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Chapter 1058 - The "Negotiations" Begins - START OF BOOK 15

The Holy Church had already reached out with the intent of finding a peaceful solution shortly after Jake returned to Earth after slaying Ell’Hakan. After he killed Bertram, they were understandably worried about what actions Jake would take next. However, from the looks of the communications Miranda received, they genuinely believed they could reach a satisfying solution where they could walk away with Ell’Hakan’s Truesoul, and Jake could get “rightful compensation.”

Yeah, with them thinking that, it definitely made sense that they wanted Ell’Hakan, considering just how delusional they already were. Still, Jake at least wanted to appear reasonable, even if he had no intentions of acting in any way the Holy Church would find reasonable.

That being the case, Jake expected it to eventually devolve into violence. The Holy Church had long pulled back all its elites, with many of them not having been involved in the conflict to begin with. Truthfully, no one knew just how much power they had in storage, but Jake didn’t feel any sense of fear.

The only thing he possibly had to fear was being forced into a wasteful slaughter. He genuinely hoped the Holy Church knew that fighting would be futile, but things rarely turned out that smoothly.

Only half an hour after Jake finished transmuting his temporary bow, he stood ready on the teleportation platform prepared by Arnold, who was also there to observe and – if necessary – also send Carmen over. Jake considered if he should call others for backup but decided not to. Sylphie was off somewhere on Earth, spending quality time with her parents if Jake’s guess was correct, with everyone else also busy doing their own thing. Not to mention a few weren’t even on the planet in the first place, or the fact that people like Caleb couldn’t get involved due to his faction, and while Casper would have probably loved to go, bringing a Risen along was a surefire way to make them instantly start blasting.

“Ready?” Arnold asked, making Jake refocus as it was finally go-time.

“Ready as can be,” Jake nodded, and without further ado, the teleporter below him activated.

While it was true the Holy Church had invited Jake and Earth to a dialogue about how to solve their differences, there was no direct invitation to visit their main planet in the Milky Way, which was also why Jake used Arnold’s special teleporter that didn’t require permission.

Jake felt his vision shift as soon he found himself just outside the atmosphere of the Holy Church planet. Instantly, he saw that the local World Leader had done quite a lot to defend the planet, with powerful barriers fused into the environment everywhere. The thing is, the barriers defending planets couldn’t be too good unless they were of a high enough level. If they were, mana from the sun and the rest of the universe couldn’t easily come through, weakening the entire planet.

So, instead, the barrier was more there for detection and to destroy anything unidentified. This left quite the obvious flaw, as for the barriers to know if something was unidentified, it had to be able to see and identify the object in question in the first place.

Activating his Unseen Hunter skill, Jake quite easily snuck through the barrier and entered the planet before he rapidly headed toward the surface. Arnold had gotten a lot better with his teleporter and had even been able to focus it and teleport Jake to appear directly above the biggest gathering of presences on the planet, which unsurprisingly happened to be the capital city.

Before even breaking through the clouds, Jake saw the massive city below him. It looked like it was made entirely of marble, with large buildings and spires everywhere. From the looks of it, the local city plan also required at least one church or building of worship for every hundred meters based on how many there were.

The biggest building in the city was a large cathedral-looking structure on a slightly raised plateau. Even from up high, Jake could feel this was where the most auras were gathered... oh yeah, and he also felt his Hunter’s Mark still lingering on Jacob’s body, telling him the Augur was within.

Jake had considered for a while how he wanted to approach this, and one thing was for sure, he wasn’t going to do anything sneakily. In his mind, he wasn’t in the wrong for anything that would happen that day, as he was merely there to take back what was rightfully his.

That’s why Jake gladly introduced himself to the entire city. Floating not far from the large cathedral, Jake dispelled his stealth skill and unleashed his aura, even mixing in a bit of Pride to really up the intimidation factor. Within seconds, guards of the city took to the air, and not even ten seconds later, a group of what Jake assumed to be elites had also gathered nearby, watching on with careful eyes.

Jake remained silent as more elites gathered until, finally, the people in charge made their appearance. Jacob, Bertram, and a bunch of people in priest robes and fancy attire exited the cathedral, and the moment it did, Jake’s will-infused voice echoed throughout the city.

“I believe you have something that belongs to me.”

--

Iludar opened his eyes as the message arrived. The Chosen of the Malefic Viper had just reached the Holy Church’s Milky Way headquarters, signaling it was their time to move.

He quickly sent several messages to check on matters and received nearly instant responses, confirming everything was as expected. Looking up, he saw the nervous elf standing there, clearly unsure of what had been decided. Understandably so.

“We have safe houses set up all across the Milky Way. All we have to do is survive until the universe opens back up. You know as well as I do that this is your only chance for survival,” Iludar said sharply.

“I know, I know, but it doesn’t make it any less nerve-wracking,” Kindroth, also known as the so-called Voice of the One, replied, his demeanor far from his usual self-assured one.

“Collect yourself. We are in a hurry,” King Iludar said, regarding his followers of elites. “There’s no turning back now.”

“Yeah, so let’s just get this over with,” Kindroth said, recollecting himself and taking a deep breath.

With those words, they activated the large teleporter that had been hidden away by the planet of the Great Bright One. It was linked to the Prima Vessel and was merely there to allow the teleportation of more people at once.

Their plan was simple: strike Earth while it was vulnerable. King Iludar knew that the moment Ell’Hakan died, he was on borrowed time, and he didn’t trust that the Holy Church would tide them over long enough for their escape to the rest of the multiverse.

So rather than simply sitting back and waiting for death, they would land a decisive strike where it would hurt the most. They would prove themselves to the Holy Church and any other force that still opposed the Order of the Malefic Viper to hopefully secure a good future.

All of this was happening with the support of the Holy Church and their loyal subject, Kindroth.

The Great Bright One wasn’t officially a member of the Holy Church but might as well have been in many aspects. It was a god in a gray zone that could do things the Holy Church normally wouldn’t while still receiving support from the Primordial faction under the table.

As someone who followed the Great Bright One, Kindroth was similar. He was a perfect spy who was not officially part of the Holy Church, so he could sneak under the radar in many cases.

Kindroth had been a source of information for this entire campaign and long before that. He was a traitor to the Order of the Malefic Viper, and both he and Iludar knew what kind of fate awaited him when this was inevitably discovered. The elf had also dug himself deep on his planet with the persona he’d created for himself, and rather than try to dig himself out, he’d been more than happy to just jump ship. The fact that he had been ordered by the Holy Church certainly also played a part.

And now, with the Chosen of the Malefic Viper gone, they had their chance to strike. Kindroth had also confirmed that every other fighter who was a major threat wasn’t around, and Iludar’s own spies had confirmed this. Even the cultist of the void and the Runemaiden weren’t in the city, giving them a window.

