Chapter 1033 - Primal Hunter vs Celestial Child (10)
Added 2024-12-03 12:20:05 +0000 UTCThe dark skies above were roaring with power, the faith energy of Ell’Hakan having all gathered into one singular point. A pressure powerful enough to calm the planet briefly washed over it right after Ell’Hakan spoke as the eclipse formed.
Gone was the scorching heat of the sun, the stillness of the moonlight having completely disappeared. Instead, it was replaced with something else. It was an all new kind of concept that seemed to align with both the sun and the moon, yet surpassed both.
For a very brief moment, Jake thought back to the Tutorial when he’d used the corrupted shard on the King of the Forest and created an explosion resembling an eclipse. Back then, it had all been born from two opposing and unstable energies forcibly mixing... and in truth, this wasn’t much different.
The sun was a bringer of warmth and life. Meanwhile, the moon represented a harbinger of cold nights and the stillness of death. Mixing these two wasn’t meant to happen as they opposed one another... but it could be done, which was when another memory flashed of someone who had successfully merged opposing concepts to catastrophic results:
Minaga. During the final boss fight of his Labyrinth, the Unique Lifeform used fusion spells of fire and frost as his so-called “big spells.” What was born of a successful fusion was more than the sum of its parts, the destructive potential reaching entirely new levels.
The Celestial Child had accomplished something very similar. Jake couldn’t say if it surpassed what Minaga had done during the fight back then, but he did feel certain the scope of this was far, far larger.
And so was the cost.
As Ell’Hakan stood there, his hands spread as the world experienced a total eclipse, the rest of his remaining flesh peeled off, and his body began breaking apart even more as wide cracks formed down his entire mid-section, even the body of starlight, barely able to keep itself together anymore.
Not even a second had passed since Ell’Hakan spoke, Jake’s mind working at high speeds as he evaluated what to do. Run? No... no, his intuition made it pretty clear he wasn’t going to get away from what was coming, and even One Step wasn’t an option as space itself in a massive area was being suppressed.
Block the attack? Jake wasn’t confident, far from it. Whatever was coming would be unlike anything Jake had faced before. To even call it an attack of a C-grade seemed inaccurate... it was more akin to a mass-sacrifice attack, something used by the Holy Church through massive sacrificial rituals. The biggest difference was that the level of faith those who had sacrificed their own lives for this attack far surpassed even those the Holy Church normally had sacrifice themselves. That, and the fact the ritual was being conducted by Ell’Hakan, an incredibly powerful being himself, especially after he abandoned any future to fully immerse himself in his delusion, and the fact he was also giving up the rest of his own life to do the ritual.
So... no, blocking was out of the question.
Call for help? They wouldn’t arrive in time.
Try to negotiate? Yeah, fat chance.
Trick Ell’Hakan somehow? The dude was so far into his own delusion that Jake could bring back the “real” Celestial Child - assuming he had ever even existed in the first place - and Ell’Hakan would still proclaim himself the real one even as every single god in the multiverse vouched for the real one’s authenticity.
Jake was wracking his brain as only two options appeared... one was to do what he’d done back when he faced Valdemar in Nevermore. Pulling on his Bloodline like that came with massive risks, though, and in all honesty, Jake wasn’t sure what the result of doing so would be.
Back then, he had been in his “mortal form” due to the Challenge Dungeon. Now, he was quite evidently not, and as he vaguely remembered how he felt back then, Jake feared the consequences of using that kind of power. A lucky outcome would be to experience a period of weakness for a good while after using it, but it was equally possible he would experience some kind of permanent loss.
The point was that Jake had no way of knowing, which made him reluctant. Especially after the entire Palate of the Malefic Viper fiasco, Jake was a lot more careful about just using his Bloodline willy-nilly. Yes, it was powerful, but perhaps it was too powerful at times, and no matter how he used it, he would still have to bear the cost of its usage.
This left Jake with only one real option left in his mind... one that was perhaps the simplest when facing this kind of massive attack:
Kill the caster before he finishes fully casting the skill.
Without any hesitation, Jake pulled out his bow and started shooting. Intuitively, he knew that getting close to Ell’Hakan, who was already burning up his entire existence, would be problematic, and he was confident in dealing more damage with a bow than even if he could make contact and start stabbing while using Touch of the Malefic Viper.
The response to Jake’s attack was lackluster, to say the least. A few barriers that seemed ot almost be cast automatically appeared, blocking two arrows before the third one penetrated through and hit Ell’Hakan head-on.
It struck him in the chest, the arrow piercing all the way and leaving several cracks where it hit as if Jake had struck a statue. The second arrow had a similar result, and so did the third, but Ell’Hakan seemed unbothered as he still stood there with the trident raised as the eclipse finished fully forming and powering up.
