatened But on the other hand, unlike a chosen that loosing one sets you back badly... records wize i dont think the first child is replacable like that. But maybe records wize... jake already has atleast 3 kids: sylphie, sandy and vespy... so loosing his 4th kid (who was actually his blood) might not be as big of a loss as i originally anticipated... but i think the near abandonment would kind of be vital to anyone with jakes bloodline to actually progress properly. Plus whatever OP wifey#1 passes to the kid, defintely could be a great future story... i dont think this would be the case but for example if jake had his kid with the succubus, he could just toss him in literal hell and see what happens lol. *Edit, i wouldnt actually want to read a story with either a succubus or a incubus as the protag so that was a bad example but it would be very cool to explore hell more throughly though* im still too interested in what jake has going on to really want to divert from the progress happening here in the main storyline.

Seen Death

Maybe visit the life pantheon

Mat

I appreciated the information dump and the seeming verification that this really was the end of the conflict and presumably a time to consolidate and move towards the end of the system event and Jake pursuing other goals. It’s times like these I really think about everything that’s coming. Thought about listing them out but that list could go on for a while.

TwoMoreYears

Yeah I think that's almost a dig at the webtoon

Rob Lyon

Yes but The Viper just asked for the bloodline of the first stage and got it. So theoretically in another event like that a God could ask for the bloodline of EH or even the bloodline of the celestial child. I think more than likely the system wouldn't give it out though. Because the bloodline of the immortal mind truly only affects village and allows him to remember stuff he should where EH's bloodline massively affects others

Rob Lyon

@Goofy Adam is at the most probably about 6. Because he's like four at the end of nevermore and this happened not too much longer after that

Rob Lyon

He forgot all about it, had the exact thought you mentioned about how he should have given it to the crafters, and then forgot once again for all eternity (I binged TPH in a week or two, so it's still pretty fresh for me 😅). Jake never, ever actually auditing / rationalising his spatial storage when he remembers it's something he should do is honestly a great plot hole prevention device!

Ronan B

Also forgot his gaze wasn't because of a bloodline, theoretically other hunters could obtain it as well

Shadowessence

Good luck with that

Rob Lyon

That's if the system would even give out his bloodline as a reward. The system could set the price for his bloodline so incredibly high that it's basically impossible anyone would ever be able to get it

Rob Lyon

I think of that happens Zogarth would have a riot on his hands

Rob Lyon

I think he forgot about it in his storage honestly. I know at one point he mentions he should give it to some of the Crafters in town but I don't think he ever did or if he did it was something that happened behind the scenes and never mentioned in the book

Rob Lyon

I think he gave it to crafters when his town was budding? Or it could have been a thought. Not entirely sure

Swan

If the next chapter starts with some kid being born with his bloodline imma lose it

Borbino the great

They’ll probably just hookup later and call it even tbh but I feel like the system doesn’t entirely approve of his bloodline either I guess that’s the wrong way to put it but there’s no reason to have that thing out mucking about when it knows Jake is just going to hunt down whoever gets unlucky enough to have it next

Borbino the great

Other way around. "Miranda's Galactic Empire, a subsidiary of Jake Thane LLC."

Corvid

His last deciple didn't go too hot though.

Corvid

Yeah Villy didn't get the event to inherit his bloodline until he was already a god, and he had to request the bloodline specifically as his reward. Chance it comes back sure, but a small enough one

Corvid

So..... I went back to the first book to re enjoy the series and...... I can't for the life of me remember what ever happened ro the omnitool...... and now it's bugging me

Shadowessence

Dead finally

Michael Ferguson

Thanks for the chapter!

wyattmon

This was incredible satisfying and a good end to this arc instead of going through more meaningless slaughter

Phil Ritter

Maybe it’s possible to communicate what exactly you want through intent? I can see there being ways to find out the name too now that it isn’t bound to a person anymore. There are probably ways but I don’t think it will come back at least not in the short term if even Villy had to struggle to get one so very few should be qualified to even try

Phil Ritter

Nah what he meant wasn’t planets it was mushrooms because those aren’t plants either

Phil Ritter

I don’t think he is even close to a heretic. He is truly working for the best of the people and tries to help with all his heart and his interests seem pretty in line with the holy mother so I don’t see him even wanting to stray from this path

Phil Ritter

I’d be more interested in Jake raising a disciple somewhere down the line maybe even exploring all there is together

Phil Ritter

I’m really excited to finally get some proper adventure through the multiverse exploring different universes and such there is bound to be a lot of interesting stuff to explore

Phil Ritter

Just one more person to hunt down in the future for Jake and who knows maybe from the Dao Sect gets it before anyone from a manipulative sect can get their hands on it and I’m pretty sure events that give out bloodlines are incredible rare and stronger bloodlines are bound to be harder to obtain. There is probably no event out there big enough to warrant a bloodline on the level of the primal hunter

Phil Ritter

Artemis already didn't argue against having a child with Jake when Minaga was teasingly asking about details of the bloodline from children to help with his labyrinth. Just the inappropriate asking for bloodline details.