The teleporter beneath them soon activated, bringing them all to the Prima Vessel on Earth. Warriors appeared one after another, filling the vessel so quickly they had to funnel into the halls as everyone charged out.

On the way, they met no one, as Kindroth had indeed done his job and cleared the way. They easily made it out, and with Earth still unaware that a massive invading force had arrived, they reached the teleportation station close to the Prima Vessel to teleport to an area set up by Kindroth beforehand.

Attacking the witch within her city wasn’t the wisest move, but what if her trusted ally and fellow council member led her away from the safety of her fortress?

--

Jake floated in the air, his presence blanketing the city as he felt millions of eyes on him at once. Just the sheer scale of the city meant that any form of clash would result in many deaths, something Jake would still like to avoid.

“Chosen of the Malefic One,” a priest with fancier robes than the others spoke as he flew up to meet Jake. He was probably a head priest or something, but Jake truthfully didn’t care. “Your visit is highly unexpected and irregular.”

Jake really, really wanted to call bullshit on that one, but he held his tongue as he instead kept up his intimidating presence. “You wanted to talk. I came to talk... and take back that which is mine. That which you took from me.”

He repeated that they had taken something from him to really hammer home the point that this had to be the starting assumption for this entire talk. It needed to be clarified from the get-go that Jake had arrived with justification, and it was very purposeful he said all this in front of so many followers of the Holy Church.

Below, he saw Jacob look up at the head priest guy, and a moment later, the man cleared his throat, speaking a lot more softly so none of the citizens below could hear. “Perhaps we can have this discussion elsewhere in private?”

“Very well, lead the way to this private discussion,” Jake said, once more wanting to make it clear he was just following the Holy Church guys to some unspecified location. The man in front of him didn’t look very appreciative, but he couldn’t really do or say anything as he nodded and turned.

Following the lead of the head priest, Jake flew down while still keeping a good distance from everyone. He released a few pulses and noticed dozens of small teleportation buildings spread across the city, many of them now having elites gathered around, waiting.

Jacob, Bertram, the head priest, and seven other official-looking members of the Holy Church were part of Jake’s “escort” as they entered a small cleared-out teleportation hub.

“I apologize for the lack of a proper welcome, but as I said, we truly didn’t expect you to show up without prior notice,” the head priest reiterated that he believed Jake’s visit was very sudden.

Perhaps it was partly true, as they had more likely than expected him to be more injured after the Ell’Hakan fight than he actually was. It was thus highly probable they had wanted to make more preparations before Jake visited that they simply didn’t have time to.

“Please follow me through the teleporter,” the head priest said, motioning toward it.

“Using a teleporter with an unknown destination seems highly unwise, especially when in territory I do not find particularly friendly,” Jake said, staring down at the priest. He’d only slightly let off on Presence while he kept unleashing his aura, fully aware of the mental pressure he was putting on everyone present.

“It will take us to an installation far away from the city, and what awaits on the other side is no trap,” Jacob chimed in, being curt with his words. Jake did catch something, though.

A military installation, Jake quickly concluded simply from the word installation, as honestly, in what other instance would someone use that word to describe a location?

“Fine,” Jake agreed as he teleported alongside the ten members of the Holy Church.

A moment later, he appeared in another small building, and right as he did, he naturally released a Pulse to get the lay of the land. They were now in a new city, a lot smaller than the other one but still pretty damn large.

However, rather than a normal city, Jake instantly recognized this one wasn’t... how to say it... real? It was a ghost city. Nearly all the buildings were entirely empty inside, with the only ones having any actual activity the ones with teleporters placed in their cellars.

If this was some failed expansion project or a weird military city to train urban combat, Jake really couldn’t tell, but he did know for sure it was now a military city. Within mere seconds of Jake arriving in the new city, over a thousand fighters teleported into the cellars of the many buildings throughout the city, seemingly setting up should things go wrong.

Overall, he did like this new setting, though, because outside of the city, there was nothing for hundreds of kilometers in any direction. They were well and truly isolated, which meant far fewer casualties should Jake end up having to go with the violent option.

“Please, this way,” the head priest continued as he motioned Jake out of the teleportation building and into what looked like some kind of town hall. Jake kept watch of his surroundings, and the fact that Jacob walked all the way in the back with Bertram and seven other high-tier C-grades between Jake and the Augur didn’t escape him in the slightest.

Jake remained silent as he merely followed them, as he felt the many observers. A quick Pulse confirmed there were now more than five thousand people in the city, and if Jake was correct, they were all top fighters of the Holy Church. Pretty much all the faction could muster should this turn into a fight, at least when it came to people who the Church believed could at least contribute.

He also finally properly probed the others in the small escort group, and while they all wore priest robes – besides Bertram, of course – five of them clearly weren’t actually priests. Their auras simply didn’t match the signature he would expect, and their level of power also made it evident they were fighters.

An elite party, Jake concluded right around the time they all found themselves in the wide open lobby of the building Jake had assumed to be a town hall. There, the head priest summoned a table and a set of chairs.

Jake looked at them but remained standing as he crossed his arms. “This really shouldn’t take long, so let us get this over with.”

Staring directly at Jacob and Bertram, Jake scoffed. “Those two interfered in my battle against the Usurper of Yip of Yore and stole part of my rightful bounty.”

“Bullshit,” Bertram reacted, with Jacob instantly calming him with a hand on his shoulder as he stepped forward.

“Apologize for my Guardian’s outburst. Your last encounter wasn’t a pleasant one for him either,” Jacob spoke with a tone Jake remembered hearing many times in the past during soulless business calls.

“I shall not deny that we claimed the Truesoul of Ell’Hakan, the Usurper of Yip of Yore, but we only did so after you had already taken what you had come to take. We are, at worst, scavengers infringing on your leftovers, but I object to us being branded thieves. We only took what you were unable or unwilling to claim in the first place.”

“You talk as if any of what you just said matters,” Jake said, openly pressuring Jacob with his aura. “No matter what I wanted to do with what’s mine, it has nothing to do with you. All that matters is that you stole something from me; that’s the end of it.”

Okay, admittedly, Jake hadn’t really entered this so-called “negotiation” with a mindset for compromise... but Jake got the distinct feeling Jacob wouldn’t want Jake to be in a too diplomatic mood either.

Comments

Villy I’ve come to bargain!

nathan

If Jake was able to get by their detection and all the way to the dome why wouldnt he just take a powershot at that lantern. Jacob even made a point about how if the lantern were destroyed the soul was gone. Snipe the lantern and use the ring to teleport back dont negotiate and dont start a slaughter or walk into a trap.

Greg Alverson

Was anyone truly surprised by Kindroth’s betrayal?