Jake desperately kept shooting, holding nothing back. He infused every Arcane Powershot as quickly as he could to deal more damage and pushed his boosting skill above even the 60% he really didn’t want to go beyond, all to try and destroy the vessel of Ell’Hakan – or to lean into the metaphor of earlier, make the water tank fully collapse.
The arrows were weakened by the pressure from the eclipse, but they still each dealt tremendous damage. Jake’s danger sense grew as his body moved faster and faster, before he felt that the true attack was about to arrive, and he knew it was time to unleash his final gambit.
From his quiver, Jake took out a large arrow he’d been preparing in the background for a while. Just because Jake had used the Eternal Hunger arrow earlier didn’t mean Protean Arrow was out of commission, and this arrow had truthfully been ready for a while as he’d started to form it right after he’d used Eternal Hunger. He just never saw a good opportunity to use it, not before now.
Nocking the Protean Arrow, Jake took aim and charged Arcane Powershot quickly before loosing it, also pouring in every shred of Hunting Momentum he had left. Right before the arrow struck the Celestial Child, Jake pushed himself by using Primal Gaze to try and momentarily stun his foe with the hope it would assist in destabilizing his foe’s soul.
Primal Gaze activated as Jake felt his eyes about to pop out of his head from the strain as he felt like he’d just used the skill on several people at once. All the faith energy in Ell’Hakan’s body had changed his soul permanently, making it foreign and damaging for Jake to look at, which was also the reason he had been apprehensive about using Gaze throughout the fight.
Even so... despite the backlash perhaps not being worth it, the skill worked. Ell’Hakan froze right before the Protean Arrow struck him in the chest, the arrow piercing straight through him as the nahoom buckled over. Cracks formed across his entire body, making it look as if he was about to shatter, but Jake wasn’t done yet.
Now.
Throughout the fight, Jake’s Hunter’s Mark had been building up energy little by little with every blow Jake landed. Each individual hit hadn’t contributed much, but with how Ell’Hakan had just taken all the hits as he became closer and closer to a being of pure faith energy, the build-up had only increased, reaching a level beyond anything Jake was used to.
And now, he detonated that entire Hunter’s Mark all at once.
The still-keeled-over Ell’Hakan lit up as Jake detonated the charge, arcane light flashing out of every fracture and hole in the nahoom’s already broken body. It burned him from the inside as it dealt direct damage to his soul, and Jake felt the soul of the Celestial Child shudder...
Shudder, but not break.
Jake’s face fell as Ell’Hakan slowly raised himself to a standing position again. The Celestial Child looked down at Jake with an expression of scorn and arrogance, letting Jake know that he’d failed.
With his trident raised, Jake saw Ell’Hakan command the eclipse as he lowered his weapon, the celestial phenomenon obeying his command. In the sky, a black pulse of energy sent a shockwave down as a massive pillar of energy began descending toward the planet. It broke through the already damaged atmosphere, making the sky shatter and break apart upon impact as it continued down with Jake as its only target.
The dark light of the eclipse covered an area as far the eye could see, and Jake could only desperately draw his bow and shoot another arrow as the light descended toward him. The attack the Celestial Child unleashed wasn’t a super flashy one, nor did it appear very destructive. Even the atmosphere hadn’t truly been “destroyed” by the light of the eclipse... the balance keeping the struggling atmosphere whole had simply been broken by the overwhelming surge of energy.
Jake’s danger sense was going berserk as he stared at this light that seemed to bring with it only oblivion, and he knew he wouldn’t walk away from blocking it... so he did just the opposite.
His scales dispersed, all defenses scattered, and Jake refocused all of Arcane Awakening to be purely offensive. With Jake exposed, even the passive suppression of the eclipse strained his soul, but he had to ignore it as he just kept trying to somehow end Ell’Hakan before he himself met his end... but it seemed doomed.
Jake questioned what to do at that moment. His plan had failed, and in truth, he had no idea what he was truly dealing with anymore as that eclipse skill surpassed Jake’s expectations manifold. Even if Ell’Hakan died, would the attack persist? Did Jake even have a chance to end the fight here and now? Did he really need to risk using his Origin Energy to empower his Bloodline?
He had so many questions and no way to get away or do anything else but attack as the light came for him. As he faced death, Jake kept looking for the best way forward, but he needed more time... and as his sense of danger grew and the light of the eclipse drew closer, he felt his own heartbeat. It was beating fast, the stress from the fight coursing through him, but the closer the danger got, the more his heart slowed down, and when he had only a scarce couple of seconds left before the lethal attack would strike, Jake claimed the moment as his own.
Moment of the Primal Hunter.
His skill activated as Jake willed it to, his mind more focused than ever before as time slowed down all around him, his heartbeat getting slower and slower until finally… it entirely stopped.