MrCynical

You know there is still the chance the system gives someone else that bloodline

Phoenixdrop

Excited to see the rewards when the system event ends, and what happens. Jake and Villy meeting up to examine the heart and Villy giving a gift made up from Yip of Yore. Case to see if Jake’s attempts to resurrect the fallen, king helps Villy with his family. Hopefully we’ll get some side stories about what’s been going on with the other characters.

Daniel Hamilton

So here i am caught up... now to wait for 50 chapters lol

Timothy Spradlin

Basically a giant sign that will say "JAKES!" with very tiny font under it going "As owned and run by Miranda"

Darshar Griffonmane

It might have! We do know that Jake has cleaned out his spatial storage off screen so to speak a few times but never exact details of what he got rid of or kept. Not that it really matters all that much.

Darshar Griffonmane

kindroth was the 5th administrator. I think it may have mentioned something vague about other people not on the list having their titles raised also.

brjenness

Getting to this point in the story, I’m pretty interested in seeing how old Jake’s nephew is at this point and what type of path he has chosen compared to his uncle and his father.

Goofy

I can’t wait for what comes next! Zog you said you had a lot more for this story and it could go on for a LONG time

I hope this stays true! I would love a sequel to the series with Jake’s kid(s) taking the limelight, but only after we get everything with Jake’s story. I really like this “universe “ and I except you could have a lot of fun either way it, even breaking into a different character storyline, just all in the same “universe “.

Flameboy

TFTC!!!!

Jose Reyna

I predict that a Jake faction would look like a lot more work and levels for miranda.

brjenness

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little

I wasn’t thinking of the system gifting it during an event. Villy has categorically told Jake that the system will rebirth True Souls and bloodlines will be reborn. At least, that’s how I remember it.

Arieh Sochaczevski

We’ve had a few small bits of foreshadowing of the creation of more heretics in the future no? Would there be any potential in seeing Jacob as a heretic Augur, or would that fully break his path? I can’t think of any other characters that would make sense as a heretic, Jacob barely does but he’s been showing a lot of dissatisfaction with his faction

Kevin Watson

I wonder what the future Jake-owned faction will look like. I assume it would include the Noboru clan considering how closely tied they already are as vampires to the Order. Perhaps Arnold? I don’t remember if the Void Gods have any existing faction. Any that are already expressly loyal to Haven. Potentially a large amount of enlightened beasts and elementals off of Sylphie?

Kevin Watson

funny you should mention that... the bloodline that dominates the 94th universe is a mix of eh, minaga, and voltron and spreads like a virus

brjenness

maybe it's a British thing. They don't always speak proper english.

brjenness

TFTC :) Suggested edits: "destroyed several "plants" in the galaxy" though this is technically true I figure you meant planets “What exactly do ** hope will happen after all this?” missing word "won’t be good, *we* with the agreement today," should be but

Xander

I was thinking about if a god later tried to acquire a EHs bloodline and I think I noticed an issue, Redacted, if a god wanted a specific bloodline I reckon the god would need to know its name for the system to allow it. The viper knew about the bloodline of the immortal mind because the first sage told him. I don't think villy enen knows the name of Jake's bloodine. The only person who knows is nevermore who is a quasi system entity. I can't see EH ever telling anyone, so I reckon the bloodline might be gone so good.

Seamus Harley

I was thinking about if a god later tried to acquire a EHs bloodline and I think I noticed an issue, Redacted, if a god wanted a specific bloodline I reckon the god would need to know its name for the system to allow it. The viper knew about the bloodline of the immortal mind because the first sage told him. I don't think villy enen knows the name of Jake's bloodine. The only person who knows is nevermore who is a quasi system entity. I can't see EH ever telling anyone, so I reckon the bloodline might be gone so good.

Seamus Harley

won’t be good, we with the agreement today-----> ?

Titaniumtac

What exactly do hope------> what exactly do you hope

Titaniumtac

I kinda doubt they get title upgrades, just position on the ladder ? Otherwise people would be ganging up to assassinate those above them.