Greedsmith

Let’s hope not because if they manage that planetary ritual sacrifices would be the least of their worries. I don’t see them attacking people close to him because while it would show arrogance it would 100% spell their doom. I don’t think they are stupid enough to try that and Jacob would have done anything to talk them out of it if just for reducing the churches sacrifices

Phil Ritter

I can see Arnold’s laboratory opening up and just casually void beaming half their forces as a test for his security features since nobody attacked haven yet so there is no way to test them properly

Phil Ritter

I can also see Kindroth jumping ship having informed Miranda long ago because he knows it would end bad having the hunters Mark on his back

Phil Ritter

Bertram’s soul is likely bound to Jacob just like the Kings was bound to Jake so taking it would mean killing Jacob too and taking both together. As for Ell’Hakan he wasn’t directly killed by Eternal Hunger and im not sure it eats every kill or just those who were directly killed by EH itself. Could also be that it isn’t able to absorb a completely broken soul or didn’t see enough value in scraps

Phil Ritter

Bertram literally cannot be permanently killed so long as Jacob is alive. He will always come back. As for elhakan that I have no argument outside EH nkt being able to absorb a bloodline

Nexas Aurelias

has he killed anyone else with a blodline that I'm forgetting? maybe he cant absorb bloodline souls. and for bertram he said his soul was extra tanky and its linked to jacob so i can see him not being able to eat it.

Singularity

Throwing this question out there to get other opinions, as well as give Zogarth the chance to explain/retcon things as he does acknowledge and answer comments in the story at times.... Shouldn't Eternal Hunter have eaten Ell'Hakan's soul? And Bertrim's for that matter. I can explain away Bertrim's as Jake could have willed for Eternal Hunter to not have eaten it, but not Ell'Hakan.... So any thoughts?

Kyle Hunt

Jacob and Beltran are the ultimate bros in disguise.

Ender419

I think the title should be either: the negotiation begins or the negotiations begin

Gardor

I mean vespy literally is an army so he’s fucked and any plant William had found long ago so yeah 10 bucks something cool like sandy ushering vespy to slaughter them all while the elf laughs

John Looney

Hell yeah I would love this

greg belokopitsky

Indeed! Well earned thankies zog

Richard Ulrich

I'm just looking forward to, not just the sucker punch invasion force getting casually stomped, but them radioing Jake in the middle of the talks like, "hey, they just tried to invade." And then Jake goes from playing up the evil overlord vibes to actually getting angry and wiping out the entire Milky Way chapter of the faction.

Drew

I’m sure we all are hoping the same. If so he will surely get another new name / title in the process.

King Nereus

I don't because his bloodline would have signaled a warning. She is close enough it would have given a slight pull. But I could be wrong, I can see maybe an injury though

Rezkin

Not only that, we know quite a few people are, in fact, around. Arnold is around, Carmen is around, Maria is around, Slyphie is around, SS is somewhere. I don't see this going well for Illudor. I'm on the fence about Kindroth if he actually betrayed them or is a double agent. Not only that, Miranda talked about increasing security after EH invaded. So we have to assume something was done. Either way it's going to go extremely sideways very soon for the invaders.

Numbzy

It's an obvious trap for Illudor. Why would there not be anyone at a minimum running security at the vessel. The fact no one was there would be a dead give away. Oh we have the vessel ship where anyone from other planets can teleport too, yeah lets not worry about it or have guards. That seems like such an obvious oversight, it has to be a trap.

Anthony Smith

Let us remember, they already knew Kindroth was a spy, like a long time ago...

Rocotrap

Sandy shows up, screams "TOM, RELEASE THE HORDE" chaos ensues.

Corvid

Carmen is really not a fan of the church. She will have another cathartic moments afterwards.

Ty Cooper

he'll yeah Ken. I keep forgetting Sandy's has his own hive stomach.

brjenness

Steve, I'm still leaning towards this not being an actual church decision. more like a few local leaders making a bad mistake.

brjenness

I agree with the not thinking kindroth is this stupid.

brjenness

I agree, but would rather see the B team beat their ass

brjenness

I know, but the hope is that we will have a return of the fallen king again.

Little Silly

How funny would it be if all Earth's Elites for some reason arent there.... minus 1 or 2, and its the basic citizens of Haven and the Fort just wreck these invaders. 😆

Tarl Reynoso

@Little Silly, that doesn't work. 'The king is dead, long live the king' is said when one king dies and his heir is ready to be crowned. It's basically saying 'the king died last night but his son (or which ever relative) is old enough and healthy enough to sit in the throne'. The fallen king is dead, the throne sits empty

Stuart Thwaites

I’m really looking forward to tomorrows chapter, see if Jake just goes into full murder hobo mode, or if he plays with his food first

Jordan Rogers

I just want to see the creature from the black-verdant lagoon trudge up on them.

Corvid

This is all forgetting that Arnold has an orbital drone network set up, and he likely knew the exact moment the teleporter activated as well as how many came through, and how long to the millisecond it would take to post their mortem.

Corvid

I 100% agree with you! I see Miranda dying… and then everyone in the area figuring out why the Malific One treats him as a friend. Then they will use the connection to her goddess’s to be resurrected. You know after Jake dismantles what’s left of the holy church’s faction. (You know the one they are going to burn to appease him).

Demonshadow639

I also think it's Kindroth as the traitorous council member. But I can see a world in which Ill Dan thinks he is relying on Arther because of El HaukTuahs previous emotional control fuckery. Either way it's part of the plan. Also, don't forget, the SS was thinking about things and just disappeared from the known front lines.

The Uub

I agree. Even though Jake doesn't trust him I refuse to believe Miranda doesn't have William doing Karmic stuff to protect Earth. I don't think our guys are entirely blindsided by Illudar scheme.

Esch

The king is dead, long live the king!

Little Silly

In Jake’s pov we see that he is there. In the conspiracy pov we see that Kindroth told Iludar that he’s not. It’s possible that instead of standing with Carmen, Arnold has left… but it’s more likely that Kindroth was either lying or misinformed.

Clint

I also just realized that he didn't recommend bringing Carmen for his backup, he recommended it as backup for Haven. Tomorrow's chapter is gonna be a bloodbath, I can feel it!

Dan

William, the Karmic mage personally taught by Eversmile, which is a type of magic known for being weird and hard to trace…now why would he continue hanging around helpfully when he has nothing else to do?

Little Silly

While I agree I think it will take more than just the mask. I mean it took the system to do it last time. I'm thinking that Jake uses some other rare materials.