And as it stopped, so did the world.
Skill Upgraded: Moment of the Primal Hunter (Legendary)] --> [Moment of the Primal Hunter (Mythical)]
Jake stood unmoving, not thinking about anything he’d just done, as everything was frozen in place around him, the only thing active seemingly his mind and senses. He watched the light of the eclipse and his opponent, who stood with this light as his backdrop. Jake also stared at the state of Ell’Hakan and his body, and as he analyzed the many fractures and used Sense of the Malefic VIper to understand his opponent’s state, a plan began to form.
He wasn’t sure how long had passed with the world frozen all around him, but Jake quickly began to feel an odd strain. He felt as if his soul was about to be torn from his body, and he knew he had to move and allow himself to be affected by time once more.
The second Jake moved, so did the world also slowly come alive. The eclipse light began slowly descending once more, as only now did the usual effect of Moment of the Primal Hunter trigger, with the world moving in slow motion as Jake was still moving at full speed.
He quickly drew the string of his bow and released an arrow, hitting the still-slowed-down Ell’Hakan at a certain spot in his chest where there already was a crack. A second arrow hit a second crack less than a blink later, with a third following suit nearly instantly after.
As he kept shooting, the brief Moment he’d claimed was rapidly coming to an end, but Jake wasn’t done yet. His heart was still beating, slowly getting faster, but Jake focused all his will to buy more time… but he knew it wouldn’t be enough.
Jake kept drawing his bow, and every time he did so, his perception of time always slowed down as he pulled back the string to take aim, courtesy of one of his often-forgotten passive skills. Yet now, this perceived slowdown in time only annoyed him as his body couldn’t keep up with what he wanted it to do.
He focused deeply on the sensation of time being slowed by Moment of the Primal Hunter and held on to that sensation as long as he could, hoping to get off the right amount of arrows… and as he did so, his body responded. It was unclear if Jake moved faster or the world was slower, but even as Moment came to an end, Jake kept rapidly nocking and shooting arrow after arrow, far faster than he ever could before. As Jake was fully focused on simply continuing to shoot, knowing that the second he stopped, he would lose all momentum and whatever state he was in, he even ignored the notification.
Skill Upgraded: [Steady Aim of the Apex Hunter (Ancient)] --> [Timeless Focus of the Apex Hunter (Legendary)]
By now, Ell’Hakan looked like a pincushion from all the arrows Jake had shot that stuck out of him, with eighteen arrows in total. But it wasn’t enough as Jake kept shooting even as his body screamed at him to stop.
Nineteen.
His shoulders were tearing, and blood was already streaming down his chest and arm from the cracks in his skin, but he kept shooting.
Twenty.
The arm wanted to just hang limp, but he needed two more, making Jake grit his teeth so hard his gums began bleeding as everything hurt, especially as he kept himself in his accelerated state to keep shooting.
Twenty-one...
As he loosed his final arrow, several more vessels burst in Jake’s body, but he got it off as his arm fell down his side, unmoving.
The arrow flew true and hit Ell’Hakan right in the center of his chest the very moment eclipse light also enveloped his body. Everything in Jake’s vision turned down as he was about to be consumed by the light, and he only had time to do one final thing as he sent a mental command.
Each arrow had pierced into one of the many cracks lining his opponent’s body, and Jake had placed every single one of them in a very deliberate pattern. Placed them so that the second he detonated every arrow at once, the fissures in the Celestial Child’s body and soul would widen and crack... and as everything would happen at once, not even give him a chance to keep himself together, no matter how much Willpower or how strong his delusion.
From within the dark light of the eclipse, a single flash of arcane light lit up as the twenty-two arrows embedded in the Celestial Child’s body all turned destructive and blew up at once.
Jake’s danger sense was still screaming, his heartbeat about to go crazy as his survival instinct wanted to take over... but then it disappeared. Within his sphere, he saw the body of the Celestial Child finally experience critical failure, too much damage to his soul’s integrity happening at once, making it collapse in an instant as he simply exploded.
With the dark light of the eclipse mere meters from Jake it was washed away and replaced by a wave of starlight that blew harmlessly over his body. The eclipse light was entirely gone, with wisps of starlight raining down upon the broken planet instead, each of them fragments of the Celestial Child’s soul. The moons and sun were gone, the eclipse nowhere to be seen as if it had never been there, and the world was calm once more as even all the remaining faith energy began to scatter, the “god” it had gathered around no more.