Jeff McCulley

What’s even more hilarious is that they aren’t just “slightly similar”, they’re the same name. One is the diminutive of the other. Kids probably called Jacob “Jake” at school. His brother, too. It’s not like people with the same name never hang out together. One of my basketball teams had three guys named “Jeff” on it. We were just that cool!

Jeff McCulley

Patroness isn’t a word, Patron isn’t a gendered term in the first place

Damian Karis

Ah, thought it was a similar case to Patriarch and Matriarch.

Ray Light

Appreciated the jake-jacob callout.

MilkTheShark

I think it's a dig at the writers of the webtoon

Rob Lyon

I think it's a dig at the writers of the webtoon

Rob Lyon

They could Just ignore the odd changes and continue the story the way it supposed to just put a notice in the beginning

Psyck0

It's horrible they changed so much. They basically removed all skill selections they just give him whichever skill he needs. They added the amps that takes place of most of his inner monologue and drastically changed his relationship with the viper. Thing totally changed how his bloodline works in the comic it activates like a skill. And as far as skills go they haven't shown any of his profession skills. It's utter mess and hot garbage. I honestly check in on it every now and again just to see how bad they're doing.

Rob Lyon

I think also because Villy absorbed so many of the first sages records(and the sage letting it happen) that he was able to get the bloodline through system fuckery during the reward

Winter-ad

I could see a few small ones like in nevermore happening

Rob Lyon

He has an entire galaxy of potential foes it might be a little bit before that starts but eventually probably in b grade there will be a showdown between all of the administrators of the exalted prima and he'll have to beat all of the leaders of the other galaxies to truly claim the world wonder. And as Jacob told us the Holy church basically runs the Andromeda Galaxy. So there will even still be conflict with the church over trying to claim the world wondered.

Rob Lyon

“I guess,” Carmen shrugged, letting the two people with slightly similar names that some argued could be easily confused continue their discussion This made me think of that horror webtoon hahahaha

Winter-ad

She launched a soul attack against him. It did nothing because Jake is Jake but it was an attack. Intent is far more important than result a lot of the time.

Gareth Morgan

@Damien Kingsley The Viper got the entire bloodline all the bloodline did was give perfect memory. Everything else the sage could do was just because he was an absolute monster and did everything he could to break the system's rules. Having at least 4 transcendent skills just points more to that fact. I also think the sage may be the immortal mortal that Aaron was talking about in book 10

Rob Lyon

Matron isn't the female equivalent of patron, that would be a patroness.

Eltirno

Thankies

Phasmatic7

I honestly don't think they expect the webtoon to make it that far or they will just cut Caleb's son completely out of the comic

Rob Lyon

@Manowar or against whatever craziness Eron is trying to start

Rob Lyon

I don't think we will see his bloodline spread until he has an actual child. Though I could see Artemis wanting one with him

Rob Lyon

I'm pretty sure that viewing party is why so many of these gods are betting on Jake. Like Jacob said the holy mother didn't really think EH stood a chance and beating him that's why she allowed the ruse to go as far as it did. All of those gods that were at the viewing party saw what kind of monster Jake was. I mean by Valdemar's own words he lost to a C grade. I know there was no killing intent in fused in his aura. Still if he counts it as a loss who's going to correct him

Rob Lyon

I agree well done!

Blaq Jesus

Rare, sure, but the mentioning of this event taking place could very well be a not so subtle kind of foreshadowing, indicating what happens in the future. Only time will tell.

Blaq Jesus

I doubt it would be the last we see/hear about the bloodline. I just wonder how and in what capacity it's going to resurface.

Blaq Jesus

Honestly I questioned the choice from the start and was expecting some kind of satisfying answer as to why they have the same name, yet as well all know , that never came đŸ€Ł

Blaq Jesus

Thanks for the chapter!

Blaq Jesus

*closes book* *goes to bed*

Jaroslav Zapadlo

I'm honestly not sure the webtoon will get that far. I know it's supposed to be getting a totally new creative team for the next season but they've messed it up so bad already I don't see how they can think it's remotely come back to being close to the books

Rob Lyon

I could totally see the holy mother telling her hey there's someone here to talk to you and it being someone from the order. I don't see the Viper acting himself just because of the power difference But I could see Snappy, dusk leaf, or the witches taking care of business. Or it can even be used to introduce us to a different God of the order

Rob Lyon

Regardless of the why, I think it’s pretty funny he made that comment in the text of the book. This happens all the time in real life, so I’m fine with it.