William WIlson

Uhm…Carmen is back up for when Jake breaks the lantern to kill Hakan and ends up freeing the desolate child, right? How would Kindroth nurture the desolate child? I assume he helped make it, but we haven’t seen him with an object like Jacob’s artifact, and the artifact has to stay near Jacob to function… Edit: I was wrong, I went back and checked…Desolate child was put in a box, not the lantern. The one with the box spoke to the Desolate child and got it to pull itself back until it became something akin to a human heart before boxing it and cradling it away.

Little Silly

Don't forget about hawky misty and Sylphie. Let alone the c grade troll living under Jake's home and his d grade kids. There is also Vesperia. They are basically all fucked.

William WIlson

I see Miranda having a strike squad of her own and a nice little surprise waiting for the invaders

Tyler S.

It doesn't say which council they are a member of. Yes Arthur is on earth's council but I'm pretty sure he's happy with the way things are going and doesn't want help from the church. Kindroth is also on the council set up more recently in dealing with the system event, earth Milky Way Galaxy council. Could be either but Arthur wanted earth to not change and Jake's proven he doesn't plan on any changes. I mean Jake literally lives in the most earth like home and valley there is. Yes Arthur probably isn't happy with the mass immigration but when Miranda explained that it was either we allow them all to stay or we refuse them and they will probably all die he probably begrudgingly accepted that he had no choice just like Jake did. Arthur was never evil just mis informed and mind controlled.

William WIlson

I feel like Kindroth played them by having fallen king hidden and then maybe SS and Sylphie join Miranda

Lewis Long

Personally I think Sylphie and her parents are close too. I mean top 5 from earth is Jake, sword saint, Sylphie, Carmen, Arnold or maybe Casper.

William WIlson

Thankies

Phasmatic7

I'm of the opinion that Jake could have extracted a superior quality soul flame before the Prima event. I know it's stated that soul flames are tough to level but the inside of the cradle is supposedly huge with a bunch of other soul flames that empower the soul flame removed. I'm of the opinion that Jake forgetting about this cradle for so long has basically made a soul flame which no c grade should be capable of controlling. Jake obviously does it to reach his evolution. Plus a few titles.

William WIlson

The "cultist of the void" they refer to is Arnold. He's explicitly listed as not being there.

11037

Lol her and her parents just happen to be flying by when they notice the baddies. Sylphie would then promptly decide all these baddies are super weak only strong enough to fight mom and dad. So she whips out her magic nest and takes a nap.

William WIlson

I think Casper is on earth setting up that island that Jake gave them

Rob Lyon

Yeah I don't think this illudar realizes that because of Jake and his way of running earth just how powerful the average earthling is. I mean think on it. He knew Ell’Hakan and probably thinks that his planet would be similar in power to Ell’Hakan because of Ell’Hakan being so equal. What he doesn't realize is Ell’Hakan was only that strong because of his planet while earth is so strong because of Jake relentlessly pushing it forward. We all know that one individual can single handly raise the records of a planet which is what jakes done. We also know a planet can raise an individual to power, what Ell’Hakan did. I'm just waiting for the chapter with Miranda walking peacefully with the traitor. When she eventually does her I'm so sweet but you fucked up talk. She'd be all well now sweety how kind of you to bring all these pesky rascals here. Makes rounding up the last of Ell’Hakan’s supporters so much easier.

William WIlson

I can see this working to kill Miranda.

Richard Loveless

Arnold isn't in Haven. He's in the city that's part of Haven. It's to far away to matter.

Richard Loveless

The last we saw of the SS, he was on Iludars planet trying to lure him out... if I remember correctly he came out of a deep thought process and headed off to do something. I think he figured out they may try and attack Earth and has tricked them into thinking he isn't there to bring them into open. I think he will show up once the attack is committed enough

John

I like the idea of Sandy showing up and spitting out a thousand pissed off wasp. Not in this situation, just think one day it should happen to someone who is being a jerk.

KenTX325

We need more Sylphie! Reee! :3

Mokuyobi

Zog's just giving us all the juicy stuff back to back since the Ell'Cunt™️ fight. Still waiting for that urn to finish up

Dan

That’s why she’s the GOAT! THE GOAAAT!

Asher Mack

Vesperia i didn't account for. She could unleash a huge army and Miranda's swamp maiden along with William. William is going to save the day.

Ty Cooper

I am also thinking William is somewhere near by also or something.

Ty Cooper

I like to imagine that Jake's profession levels during his fight because of a new Heretic on Earth. "What? I didn't do anything!" Because there's no way Kindroth is this stupid.

Reno

I guess we'll find out next time on dragon ball.. I mean in the next chapter lol

Steven Ramey

I think it's likely he was put between a rock and a hard spot. He knows the dangers of Jake. He knows the dangers of the viper but he's also aware that his patron deity has already made choices that he can't do anything about. So it's either follow the guy who's blessed you or abandon your blessing and be in an even worse position potentially

Steven Ramey

I think "betrayal" was planned. And the elites are about to have a bad time.

Tyler Mills

The guy seemed pretty smart in reading people and smart overall so it is weird that he didn't take into account that even if by some miracle Miranda won't just wipe them out in her territory the is just no way Jake would not hunt him down through the entire universe. I don't know he should know that much about him already so either he wasn't really that smart or there's something else at play here.

Damian Horbal

they don’t know of the diplomatic genius sword saint waiting for em 😭

Hussein Zenki

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little

I wish I could say I was surprised but I'm not lol. He is weak willed and will fold under any coercion. Add on to that that his patron God betrayed to villy..

Steven Ramey

I have had a feeling Kindroth was going to back stab us. But Jake probably has felt him planning in the background waiting for him to do whatever. I am not sure if it is Kindroth that has desolate child but I kinda think it might be this king lulturd. Either way Carman is going to kick the crap out of it saving earth. I also feel Bert and Jacob Kew this and that's why they wanted Carmen just like Villy said.

Ty Cooper

Ye there is no way that he won't see them also I am highly disappointed in the betrayal of the elf leader.

Damian Horbal

No, we were told that every other fighter that could be a threat isn't there. They don't consider Arnold a fighter and we know for a fact he's there because he just sent Jake away from the planet so he's in the area. Plus, Jake just visited him at his dome in like the last chapter. And even if he's not there, his drones operate remotely and he's gotten thousands of them if not tens of thousands or more. If anyone is capable of single-handedly defending Haven against fodder, it's Arnold. At least that's what I think Arnold's one of my favorite characters

Steven Ramey

They were just told Arnold isn’t there

Little Silly

Agree. I don't think Kindroth could fool Miranda and Jake to this degree. The whole thing feels like something Miranda would come up with.

Will Creech

My only thought for this whole chapter was are they planning on attacking Haven with Arnold there? That's arguably dumber..

Steven Ramey

Not in Haven.

Jeff McCulley

If he were, it would be way too easy to wipe these guys out. Yeah, no fun there.