Comments
Nicely executed ending! I'm glad we got to see Jake's instincts working in a way that wasn't purely his bloodline but his own will. Looking forward to all the reactions and rewards :)
jujuxxbean
2025-05-23 22:02:14 +0000 UTCI loved the last 150 chapters or so (giving it 10/10) but this fight was way to long. A pain to read…. (2/10…maybe…)
Mattias
2025-04-23 19:59:33 +0000 UTCFinally the end to the DBZ style battle. Epic as hell. Glad it was a DBZ fight. Afterall he was hyped up to be a pinnacle type rival for Jake. Now onto the rewards from such a victory. Also TYFTC
Trumangolorian
2025-02-06 18:54:28 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Olof Karlsson
2024-12-20 22:47:34 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2024-12-17 10:32:37 +0000 UTCty4c
Roy
2024-12-15 14:25:15 +0000 UTCGood Riddence to that guy. Woo! Tyftc
Chloe
2024-12-07 13:33:15 +0000 UTCThe scales aren’t that useful to him either. It could be relative to the users.
Luke Scheffe
2024-12-06 08:43:55 +0000 UTCWhew! That was tense!! ❤️❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️
ABTelford
2024-12-05 20:14:58 +0000 UTCStill not quite an [Immortal Moment]
Endern
2024-12-04 12:14:03 +0000 UTCDon't forget that said chosen was the usurper of one of the strongest gods. It was kinda like Jake rekilled Yip at the same time.
Corvid
2024-12-04 12:07:24 +0000 UTCAlso thought about that with Jacob even being the "good Guy" with the bloodline but Jacob ist way to shitty/untalented with this hole Multiverse/His class stuffand so on to even get a bloodline in a system Event (you probably need Hella Credits/records for that) and i dont think the holy mother can Take place in a Event and giveaway the bloodline.
Max
2024-12-04 11:03:03 +0000 UTCThat seams to be really rare and/highly costly considering that even relatively few gods have bloodlines so it is’t like do a system event get a bloodline but probably requires multiple and probably even special records related to the bloodline beforehand to facilitate it. I will say it’s possible but highly unlikely
Profile Name
2024-12-04 10:58:18 +0000 UTCHis bloodline will get recycled by the system and maybe someone from the Holy Church can get like what Villy did
Sal
2024-12-04 02:52:34 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Chase Burton
2024-12-04 02:18:06 +0000 UTCp sure it was specified somewhere that he has to focus/be in combat for the skill to proc
Powers
2024-12-04 01:53:36 +0000 UTCSomewhere in the universe...two pale glowing women and one brightly glowing man look down at an orange baby..."don't worry little one, we'll help you get the evil snake worshipper." as light enters the child and he starts rapidly growing.
brjenness
2024-12-04 01:28:47 +0000 UTCEl'hakan bloodline has been recorded by the system and therefore can be claimed as a reward from a system event
Mohammed Sheekh
2024-12-04 01:26:25 +0000 UTCI wonder if the prima egg...space capsule thing is destroyed.
brjenness
2024-12-04 01:25:40 +0000 UTCCarmen won't care...especially if Artemis is willing to spar.
brjenness
2024-12-04 01:16:28 +0000 UTCYeah, that's what I've been thinking, but I still like the beer idea. Life and death struggle...Timout...my bud just sent me a beer.
brjenness
2024-12-04 01:15:13 +0000 UTCHey...who told the new guy he could talk? lol...say what you need/want to say. It can't be as annoying as all our ridiculous theories about what will/should happen. For example...that better have been a beer that Villy gave Jake.
brjenness
2024-12-04 01:14:05 +0000 UTCJake Juice, Nevermore record holder, and now chosen/planet destroyer...I'm curious to see interactions with strangers before and after they find out who he is.
brjenness
2024-12-04 01:08:55 +0000 UTCThere you go again, sitting in that dark corner, snickering and giggling. Awesome job, now can we please have the rest of the story?? Tftc.
Naomi Roberts
2024-12-04 00:37:56 +0000 UTCI'm thinking of the ripples this will cause in the multiverse. Not only did the Malefic Viper kill Yip easily but the very same day his Chosen not only kills Yip's chosen but also completely destroys his planet showing he truly is following in his Patron's footsteps.
KingGoomba
2024-12-03 23:25:54 +0000 UTCJust caught up on the chapters. It’s a shame EH went into the delusion and could only fight Jake that way. I was even rooting for him for a bit pre-delusion, he turned out surprisingly likeable. If this is truly his end with the death notification incoming, then RIP Ell’Hakan. Lonely existence though you seemed to have, you were a great foil to Jake & an interesting villain
Vega
2024-12-03 23:17:09 +0000 UTCOr Jake shooting a records distance of above 1 lightyear?
Ray Light
2024-12-03 23:00:41 +0000 UTCOoh, that would be super interesting! Perhaps a funny moment where Carmen finds out about his escapades with Artemis in the Colloseum😂
Ray Light
2024-12-03 22:59:05 +0000 UTCI think Jake would recognize a beer in an instant though...