ABTelford

I could see him doing that also to make the holy mother owe him one

Rob Lyon

@Jordan Rogers if you're talking about the administrator event I'm pretty sure with the deaths of EH and the desolate child Jake was the only administer candidate left in the Milky Way Galaxy so it's basically automatic win

Rob Lyon

I could see him making a mask Cynthia and time the Kings records to it making the king a guardian something like bobo is to Dana

Rob Lyon

I hate the webtoon.

daniel gager

I 100% think that's a dig at the webtoon

Rob Lyon

I could see that happening but I could also see Jake using his origin energy on it and removing all the desolations focusing purely on the records of the king and bringing him back as a true king that way. We already know this power can create something that powerful just look at the true Royal

Rob Lyon

I don't think giving it out from bloodlines is that common in system events of the multiverse. Because even the Viper said he was surprised when the system decided to give him his I could see it maybe happening far in the future. I could also see Jake asking the system to destroy it during an event

Rob Lyon

Is that callout line about people talking about Jake and Jacob...did you really ACCIDENTALLY name to first two characters in your book the same name? Like, were you surprised when people noticed?

Gardor

I think a lot of people are ready to see the universe open back up and want to see what will happen when Jake goes back to the order

Rob Lyon

That's what I was going to say he'll get taken off the all time leader board and so will Yip

Rob Lyon

Thank you Zogarth, you’ve set the bar even higher. I’m looking forward to reading Jake reporting back to Villy and dealing with Kidroth (Spelling) stuff. Thanks again

Rewdan

Plus the Viper has said events like that are extremely rare within the And if he was surprised that the system gave him the first sages bloodline.

Rob Lyon

I thank so lol or at the very least the writers from the webtoon

Rob Lyon

“we with the agreement today” >but with

Jeff McCulley

“exactly do hope will” >do you

Jeff McCulley

Thanks for the chapter! Just a few things I noticed: "taken down a peg by my Patron as the plans of herself" Isnt's the Holy Mother the Matron in this case? Same goes for: "“Speaking of your Patron, is she gonna be a problem?” Jake followed up." The word "you is missing from this sentence: "What exactly do hope..." and for: "Sure, the relationship won’t be good, we with the agreement today, there will at least:" is a bit difficult and odd to read. Is this written correctly?

Ray Light

Its Not possible as a Low effort Path thats what paths are all about. When Villy told Jake he got it from an system Event he told him that He did almost perfekt & paid very much and the First Sage still did Something to Help Villy Out to later get that bloodline. Without the planning and Primordial Level Power you probably wont even get a bloodline from an Event. Yip&Yore was already talented and he didn't even do anything against Villy.

Max

If I remember right zog talked about his publisher telling him to change Jacob's name since it was to close to Jake's name, and we'll obviously he said no. So I think it was a friendly dig at them. More teasing then anything

Justus Saucedo

“already destroyed several plants in the galaxy” > as well as the planets those plants were on

Jeff McCulley

Nice wrap up of the arc. Thanks!

Erlost

Thanks

Trevor Mergen

I doubt there are many system events where the person gets to choose a reward with next to no limitations, and you also have to consider the relative power, the first sages bloodline has basically no effects in later grades and can often be a curse, it is only useful by letting him and Billy know forbidden knowledge but even that doesn't do all that much tbh, whereas ell hakans bloodline already can do alot and in future grades will be an insanely powerful weapon so it is likley that until the system decides to give it out again normally, it will probably be off limits to ask for

Finley

Was the comment about jake and jacob being similar a dig and the manga or just a some readers?

eatingpitza314

This. Plus we know the anti-HC arc will be coming back with a vengeance in B grade, when the Milky Way and Andromeda galaxies are competing for dominance.

Clint

Well it's the path of least effort and most would take that path. But bloodlines vary by quality and fit with a faction. Imagine if natures attendent died before being a part of ygg's faction. Won't they try everything to get the bloodline ? Maybe this won't happend here as the holy mother is against getting the bloodline.

Buzzkill081

I really want him to go back to the order and get some tutoring from Albramoz before he does anything with the cradle.

Clint

The Prima event ending is still a few years off, isn’t it?

Clint

How calm he was always was got under my skin

Zuuuuuri

I don’t think they get the world wonder yet. Jake gets the seat of the Milky Way. But in B grade he’ll face off against a bunch of other galaxy rulers, to get the next step. I’d guess he wins control of the world wonder in S grade after he beats the other peak talents of the 93rd universe.