Jeff McCulley

They are not familiar with mirandas game.

Burkes

*Arnold and Carmen chilling at the fort.* Kindroth: They (technically) aren’t in the city!

Little Silly

Maybe even the C team.

Jeff McCulley

William & Co. We actually got a list of some that Jake wasn’t taking along.

Jeff McCulley

I think the fallen king will be revived by his true soul that's in the mask. I also think this will be a step in helping Villy revive his wife and daughter

Rob Lyon

Yeah, Arnold doubtless not only has monitors in place, but drones over it. And people have his phones.

Jeff McCulley

Really Love this idea. A great way to allow Jake's allies to show off and have both major loose ends of the system event tie off at once. Really looking forward to the next chapters.

TwoMoreYears

FAFO? Actually, they think Jacob’s dad is luring her away.

Jeff McCulley

In case people haven’t figured it out yet, Kindroth is an ambitious POS just pretending.

Jeff McCulley

Kindroth’s god is the one ordering him, not Iludar.. And Jacob’s dad is supposed to lead Miranda out of her domain. Miranda has never completely trusted Kindroth, and rightfully so. .

Jeff McCulley

I considered that Kibdroth might be serving as a double agent, but I don’t think so. That’s be too easy, these guys would just be walking into an ambush, and have zero chance. Even fun ier, if they were set up to be trial subjects of Minaga’s new labyrinth//the rolling boulder trap. No, the question right now, I think, is whether Jacob is actually messing with Jake, and setting him up. After all, it’s his dad who is supposed to be leading Miranda away.

Jeff McCulley

TFTC :) Always thought kindroth was shady after giggling about sending Jake to that scalekin planet. He was always a con man after all. I kind of hope hes a double agent luring Iludar our of hiding so Miranda and the others can go apeshit. Suggested edits: "Arnold, who was also there to observe and – if necessary – also send Carmen over." should drop one or both of the alsos. "The elf had also dug himself deep on his planet with the persona he’d created *for himself*" the two instances of himself here are unecessary maybe drop the "for himself so meaning is retained without the odd repetition. "Kindroth had *also confirmed* that every other fighter who was a major threat wasn’t around, and Iludar’s own spies had confirmed this" repetition of confirmed maybe change the "also confirmed" to checked? "“Apologize for my Guardian’s outburst. Your last encounter wasn’t a pleasant one for him either,” missed out "I" at the start "after you had already taken what you had come to take." repetition but an edit woulkd require rewriting the whole end of the sentence so thats above my paygrade. "Jake remained silent as he *merely* followed them, *as he felt* the many observers." same here with "as he" . Maybe ditch merely and change as he felt to "feeling" As always I'm merely trying to clarify the flow. Zogarth has already written 15 more books than I ever will and my efforts are all made with good intentions. Simply not merely

Xander

Carmen is there for the creature that Kindroth picked up. Jake mentioned some of the people he didn’t take. What these idiots don’t know is that Earth’s B and even prolly C team can handle them. Maria isn’t too far, and the Sword Saint is lurking about…somewhere. Whether he pops up backing up Jake or back on Earth is anyone’s guess.

Jeff McCulley

I feel like Miranda is intentionally glossed over so as not to give away just how scary she truly is when she’s in her domain, plus this will be the first time someone really attacks her domain and she can retaliate

kinglemur

Kindroth gonna pull up like “ hey I heard you were looking for these guys”

kinglemur

Like for real bro she’s a verdant witch she knew the second you appeared in her domain

kinglemur

Jake’s bouta give Madara during the 4th ninja war vibes

kinglemur

Miranda just chillin in her ritual circle since her evolution to C grade and has been doing everything via a clone of some kind and her witch domain probably covers a vast portion of earth at this point

kinglemur

Arrrgh

Jaroslav Zapadlo

It’s not the “traitorous elf” who will lead Miranda away. It said fellow Council member. So, Jacob’s dad. That said, these guys are in for a surprise. Idiots.

Jeff McCulley

I’m just waiting for Jake to do some origin energy bullshit with the mask and have a third version of the king

kinglemur

Her effective domain should be the entire planet and I don’t think they are counting on that, I don’t think anyone has truly seen Miranda in person since her evolution to c grade. I could totally see her doing everything via a highly versatile projection

kinglemur

Thanks!

Trevor Mergen

I have no doubt that the traitorous elf will lead Miranda away as planned. And while we all agree she is smart, let's take stock of what we know she can do amd how her powers work best. She can certainly cast those circles and have her summons come up and trap opponents like she did with Eron, amd she can cast Rain of Frogs. That's the extent of the Diablo III witch doctor powers she has shown, but when she leaver her Domain, she doesn't actually go. As with when she genocided those Tigers which haunted her dreams, she sends a projection. That will be the clincher when it's revealed.

The Uub

Tftc. Carmen is going to have some fun backing up Jake by being on earth. It will also be funny when arnold blasts them from space as well. I am sure Miranda is planning on some kind of backlash

Ty Cooper

I'm not the only one who thinks this Kindroth and illudar plan to lure Miranda out of her territory is mistaken. I mean Miranda never owned Haven just was in charge because Jake said so. Jake's also made her in charge of the world so wouldn't that make her territory the vast majority of Earth? I can just see Miranda walking with Kindroth when she calls him out and she explains that the entire earth is Jake's domain and because he put her in charge also her domain. Literally wiping out the vast majority of invaders with a casual wave of her hand, which also reveals the hidden fighters. It be great if hawky and misty along with Sylphie joined Vesperia and others.

William WIlson

Miranda and Jake just had the convo that she was on a planet controlled by the EE.

The Uub

While I think he could trick Jake and Miranda i doubt they tricked William. Who i also believe will be the one defending earth for now.

William WIlson

Love the A plot/B plot set up here. The anticipation is killing me. I think Kindroth is serving as a double agent for Miranda here. He has probably convinced Illudar that he is turning coat due to some loose tie between the Bright One and the Holy Church, but more than likely I think he is delivering the remnants of EH's factions directly to Miranda to be taken care of, so that he can strengthen his position with Jake/The Order once the Seat of the Exalted Prima comes back into play. The only unknown is the Child of Desolate Loss. It was hinted long ago that Kindroth looted some relic of Desolation from the battle between the Child and the Fallen King. Will that come into play here, and if so, how? The fan in me wants it to be some complex ploy to revive the Fallen King using the remenants of the false god and the Records from their battle, but I know that is pretty far-fetched.

Terrence White

TFTC

Jose Reyna

Thank you. Perfect and concise explanation. I reading about 6-8 books a week, sometimes it gets jumbled a bit. Thank You.