Ray Light
2024-12-03 22:50:18 +0000 UTCEven when considering equal value that must be bargained? The planetary Pylon was rather "useless" to Villy
Ray Light
2024-12-03 22:45:24 +0000 UTCAnd the Holy Church gets nothinggg!!! (Hopefully)
Max
2024-12-03 22:03:22 +0000 UTCi was thinking this exact comment, well paced fight with fun bits of surprises or power ups sprinkled throughout, and it was nice to see some skills get some bloodline love, it’ll be great to see the archery skill and moment used in a non life or death scenario
Kevin Watson
2024-12-03 22:03:12 +0000 UTCStill waiting for the death notification...
Mia Radic
2024-12-03 22:01:23 +0000 UTCHas another false god just been created?
Mia Radic
2024-12-03 22:00:40 +0000 UTCoh shit it could be a universe wide HUNT
Kevin Watson
2024-12-03 22:00:15 +0000 UTCHe's gonna need to get a stronger bow. Maybe ask Artemis about that.
Jennifer Leigh
2024-12-03 21:36:10 +0000 UTCProbably those scales he saved for Jake.
Michael Fannon
2024-12-03 20:59:08 +0000 UTCI bet the viper sent him a beer. He had full faith in his chosen to win and didn’t need to give him anything to help, but did want to celebrate his victory even though he can’t visit himself.
spyks
2024-12-03 20:51:18 +0000 UTCLol I don't think Jake really killed all the nahoom. ElCheeto did that to fight Jake
Ty Cooper
2024-12-03 20:42:59 +0000 UTCanyone else wondering what jake got from villy?
KollegvomMirgan
2024-12-03 20:31:04 +0000 UTCEspecially if it's a fight that takes years or longer, imagine having to deal with occasional bureaucracy and having to train skills while in the middle of a life or death battle.
jord
2024-12-03 20:23:44 +0000 UTCYou bastard. How dare you end it there. It’s like you want us at the edge of our seats.
The Dregs
2024-12-03 20:22:00 +0000 UTCRest in pieces, here lies Cheeto boy, He never scored.
jord
2024-12-03 20:20:29 +0000 UTCMan I can't wait for the next chapter.
Niko Tainui
2024-12-03 20:03:57 +0000 UTCI got to think that at some point he was gonna use the heretic-chosen skill to see the past of the viper and disappear for a few seconds, but I guess that wouldn’t have worked out.
Alejandro Piña
2024-12-03 20:00:23 +0000 UTCWhoo!
Johnsmith
2024-12-03 19:56:13 +0000 UTCThere's also "Protean", which is conceptually similar, but includes implications of creation, versatility, and the ability to make/be/do anything.
kingofshibainu
2024-12-03 19:53:36 +0000 UTCTFTC finally he’s dead
Sailesh Kumar Kumar
2024-12-03 18:56:12 +0000 UTCsometimes it takes 24 hours for a kill notification to show up
brjenness
2024-12-03 18:53:10 +0000 UTCTFTC this has been an exciting fight for me!!!!
Jose Reyna
2024-12-03 18:48:27 +0000 UTCFor future events. I think Jake needs to go big in B grade. Concurring the 93 universe, taking one planet after another and defeating all who stand in the way.
KenTX325
2024-12-03 18:43:22 +0000 UTCNext is levels and rewards. Killed millions of Nahoom, upgraded 2 skills to mythical and one to legendary, killed a rival chosen, usurper, and false god. And his faction is taking control of the galaxy. Completed a bargain with a primordial. I’m thinking at least 5 levels, possibly more. Oh yeah, destroyed a planet and ended a bloodline.
KenTX325
2024-12-03 18:37:14 +0000 UTCFor sure, we start making predictions chapter by chapter , and you start questioning the logic of each play. Is one of those things that you have read in one scoop other wise you will pulling your hair out.
Victor Desantiago
2024-12-03 18:35:16 +0000 UTCI believe CC sucked up all his faith energy from across the multiverse to try and kill Jake. His flunkies should all be dead.
Ty Cooper
2024-12-03 18:27:41 +0000 UTCIt is nothing if we had it in book form or audible but they all go crazy when it is chapter a day. I admit I was shouting for him to die already but it was more like yelling at an opposite team in a sports event rather than a rush.
Ty Cooper
2024-12-03 18:24:58 +0000 UTCLol wow that went way wholesome. But the universe is open again and I could see a lull for some catching up. He hasn't seen his peeps in the order for years now.
Ty Cooper
2024-12-03 18:20:01 +0000 UTCZog the almighty cliffwriter is laughing at all the commentary from this week's daily cliffs.