Clint

Thank you for the story Zog! This arc was absolutely amazing to read, and I can’t wait to reread it after the book comes out! I love how you wrote the villainous characters like EH and Yip, making them feel unsettling and portraying their personalities so well. Their paths were insanely well-written, and everyone felt so alive yk? Villy v Yip and Jake v Ell’Hakkan (is that how you spell it?) fights and dialogue were sick, and I can’t wait for what you have in store for us next! I also really like how you added in old characters. Would love to expand more but I’m gonna be late for school
 TYFTC and story Zog!

Lucy

Lots of good stuff for Jake to work on — upgrading skills, particularly. It’s time for him to start checking off items on his “before B grade” checklist.

Clint

I think because our dear Patreon writer has given us so much cool stuff to look forward too that they can't wait? Personally I don't mind just enjoying whatever gets thrown at us.

Manowar

Only on the “All-Time” leaderboard. The others include dead people. (see for example the swordsman guy who Yip ganked.)

Clint

I'm hoping for some kind of alchemy ritual with the FK mask, fragment and bit of Jake juice to bring the king back in some form.

John

Good question. Maybe only the rewards when the leaderboard is settled/final?

Manowar

I doubt it is that easy to obtain one, even for a god. Why would there otherwise be such a ask to breed bloodlines into a faction?

Manowar

Like I check in every now and then but only bc it’s Zog’s, and ultimately still my favorite story so I try to support it however I can

Lucy

I like that idea. The universe could use a counter against cheat survival abilities and there has to be. Just think of the mess if everyone could just will themselves to stay alive... or Minagas...

Manowar

Jake needs to work on fixing palate before evolving and don't forget this entire prima event is about potentially gaining possession of an entire world wonder. The next step of prima and palette repair plus dealing with the aftermath of EH faction collapse and wrapping up current prima event are likely next.

MrCynical

Won't gods or S grades have s chance at getting the bloodline like villy did as a system reward? Unless the factions that want to bloodline are completely eradicated won't they now start investing resources to get the bloodline via the system?

Buzzkill081

IMO, no. They fricking created original characters, literally made up a scene in the tutorial, and cut out important parts of the story that represent Jakes personality and made the story seem random and off, I dunno how to put it. And the character designs
they got changed so much. Villy didn’t have scales like he was supposed to, had SHORT WHITE HAIR
Like, I just stopped reading it right then and there
Kinda ranting but I hate it when the comics ruin the original story :/

Lucy

Killgrave aka the purple man from marvel is the one closest to creepy and hateable as EH imo. Both with abilities to influence or control anyone and everyone around them with almost no way to resist except for a very select few who still have to be wary of insidious corruption.

MrCynical

Maybe Villy will feed her to the lord protector?

Jordan Rogers

I dont believe it. That yellow fuck will worm his way back somehow.

Exaiter

My assumption Villy. Is gonna do a favor for the holy mother and get rid of her problem child.

Jordan Rogers

Well for any other c grade she basically disabled them and sent an execute squad

Jordan Rogers

Last time he check there were some with his affinity, just not of the quality he wants

JayseKnyte

Great chapter! Jacob over here playing 4D chess.

John

an excellent wrap up for this arc. tied up everything neatly in a way that's really believable/plausible

Colin Holloway

There's a typo: "...having killed a creature that has already destroyed several plants in the galaxy.” -> planets instead of plants

Pheo

For real is there finally a flame that has his energy signature? I mean it's been a good long while since he's checked gotta be a mutated one in here or something, would be pretty be spot on since Jake has an anomalous soul and what not. Anyway can't wait to find out! TYFTC!!

Zach Newman

With EH dead, does that mean everyone below him on the nevermore leader board gets an upgrade to their title?

Steven Wood

Nice thank you for the chapter

joel southard

Minaga said it wouldn't be done for a century

Benjamin Kenon

Why are so many people asking for a time skip? There is still alot that can be done before the prima event ends! Although knowing Jake, he'll get sucked into an alchemy project and give you all the time skip you're desperately begging for.

Gingerlochs

Is the webtoon worth it? My interest dropped to zero when they introduced the little imp. Killed the whole vibe for me as Jake being alone with his thoughts seems kinda pivotal to his growth.

Gingerlochs

Great finish! Loved this chapter Zogarth can’t wait to see what happens next.

mitchell kaiser

She ordered/triggered an attack by c-grades. She didn’t attack herself. She wasn’t even present - just a communication ritual that allowed her aura/presence through. To complain about an aura attack against Jake would be silly.