RiTECH

Voice of the Bright One, world leader of an enormous population. Jake went to his planet expecting a fight, but he was reasonable and started working as Miranda's right hand man basically. He was very important and helped when everyone was unsure what to think of Jake going against Villy. As a traitor he would probably be able to do a lot of damage but I personally feel he is acting as triple agent perhaps.

Namorat

I think the elf that ruled that really big planet and the “voice of the one”

Cody C

can someone remind me, who Kindroth was?

RiTECH

Bit early to say. Or are you a prophet?

John Durrett

The bright one being somewhat related to the Church is a great red Herring, but we already know the church has internal factions, and like others have said. Kindroth had been portrayed as way too smart and crafty you let some idiot strong man, who thinks it's a good idea to attack a witch in her domain, dictate his future.

kingofshibainu

Cheers Zogarth, this is gripping

Rewdan

Definitely Desolate Child

Hotep Saxis

They were caught off guard once when El'Hakan first attacked. If they haven't made preparations for another attempt, then the people around Jake are absolutel morons.

Jordan

Great chapter. Loving this arc, especially the pacing. Things are happening. The invasion of Earth is going to be hilarious. Even if Kindroth isn’t setting them up (which I think he is) the attack is going to be hilariously unsuccessful. Wondering if Jake will finally get to use the “I’m not trapped here with you…” line without interruption this time. Or perhaps a version of “I see you brought a few thousand elites. Go get another few million so the fight won’t be so boring.”

Clint

I'm thinking Kindrath is doing this just to give Jake more negotiating position when a "Church sanctioned" attack on Earth happens the moment he leaves.

ReadingObsessed

Yeah, she's legit one of my favorite characters. I feel like her power gets glossed over a bit compared to some of the more combat orient people like Jake, Carmen, and the Sword Saint. But she was legit the only person to ever really handle Eron easily, something Jake really didn't pull off. Not to mention secretly unaliving several traitors and terrorists as easily as someone ordering takeout.

Corvid

Fixed it lol

AfroMocha

I couldn’t agree more! Except… theres only one character I can refer to as the King xD

itsdlow

Also it seems unlikely that Jake and Miranda wouldn’t have noticed this disloyalty beforehand. He might be tricking Iludar (I hope).

Jared

I really hope we are about to see a top tier witch flex on the king here. No freaking way she didn't see this coming.

Corac

Insulting frog rain would be a great read

pizzadahuttt

Yeah he is capable only if he is sure Jake will win otherwise he will not he is a cockroach

Sailesh Kumar Kumar

Attacking Miranda's city is going to be an example of "play stupid games, win stupid prizes"

Dave Powell

True enough. But said sack of potatoes and his sword toting sack of onions can definitely dither enough to make it harder without being overly obvious. Either way, gonna be a fun "negotiation"

Corvid

To think that anyone could clear the prima vessel without Miranda and Arnold knowing it is ridiculous

Jane

Nah not buying it Kendroth way too smart and way too self interested to actually go along with that idiocy. First at best it’s a purely symbolic victory, with none of the major players home who gives a shit if they could burn down the house? Who would risk the wrath of Jake and the Viper just cause they did, especially when Jake’s just about to kick the holy church’s teeth in showing he wouldn’t give a shit about any factions “protection”. Second aighnt no way Kendroth is actually that loyal to anyone involved not this king, not his god, and not his gods backer either man looks out for himself first and foremost.

Kain

All the other time haven was in grave danger Jake got a sense for it. He has not had that sense yet. I think K is setting a trap for all of Cheetos remaining factions members. Miranda has been trying to hunt down the last remnants and it's be mentioned her last few chapters how annoying it's been for her. This is gonna go very wrong for the Iludar

AfroMocha

Yeah there are definitely enough suitcase nuke level fighters still on Earth or able to get there quickly that I can't see it being much of an issue. Kindroth would probably know that too, so I think this is him tossing out one final deception to help clear the board. Or in this case I guess, flip the whole table over. That's not even counting the Court of Shadows or Valhal who have probably worked out employment contracts for the defense of Earth with Miranda.

Corvid

So, after Jake killed El'Hakan, he was instructed to lay low in the hope of baiting Iludar to strike Earth while it was vulnerable and Jake was "recovering." And now the instant that Jake leaves Iludar is attacking Earth while it's "vulnerable?" Since the "How are we going to defend Earth should Iludar attack it while Jake is gone" conversation didn't occur in chapter I have to believe that it did in fact occur BUT wasn't stated in order to build suspense. To think that Earth is somehow vulnerable when it's been repeatedly stressed that it has a highly disproportionate amount of records and elites AND it has a witch that isn't a moron running the show is the height of folly. Iludar is a fool and Kindroth is doing what he does best: playing both sides against each other in order to make himself both indispensabile and trusted. I'm certain that he has a whole song and dance prepared for the Church in order to explain how failure wasn't due to him and how he's the ONLY one left to provide the Church with crucial information that they desperately need going forward. He's like Jake in the Nevermore Mail Carrier Dungeon whom both sides were using him as a double agent while in fact he was neither's agent in truth.

JJB4345_80_815

Looking forward to the comming chapters, looks like it's going to be a riot, we'll be busy with this for weeks

Sarianne Roodenburg

While I do agree, think about like how secret service would handle a president pretty much just pushing them around out of the way of harm or towards a car. With all the power C grades would have it would be pretty easy to treat Jacob like a sack of potatoes and just run away with him. That is probably why they have those high level fighters playing as priests.

Mike

Yeah, I think that is why myself and many others feel like the Child of Loss is coming up soon. Not to mention the priest guy said they had something ready if Jake came after them in the chapter where Bertram was re-summoned all cursed in front of the holy church people.

Mike

Mentioning the Child of Loss and Carmen. Didn't Villy say Carmen would be a good match up to fight it? Maybe that's why Bertram said to bring her along.

Dalton Service

I need another chapter please

Jo

Well in their defense they did mention that they lured Miranda out of Haven. But yeah it's gonna be a rude awakening 😂

Dalton Service

I think it's worth mentioning that Jacob actually wants Jake to end up getting rid of the truesoul too, he just can't be overt about it. Jacob finds it every bit as disgusting a bloodline as Jake does, so even if it turns into a fight I think he'll just phone in the escape attempt.

Corvid

Ildar about to get a beat down from earths b-team TFTC

Tom C

Let's see some more of that "Miranda is a total badass capable of standing shoulder to shoulder with Jake and the others" content!