Ty Cooper
2024-12-03 18:05:58 +0000 UTCI’d like to refer you all to my comment on chapter 1023 xD
Burkes
2024-12-03 18:05:01 +0000 UTCThat would be a nice twist and really set up a Jacob v Jake fight later
Tyler S.
2024-12-03 18:03:14 +0000 UTCI fucking hope not but at this point it’s expected
Kyler
2024-12-03 17:59:15 +0000 UTCAll I'm saying is... no death notification yet.
Scott Schluter
2024-12-03 17:51:00 +0000 UTCI love your work, world, and characters, but some small things are slightly suboptimal. If this kind of message is unwanted just DM me and Ill go back to listening silently :) "Sense of the Malefic VIper to understand his opponent’s state, a plan began to form" Shouldnt be a capital I in Viper "In the sky, a black pulse of energy sent a shockwave down as a massive pillar of energy began descending toward the planet." ditch the first "of energy" to make the sentence less repetitive without losing the meaning "it was more akin to a mass-sacrifice attack, something used by the Holy Church through massive sacrificial rituals. The biggest difference was that the level of faith those who had sacrificed their own lives for this attack far surpassed even those the Holy Church normally had sacrifice themselves. " The sentiment of this is all very clear but again the sentence structure is clunky. Ditch "through massive sacrificial rituals" and "sacrifice themselves" and change the end to "of the Holy Church normally had"
Stuart McCabe
2024-12-03 17:47:41 +0000 UTCwhen sylphie sees Jake, she says uncle your back. Jake says sylvie you spoke. reeee.. jake says yes u did
brjenness
2024-12-03 17:40:12 +0000 UTCI thought whatever he got in trade with the viper for the core would have come into play. Good fight though
Ben
2024-12-03 17:36:51 +0000 UTCHe ain’t RetCon from Rick and Morty.
Amathew2
2024-12-03 17:27:38 +0000 UTCWas the 5th chapter of the fight after Jake shot EH with the Arrow of eternal hunger. "He soon approached the ground, and as he did, Jake felt himself being observed from somewhere. He looked toward where someone was looking but found nothing. Frowning, Jake tried to identify the source of what observed him, but as this observer didn’t appear to hold any malice, Jake decided to not let himself be distracted as he landed only ten meters from where Ell’Hakan was lying on the ground."
TyranT-Rex
2024-12-03 17:20:34 +0000 UTCWe are only a few levels away from being able to meet the first sage, so I assume that happens next too.
TyranT-Rex
2024-12-03 17:10:56 +0000 UTCI'm pretty sure that El'Hakan is dead. I think some of the disbelief about his demise stems from how long EH has been involved in the story. We have had his influence in ine way or another since book 5. Also, a bit of questioning what happens next. So, what happens next? My conjecture, we get a rest and relaxation period and some wholesome interactions with Sylphie, followed by some skill upgrades and shenanigans at the Order, maybe I got the order incorrect. Either way, we have some way of Jake advancing through late stage and peak C Grade, and we even have some possible villains for that arc in the form of subjugation the rest of the Milky Way, the creature at the core of Earth's moon, and whatever will happen with with the recovery of the Fallen Kings vessel on the Desolate world. Or, i could be wrong on all counts, this is just conjecture.
The Uub
2024-12-03 17:05:39 +0000 UTCIf it’s to go from level 999 to level 1000, then I honestly wouldn’t mind it
Lizy Flore
2024-12-03 16:48:23 +0000 UTCI can see it now, a single fight in late S taking the majority of a book
Lynderyn
2024-12-03 16:45:02 +0000 UTCAwesome finale for this fight. Took a while, but that is just practice of patience for the perfect moment. Really looking forward to see the explanations for the skill upgrades Jake got. And thanks for not damaging him overly again, the guy has a galaxy to conquer
SmokeJam
2024-12-03 16:43:36 +0000 UTCIsn't it 10s charge time?
Johannes Sauer
2024-12-03 16:37:10 +0000 UTCIt wouldn’t be all of his forces, only the ones he had convinced he was a god, some of his forces off-world will have died I’m sure. But certainly not everyone was that loyal or tricked (like the holy churches people)
Dragon
2024-12-03 16:36:44 +0000 UTCwatch the church trot out a inherited of eh votes, but enough look at Jake and think, " dude just destroyed a planet...I think I'll vote for him"
brjenness
2024-12-03 16:30:39 +0000 UTCThis was a good fight over all, It may sound weird but I found Zog to be very grounded in this last 10 chap. I feel that he was able to capture what a peak C grade fight looks like and not go over the top with weird stuff. It was also great that he chose to restrain in the scope of Jakes bloodline, and allow it grow in what seems more natural.