Arieh Sochaczevski

I wouldn't say that having no cliffhanger pushed it up to 11/10 but it did get a 10/10 from me. Cliffhangers are evil and every writer should feel bad every time a cliffhanger is used... even when the cliffhanger makes the story better.

Stuart Thwaites

It’s very likely that such a thing will happen, but you also need to remember that Villy didn’t get the “full” bloodline from the event. He only got a portion of it in the form of the permanent memory aspect. The truly dangerous parts that the First Sage showed off were seemingly removed from what Villy received.

Damien Kingsly

Damn nice conclusion

solomon pagan

Did she? I thought she just negotiated. She did try to effect him with her bloodline, it seemed though.

Daniel Brian

The System learns yes but it does not have morality. Jake hates the Bloodline and we, as readers, hate it because of what we saw it do. But on the scale of Gods what El'Hakkan did was small. On the scale of the System, what a God with that Bloodline could do would be small. Its too big to care about that because it can't care. The First Sage made that clear. It does not care for good or evil, simply results and records.

A. B. Edwards

Thanks for the chapter! It is an almost physical relief that this is over. I’m not sure why Jake assumes the system won’t spin the bloodline out again someday, but I would understand if he expected that “someday” to be far off. It probably would have been considerate for Jake to offer some token payment to Carmen, given Jacob was right there, and he’d made such a big deal over the spoils of his hunt. The parallels are obvious.

Arieh Sochaczevski

Prima Event conclusion and rewards distribution.

JJB4345_80_815

And then Jake has new Prey to hunt down. He's made his opinion on the matter crystal clear so any god that claims that bloodline as a reward is going to eventually have a "Jake Thayne experience."

JJB4345_80_815

Technically, the Prima Event is still ongoing or at the very least the rewards have yet to be distributed. There's a World Wonder to be claimed...

JJB4345_80_815

Maybe a small time skip chapter about what happened until it opens back up and we see the academy again

John Looney

Yes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth!

JJB4345_80_815

The holy mother just tells her sucks to be you

John Looney

He shall get no Fs in chat from me

John Looney

Really nice conclusion!! Looking forward to what is next but no cliff makes it 11/10đŸ€Ł Very interested to read coming chapters!!!! Thanks!!!!

Nate Slusher

And I'm sure when it pops up again Jake will go on another hunt

Jaydan Man

Odds on the fallen king Alchemy piece to be used to repair palate?

Jaydan Man

The system learns from mistakes, if minaga ever truly died, it would not recreate his ability. I doubt the system would want that Bloodline out again.

J7

I doubt it, those rules would have been defined earlier I think. He'll just have no second place or third place with I defeated

Jaydan Man

Maybe Mark of the Avaricious Ambitious Arcane Hunter or whatever it was last called will get an upgrade option to mark or disperse Truesouls?

Little Silly

I want to see her get pushback from the Viper or the Holy Mother.

Vega

Nice. Thanks for the chapter.

Vega

Tyftc. It's nice bring done with the Elk arc of the story, can't wait to see Jake's push towards B grade now

InfernoDroid

My best is hedged on that the Unique Lifeform took this opportunity to alter his truesoul. Let me explain. He knew he was going to leave an item upon death, just like he did from the first time. So, knowing the false God would be full of desolation and be the one to slay him well... You can't exactly be a refallen king can you? Especially considering that his goal most recently was to become Fallen no longer. He wished to become a real king and retake his throne. So, what if the king fell so far and met nothing but... Desolation? And yet as the desolation attempted to claim his soul, he fought back and gained control of it. The fallen king knew no more of being fallen. He had stared into the void of oblivion and true death, and found it lacking and wanting. So as a king should, he took it's power upon his own shoulders. Fallen no longer indeed... For the King of Desolation has risen from the ashes of what was once named.... The King of the Forest.

Stolen Hero

RIP El' Hawk Tuah

One Winged Angel

Great chappy TY!

ByLordMatsLuck

Nah, I’m sure they’ll find out eventually and this would have been a funny time. Probably. Idk. Carmen might already know? I would think Jacob might know


Little Silly

Lol the jake Jacob confusion comment

daniel gager

I wonder if since Jake slew his greatest rival in the event if he gained all of. El Cheetos progress from the event?

Jordan Rogers

I think we’re going to see some increase to his profession with some crazy Jake juice and ritual and we will either get the king back in a rerisen form or maybe just make his mask sentient? He needs alot of levels to get to b rank still so we should get quite a few lovely level grinding chapters, and a huge reward to progress him from the end of the prima event.