Corvid

Yes, Kindroth doesn't strike me as the guy that relies on hiding from Jake for an undisclosed amount of time until the Universe opens back up so that he can escape and forever more has to look over his shoulder for the Chosen of the Malefic Viper to slay him for his betrayal. First, attacking Earth would mean reprisals heaped upon his planet. Second, he has such faulty information? Third, does Iludar have Jake's backing (aka a Primordial and the Order of the Malefic Viper)? (Answer, nope!) Fourth, he can always manipulate the Church into some sort of plausible deniability that it wasn't HIS fault that the attack didn't go to plan. Fifth, it's a stupid plan and Kindroth is not that stupid.

JJB4345_80_815

Yeah, have to remember that she literally cut the entire planet off from the rest of the multiverse during the Yip fight for several minutes. And she's probably leveled up even more from the campaigns after. It may have been taxing, but I don't think someone capable of affecting an entire planet like that will have much trouble putting a few thousand troops on the back of a milk carton.

Corvid

Yeah, but I'm also feeling a super strong bloodline reaction, I don't think it will care and I'm thinking the holy church is bout to be smashed. I kind of forgotten about William. Bet he is gonna play a huge role here....

Jeremiah Lambert

Not to mention a certain old man who painted a bunch of magic teleport pictures for just such an occasion. An old man who can casually put an entire planet in the obituaries almost as easily as Jake. An old man who also may or may not have an entire legion of Yakuza vampires kicking around.

Corvid

Miranda's leveled up enough through this whole campaign that I expect orbital frog lasers not just rain.

Corvid

Same, it was too unclear what was meant when he said that the Runemaiden and Void Nerd are absent. Not in the area? Possibly true, may be a traitor. Not on Earth? Clearly false, probably leading the invaders into a trap.

Jamison Schneider

I knew they wanted the sacred not-a-tree!

Corvid

Looks like William, Miranda, and Arnold are about to take care of business. That Jake did not sense the attack says it’s not too significant. Hopefully we get exploding frogs that insult your hairstyle.

KenTX325

Oh. And Minaga. I dunno if Minaga can actually do anything but wouldn't that be great if they pissed off the Mighty Minaga? :chortles:

Gingerlochs

Yeah, she chose to stay on earth to be a deterrent as no one wants to make an enemy of the endless empire and killing her will definitely do that.

Gingerlochs

Yes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth!

JJB4345_80_815

I am still on the floor rolling with laughter from this one lmao!

Mike

I don't think so. I am still holding out for the Kindroth double agent reveal but even if he really is working against earth I think the Sword saint had a feeling about something like this happening and is why he left the front lines. Also as another commenter pointed out there are quite a few strong people of earth like Sylphie, Vespy, Sky Whale and such. Also it has been said that earth top fighters do tend to be quite a bit stronger than normal even if they can't stand up to the true pinnacle elites

Mike

Right there with ya!

Daniel Brian

To my understanding the undead faction does have a place on earth but Casper is probably not there. I would assume he is working on his dungeon New Yalesten. I don't remember if we have a name for the Frost Wyvern with the budding dragons hearts but if that is who you mean that would be interesting to see him join the fray.

Mike

I was just thinking this, she is for all intent and purpose a planetary world leader. While Haven is probably more reinforced I find it doubtful she would not be able to detect foreign inbound teleports.

Mike

His inner monologue didn't lead to that being the case, maybe

Shaibene

Well I am sad all the flags about Kindroth were not a ruse to make us think he is a traitor. I mean I guess he still could be a double agent working with Earth but it seems more unlikely now. He would have been a fun ally to have. I do except the Sword Saint to already be back on earth or able to return quickly after he disappeared from the battlefield in that chapter where he was commanding the allied armies. So this should at least be an interesting battle on earth and not a true surprise attack on earth. Though when it comes to how Jakes battle will go I got no clue. That seems like a hell of a lot of members to fight while chasing after a fleeing Jacob as once a fight starts I doubt he will stay around, and it will only get worse when the desolate child of loss shows up and it will take a while for Carmen to get to Jake since she will appear above the big city and need to make her way to Jake. Should be a fun week of chapters. Depends on how stuff works out and what Zog wants to focus on first, but I do predict the week ending with the desolate child of loss appearance.

Mike

Shit you have seen trough their mirage of lies and falsehoods! This is their true objective!

Sammot

I really hope so, but if something does happen to Miranda Jake is gonna tear at least this arm of the holy church down. I don’t want it to happen but this could be a very good way of setting up another long term villain now that we’re done with yip of bore

Riley Smith

Jacob cleaning house is honestly a way better explanation than anything else I can think of.

Adurna

I am still reserving judgement because I can see K easily be a triple agent.

Namorat

Yeah he seems smart enough to jump sides. I would not be surprised to see him drop his blessing in the interest of survival.

Adurna

100%. Iludar isn’t used to being deceived, Cheeto has always been a straight forward bastard. So dealing with Kindroth will be an absolute horror show for him.

Cody

I thought she took over a couple of planets for the endless empire. She might be setting them up for colonization.

Cody

Or, he's a double double agent and he's about to lead some people into a trap

Sébastien Kingsbury

Totally agree. Kindroth is proven to be intelligent and smart and he always seems to bet on the best horse and if i remember right, jake had a good feeling about him and jake's gut is usually right so i'll trust that.

Zack Leach

The city is also Mirandas domain, making her pretty strong in it. That's why they plan to lure her out, with whatever ploy they are trying.

Tsorov

Oh no! Protect da banana!!!

Tsorov

Thanks for the chapter! I’m strongly hoping that the situation is as the speculation is going - that Kindroth is a triple-agent. While I know this is fiction, I started thinking about some recent real-world events when thinking about Heaven being attacked. It’s all very emotional.

Arieh Sochaczevski

I mean I can tell Jacob under the holy mothers guidance is cleaning fucking house.

TKOva

Miranda doesn't trust Kindroth but I also feel even if Miranda isn't in on the plan Kindroth has no chance. And there's NO way Kindroth is stupid enough to fall in line.

TKOva

Well, i'd gate to dissapoint everyonr here but, get ready for the friday cliffhanger.

Dalton Dawes

100% and he's a being that can be appeased with goods.

TKOva

My belief is that Kindroth is 100% NOT betraying Jake and his faction, but is instead helping to round up all the last dregs of Cheeto's faction to let Miranda wipe them out in one fell swoop. He has MET Jake, he knows what he is about and just how terrible of an idea it would be to betray him, and Kindroth is nothing if not the kind of guy who can see who has the winning hand through whatever smoke and mirrors bullshit the multiversity might throw at him, and will ALWAYS hitch himself to the winning star, with Jake being that star for now and forever.

Bunny Waffles

Thanks for the chapter!