Victor Desantiago
2024-12-03 16:30:19 +0000 UTClazy except for factions directly under jacob.
brjenness
2024-12-03 16:22:19 +0000 UTCNeed next chapter now :)
Craig Hilburn
2024-12-03 16:17:36 +0000 UTCEl Hakan really just hit us with a literal spirit bomb powered by the faith of his people. This is literally goku vs Freeza but Jake is freeza and elhakan is goku lol. And I guess it was goku that got cut in half not freeza. Love it!
Danny Bagley
2024-12-03 16:17:04 +0000 UTCI certainly hope so!
The Sleeping Forest
2024-12-03 16:10:29 +0000 UTCHe is part of an evil snake god cult. He is the"bad guy." There are plenty of heroes and hero parties out there. Most probably stronger than current Jake.
Deborah martins
2024-12-03 16:09:00 +0000 UTCplot twist zog is eh
brjenness
2024-12-03 16:04:13 +0000 UTCSo EH forcefully grabbed all the faith energy at the end. Now does that only cover the planet or did we get a wipe of EH’s orthodox forces, kinda like in Nevermore when the team took out all the enlightened beings who carried the Karmic curse?
Dirk Gent Lee
2024-12-03 16:03:50 +0000 UTCI have been feeling that as well, Desolate child with EH bloodline. It would be a middle ground. As long as EH is dead though Jake should take #1 on the seat leaderboard
Mike
2024-12-03 16:01:57 +0000 UTCGoddamn zogarth you know how to write a badass fight! Tmrw let’s see Jake’s GAINS!
Triggerman
2024-12-03 16:00:43 +0000 UTCI bet he does but his power lives on via some fusion fuckery by whoever took the Desolate Child fragment
Dirk Gent Lee
2024-12-03 16:00:12 +0000 UTCI'd be tempted to kick the church out of the ga
brjenness
2024-12-03 15:59:52 +0000 UTCI hope he’s dead, cause I’m ready for a new long term adversary (probably whomever collected the desolation child remnants)
shawn B
2024-12-03 15:59:40 +0000 UTCNice, finally turfed him.
liquid_helix
2024-12-03 15:53:32 +0000 UTCIt's sad but I am at about 90% that EH lives on in some way and 10% that he is dead for good. Overall fight was good IMO, I didn't mind the length at all. Someone else already mentioned it in these comments but the explanations of the abilities in this chapter did feel a little like explaining after the fact. The skill upgrades are peak! Love the new steady aim upgraded throwing in the timeless tag, and I really love the direction moment is going in. Instinct is good when you have an OP bloodline but sometimes when your back is against the wall you just need a moment to think and to plan. Jake using his head and not just his gut is great and this leans perfectly into that. I wonder if we will even see Jake level from this fight since they were so close in level lol, can't wait to see the notification next chapter and hopefully I am wrong and that 10% comes out on top.
Mike
2024-12-03 15:51:22 +0000 UTCLove the chapter, I was expecting eternal huger to ear a lot more of the faith energy.
Grey Grick
2024-12-03 15:48:22 +0000 UTCOhw I hope that is not true. Him being a “reincarnation” just makes him less “unique”
Eiv
2024-12-03 15:47:37 +0000 UTCJake can still use the instant teleport to Earth from his ring right?
Eiv
2024-12-03 15:45:32 +0000 UTCThat’s our boy! Get those upgrades!
Michael mann
2024-12-03 15:40:42 +0000 UTCWow! Go Jake! That’s how it’s done! Tyftc!
Andromeda Adams
2024-12-03 15:40:18 +0000 UTCI kinda forgot about that, I would much prefer this to EH living in some fashion. We will just have to wait and see tomorrow if we get a kill notification.
Mike
2024-12-03 15:39:02 +0000 UTCNoice 👌
ReadingObsessed
2024-12-03 15:38:26 +0000 UTCIt's the true nevermore forevermore but the Eternal Jake vs EH lol. The fight is for sure over but is EH truly dead? I don't know but one can only hope...
Mike
2024-12-03 15:37:21 +0000 UTCWe can only hope...
Mike
2024-12-03 15:36:07 +0000 UTCI won't believe him dead til we see the kill notification! Zog has set up so many ways for him to somehow slip away, I feel it is almost certain. Someone mentioned it a while ago but it is hard to make a villain fans truly hate, so why kill him off when you can have Jake vs EH forever. Now I think I sit in the same camp as most of us saying that would suck but it's for sure a possibility.
Mike
2024-12-03 15:31:04 +0000 UTCThe church is bigger than EH. Without him, the open antagonism with Jake will diminish and the thousand of planets they control will move on. Before this fight, there were some part talking about how the main conflict would not be taken to them, focusing in EH other allies.