Jordan Rogers

And heal his soul generally

Little Silly

I can't see how Villy will just leave the Lodestar Matron alone. If she'd orchestrated a C grade fight that is one thing. She directly attacked his Chosen. That is the kind of slight you can't really ignore

Gareth Morgan

Hell yeah a mini nevermoreish arc would be amazing. I love a good dungeon crawl. 1000 levels of Minaga's madness and Jake steam rolling the labyrinth lmao.

Ira White

I really hope Jake would visit calob and maybe teach his nephew a few things, maybe find a way to pass his bloodline to him even though he isn't his child

Gurel

Tyftc! Finally!

Apollo Greed

No.!!!!! But I think he will gain something like a 2 second inthe future for his ring of perception in battle, at b grade since his bloodline is still restricted to his grade somewhat

Jordan Rogers

I really want to see a Lodestar Matron interlude

Zuuuuuri

Tftc

Matthias

Yeah that moon monster has to be something he pulls off before he gets B grade. Don’t know if it’ll be the only b grade he kills though he likes to one shot stuff, so he may get sent somewhere by Villy to a place he can find a weak one

Jordan Rogers

And fix palette. Villy said he had to fix it before bgrade

Ty Cooper

Should have went with something like Enoch, or noah. Since he’s pretty much a prophet

Jordan Rogers

Really happy I didn't have time yesterday to read the chapter so I could read these 2 today back to back đŸ„°

Sarianne Roodenburg

So now jake is just gonna grind until level 350?

Mohammed Sheekh

I will say zogarth, I truly didn’t think anyone would ever even come close to making me despise a character as much as Delores umbridge, so congrats there’s definitely something wrong with your brain but good job.👍

Jordan Rogers

Couldn't agree more. Usually i think characters can potentially be redeemed, but that psycho was lost from the beginning

Dan

Ell'Cunt is finally dead for good. Rest in pieces, fuck you, and don't come back!

Dan

Thanks for the chapter

Tilen Praprotnik

I don't like they changed Jacob to Adam because Adam is the name of Jake's nephew

Marcus Evenett

Thought that mostly got destroyed against the termite king

Tyler S.

First response to the first response of the first responder

Kyler

Wooooo! The celestial child, el turd, is finally done! I have to say Zog, I have never hated a character as much as EH. You did a fantastic job of making a creepo character that got under my skin every time I read a chapter with him in it. Well done sir.

Ty Cooper

Agreed, not to mention some origin juice to help the King rise once again

Tyler S.

Luckily the names changed in webtoon now we just have 2 Adam's unless they change his nephew's name

Psyck0

I disagree because I see this as tying up loose ends and allowing the story to move forward. Did we need to bounce right into an anti-holy crusade after having a massive god-tier war? What does that do for the Primal Hunter? Jake will go search for bigger and bigger prey as is his wont to do.

Invictus Red

Is it bad that I was hoping that Jake would casually tell them that he meet both their patrons in Nevermore and that they were having a viewing party?

Noctis Uchiha

I kinda hope as a peak s grade he ends up clearing out his storage while crafting something crazy and uses it all. Still has the minotaur mind chief in there from e grade.

William WIlson

Now what? Jake can't leave the universe until the event is done after all. Maybe a nice dungeon run if Minaga is finished would be cool.

Michael Fannon

Jake is a character in a story. Having grudges, recurring enemies and warring factions is a whole lot better than a Monster Of The Week mindless chapters as Jake levels up.

Tr0LLach

Jake must of gotten some record as a reward to ensuring ell'hakan's end. Maybe he'll get a skill in the future to help ensure he death of those he hunts.

BumAssBumAss

I'm kinda hoping for a time jump to the end of event to find out more about the world wonder.

William WIlson

““I guess,” Carmen shrugged, letting the two people with slightly similar names that some argued could be easily confused continue their discussion.” A bit on the nose there. Lmao. The WEBTOON changes making Jacob become Adam. I like it when you do stuff like that. TFTC!

Cory Sauls

Jake is a hunter not a warrior. Hunters don't have enemies but prey and the only reason Ell’Hakan was an enemy was because Ell’Hakan made it that way. While Jake is a hunter he is a hunter of vast horizons meaning that he can have an enemy but it's not central to his Path. Plus we all know his next prey the moon. Plus it's my hopes this will end the Prima event and we get some world wonder action

William WIlson

This is not the end of El'Hakkan's damn bloodline, I know this for a fact. The First Sage had been a Bloodline Patriarch and Villy got his Bloodline from a System Event. In reality what Jake did was give the Bloodline back to the System to recycle as a reward in an Event, an Event the level of which usually only Gods get to play in. So if one of these rare events pops up and some God participates they might get El'Hakkan's bloodline as a reward. That is terrifying. The Holy Church very well may still get that Bloodline.