Kt-x

Triple Agent maybe

NovaZero

This is clearly a ploy by the church to get there hands on them bananas

themyst95

TFTC

Loststar7

We need a exploding frog rain from amanda plz it has been teased before plz zog deliver us som frog rain

Profile Name

I believe kindroth did belong to the church, but now he bets on the winning horse and that is clearly not the church. So i think it is a trap for the trap

GraveZ

Yeah , I’m pretty sure that either Miranda already knew about Kindroth being a rat or he works for her and is double crossing Iludar, either way, this ‘attack on earth’ is not gonna go the way Iludar thinks…

Bruce Sheplan

the invasion of Haven is taking the forefront of my mind, i’m extremely excited to see how that plays out

Kevin Watson

So Bertram told Jake to keep Carmen on backup so she’s available for the little strike force? Or because they have the desolate child and she’s able to resist? Also with the combo of Miranda, Arnold, and William, the jig was up as soon as they teleported in- probably even before that

Sean

Great lead up with this Chapter. Thank you. I look forward to see how things progress from here.

Cory Sauls

Omg. Arnold has a fucking Bastion probably. I dont think for a second he hasnt fortified his lab every single time he had a new idea.

Josh

Don't forget the runemaiden.

Canis

Probably

João Gabriel

Ooo…. Fight!!! Kindroth will have a fight of his own for his betrayal!! Tyftc!

Andromeda Adams

This! This needs to be a thing!

Robert Phipps Jr (Perren d'Wolff)

Let me get this straight….he thinks the blessed of a void god called the Many Eyes and a tinkerer that builds robots and constructs doesn’t have powerful ass robots with friggin lasers. Yeah I can’t wait to see how that plays out.

Micheal Cook

The Light Elf is not even a surprise. He said he was a friend of the church. But Jake doesn't defend Earth. LOL

Michael Ferguson

Tftc

Beemoss

They think there all gone and them thinking Carmen isn't there is misinformation from kindroth probably

Psyck0

I cant beliebe kindroth to be that stupid.. underestumating earth after spending time with them? Either he got the desolate child thingy with him, or hes a doubleagent for earth...

Jan Backhaus

One thing I don't think had been mentioned is that if the church ends up with the true soul in any way after this, it sets the precedent that you can steal from Jake

Baseplate36

I just love the church going to the extent of thousands of fighters. Our boy really is "that guy"

Boffadeez

I hope we not only get to see mirana whoop ass and show why she's jake's #2 but i also cant wait to see what the church offers as a buyout for jake. EH was his prey, he pretty much announced exactly that to the universe early on in this event, and the church wants to try and swoop in and steal something from the jaws of the apex predator for this rank in the milky way? Nah.

Zack Leach

Thanks for the chapter!

Sayjinlord

Please let her go with the exploding frogs that insult your hair, the fact it exists was teased long ago and seeing someone's reaction to it would be so hilarious

fala

Well this will be fun and I really hope Miranda somehow turned the entire planet into her domain thanks to her profession of course she would be strongest in haven but a witch’s domain is a witch’s domain

Phoenixdrop

Sword saint mightve seen through this. In addition, slyhpie and other elites are still on earth. They are making the same mistake as the first invasion by ell'hakan and not taking into account people besides Jake.

BumAssBumAss

Jake’s gonna find out mid battle that earth is attacked and doa full wipe

Jordan Rogers

“(Apologies)Apologize for my Guardian’s outburst.

Alexander C Hyde

Exactly so I can only assume this is a set up by Kindroth to lure them in.

Xarow

I would agree. Kindroth comes across as such an accomplished manipulator and schemer that I feel like he's always going to arrange to side with whoever is on top. There's no way he's going to stake his life on some desperate decapitation strike to take out Earth, rather than lure out Iludar's forces to further ingratiate himself with Miranda and Jake. It's by far the safer approach.

Sachieiel

Tyftc

Frédéric Cantin

I knew that kindroth was upto no good whoever spends that much preaching is certainly upto no good

Sailesh Kumar Kumar

TFTC

Sailesh Kumar Kumar

Thanks for the chap! I’m betting on Jake killing the Elites and the Head Priests and kidnapping Jacob and Bertram as "hostages". Then leaving a ritual in the Planetary Pylon maybe ? As I sorta message for the rest of the galaxy. Also, excited to finally see Miranda in action! :)

Lizy Flore

Isn’t vespy on earth? To discourage attacks on earth?

Hayden Leech

Yeah. I think the universe is about to find out that earth's 3rd and 4th string is stronger then anyone else's 1st string.

brjenness

Miranda, Sylphie, Vesparia, Blue Whale, Dragon, and Casper vs King Illudar? Two very fun branches.

Devillelouch

The chapter starts with 3 "after"s. Maybe needs some rephrasing

BenjiVoid

I hope we actually get to see just how strong Miranda is in her domain, it would be fun seeing her go full witch

Jake Thorpe

Love Jake going all Chosen on them and love Jacob being a good friend despite everything.

A. B. Edwards

I would be very shocked if Arnold hasnt noticed the invasion instantly

RobbieDonei

There may be trouble ahead... 🎶

Daniel Francis

I cant wait for the blood bath. Kindroth is gonna be toast. Wonder how much anger his bloodlines gonna feel. Is Miranda going to be written off now?

Jeremiah Lambert

Tftc, also with the twists and lack of plot armour seriously excited for what comes next zog

Alex

Darn u

Alex

Great Chapter!

mitchell kaiser

Thanks for the chapter!

Michael Ferguson

Hopefully a double cross

jazz

Kindroth is definitely a quadruple agent it's too obvious. He's definitely been planted to weed out the rest of Cheeto fucks allies He's so suspicious that him being laid out as a traitor out in the open like this kind of makes it obvious

Valhazstromoz

I don't think Lawrence did read before commenting.

dragonslaver

Nice thank you for the chapter

joel southard

Maybe Arnold is gonna go like "Yeah your life rights have just been VOIDED"

dragonslaver

I read yo mama that fast.

Naotsugu97

Hmm, I'm excited for what's about to happen on earth. I can't really imagine earth being actually undefended. So the only question is, who's gonna give the ass whooping

dragonslaver

As soon as I read the words « strike Earth while it was vulnerable » i exploded with laughter. Not even exaggerating. Honestly have they had a look at the Nevermore Leaderboards ? Did they not know how packed with monsters Earth is ? And that’s not even counting Miranda. BAHAHA. Strike ? What do they wanna strike ? Haven ? Aka Miranda’s domain ? They forgot Miranda is a powerful Witch didn’t they. Man, am I laughing rn. This is ridiculous, and I haven’t even finished the chapter yet.

Lizy Flore

TFTC

Naotsugu97

Is it time to see a witch unleashed? Can't wait for the invasion to blow up in their faces.

SmokeJam

Thanks for the chapter

Connor

Thank u for the story

C0bra$

Lol 1 minute! That's impossible to read that fast

Rocotrap

First finally. TYFC

Lawrence


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