A. B. Edwards

Sure, the relationship won’t be good, (but)we with the agreement today, there will at least be a precedent that we can be diplomatic, which is pretty needed as even if you push the Holy Church out of this galaxy, we’re still neighbors.”

Alexander C Hyde

Tftc, now can Jake focus on killing the B-grade moon monster?

IntenseSushi

Truly thank you for this story zog.

Andy Swearingen

So? What now? Ell'Hakan Chapter closed. My next bet is on healing Jake's soul damage and upgrading the Palate. Reading the First Sage's book.

Marc Jay Arr Cotamora

I swear this is a dig at the web comic changing names.

Michael Fannon

Definitely killed more plants then planets

Psyck0

So, just gonna shoot in the dark here... update on the soul flame cradle?

JayseKnyte

“What exactly do (you) hope will happen after all this?” Jake asked, getting back on track.

Alexander C Hyde

I feel it's about time Jake goes on some lone hunting or a good ol' alchemy session, tftc!

Tudor

It was the desolate child and it did die

William WIlson

Thanks for the chap. That had been four months since the beginning of this arc, and a bit over seventy chapters. It had been immaculate. Thank you a lot, Zogarth, this story is extraordinary good, and I cannot wait for the next segment of the story !

Lizy Flore

Next Chapter: System's Event with El Cheeto bloodline as a reward

Abriel Blauer

Thank you so much for the Chapter Zogarth. The title is really fitting too, since with this, the hunt on El'Hakan is finally finished and we get to see a new Enemy in near future :)

Staudi

Thanks for the chapter 😀

Kt-x

😓 I’ll try to do better next time 😂

Elijah Reitmeier

The least satisfying ending I could realistically imagine. The spin that the Holy Mother was helping Villy the entire time just kills any resentment Jake has towards her. All that's left is just general distaste for how the church operates. Jake now has basically 0 enemies left. Both within the 93rd universe or outside.

Tr0LLach

TFTC

Bi-Dailey

Tftc

AfroMocha

Tftc. Do you guys think a time skip will occur? Jake reaching peak C-grade or smth?

Mohamed Elshazly

Agreed. Should be planets.

Alexander C Hyde

You have no value as a person! Go hang your head in shame in the losers corner!!!! 😂

Naotsugu97

Jake had theorized how to kill (It) himself several times.

Admorias

Dastardly False God, your reign of terror upon the plants of the galaxy is finally over!

Momongama

Good chapter! And for the record, it’s always made sense that Jacob and Jake are separate people. I mean, running into people with similar names happens all the time irl, at least for those of us with fairly average names. I never have got the issue some have there.

Naotsugu97

Wtg Carmen

Keldra

First response to first.

brjenness

Thank u for the story

C0bra$

" letting the two people with slightly similar names that some argued could be easily confused continue their discussion." That whole section got a good chuckle out of me bc it has happened to me that I got them mixed up when I was reading quickly and had to do a double take

trufflezz

"Carmen shrugged, letting the two people with slightly similar names that some argued could be easily confused continue their discussion." Lmao this is hilarious, definitely confused me a bit in book 1.

TyranT-Rex

Jacob - Yeah I needed some people to die and make me the leader by default, you win now.

Canis

I love lines like this: "...letting the two people with slightly similar names that some argued could be easily confused continue their discussion."

Blackbriar

Plants-planets

Unlisted Pokémon Hudson

“What exactly do hope will happen after all this?” — do (you) hope. Thanks!

Zizawah

And so the Yip and Cheeto arc is officially done (random cheeto heart in Jake's bag notwithstanding. He'll forget bout it anyways). Now les see where Zog takes us next! tyftc!

Darshar Griffonmane

Damn, it really is over. Yip is dead and eaten, Ell'Hakan is dead and his true soul sent back into the System. The only thing left is to see what new insanity the end of the event brings.

Unwillingmainer

Tftc

Beemoss

Tftc Guess this volume is over, only need a time skip next chapter so that this event can end.

Greedsmith

“Destroyed several plants”!! Execute that man!

Hayden Leech

Thanks for the chapter

BumAssBumAss

Thanks for the chapter

Connor

First? Nope, second!

Elijah Reitmeier

First

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