Gustavo Claude
2024-12-03 15:26:01 +0000 UTCIt was several chapters ago shortly after they came back up to the surface of the planet during the fight I think
Aurelius
2024-12-03 15:19:51 +0000 UTCUnless the holy church scooped his soul. If anyone can heal soul damage from an overload of faith energy, it would be the holy church
austin kutz
2024-12-03 15:18:54 +0000 UTCAwesome.e
TwistedVanity
2024-12-03 15:16:44 +0000 UTCI think CC is gonna be fused with the CoD by the same rando who recovered the God's "corpse" in that box.
Vinstro
2024-12-03 15:16:22 +0000 UTCSo my crackpot theory. The First Sage had a hand in all the Primordials, I think he also created origin energy. The System leaks into non integrated universes as we can see through why myths and folk lore all are actually true things in the multiverse. I think that Origin energy leaked into the universe and somehow helped create Jake.
Klown Keidra
2024-12-03 15:10:38 +0000 UTCAssuming he isn't a reincarnation of the first sage or something similar.
James Cobb
2024-12-03 15:09:44 +0000 UTCI think the church will shrug. They made a play for a powerful resource, it did not work out. Why make a long term enemy out of the Viper's Chosen over something that in the long run, is small potatoes. The Church has 92 universes of experience, they absolutely play the long game. As for Jake, he removed them from his planet, he'll let Miranda squeeze them a bit if possible and then he'll move on as there is no direct grudge or threat. Jake won't care as long as the church doesn't attempt to make a deal out of it.
Darshar Griffonmane
2024-12-03 15:07:05 +0000 UTC"I didn't hear no bell" - where's that slain notification!?
Ray Williams
2024-12-03 15:03:14 +0000 UTCThe faith energy will go to the desolate child
Sargon Yami
2024-12-03 14:56:15 +0000 UTCI believe what they are talking about is right before this 10 or 11 chapter fight started. Jake or Cheeto sensed someone observing them as they prepped for the fight. I don't remember the exact chapter but it wasn't too long ago.
Darshar Griffonmane
2024-12-03 14:55:36 +0000 UTCPretty sure it will be Right the First sentence tomorrow
Bent Sommer
2024-12-03 14:52:22 +0000 UTCNo kill notification
The Sleeping Forest
2024-12-03 14:46:30 +0000 UTCThough there wasn't a cheeky one liner from Jake to finish it, still satisfying. Now who wants to bet 20$ EH is dead but CC just became a false god?
Jacob Feliciano
2024-12-03 14:41:20 +0000 UTCAmazing fight, tftc! I don’t think EH is becoming a false god now, though, after sacrificing everyone. Unless there r people left or I’m not understanding how false gods form lol. Also people keep talking about someone observing the fight, could someone please tell me where that is?
Lucy
2024-12-03 14:41:09 +0000 UTCAbout time
Lonnie
2024-12-03 14:33:59 +0000 UTCAnd this, Children, is why the Primal Hunter blew up the sun and made the moon his pitch.
NovaZero
2024-12-03 14:30:48 +0000 UTCThat's CHOSEN heretic to you, buckos!
NovaZero
2024-12-03 14:26:20 +0000 UTCNice thank you for the chapter
joel southard
2024-12-03 14:25:09 +0000 UTCWe all know how zog likes to play with kill notifications. It's absence is suspicious af
Mrburns93
2024-12-03 14:24:33 +0000 UTCOH VILLY when tomorrow's chapter has the unique cheeto skill basicly revive him just so Jake's bloodline can off him again I'm going to be rolling in the comments. It's only Tuesday 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
Ira White
2024-12-03 14:21:17 +0000 UTCJake turning moment of the primal hunter from simple time slowdown to a SUPERHOT clone gave me quite the lol
AetherBoye
2024-12-03 14:09:45 +0000 UTCTFTC! What a great fight!
Cory Sauls
2024-12-03 14:08:56 +0000 UTCI think Miranda will be the one having a PR nightmare from the aftermath. Jake is mostly likely getting credit for the planetary sacrifice and who will be buy the “don’t worry about the Order of the Malefic Viper” story
Mat
2024-12-03 14:05:10 +0000 UTCImagine how dangerous it would be for anyone to ever talk to Jacob again with his natural charisma + augur abilities + EH’s bloodline.
Jacob Conway
2024-12-03 14:04:22 +0000 UTCFirst off, boom, I called the Moment upgrade. Makes sense, both thematically and conceptually. Second, the Steady Aim upgrade. This is one of the few times we get a system-assigned name for one of the concepts tied to Jake’s bloodline (it’s tied to the bloodline because it seems that he used one of the concepts from Moment and added it to Steady Aim). “Timeless.” So the official terms so far include: Primal, Perennial, Timeless, Primeval (Origins). We also have Eternal from Eternal Hunger/Eternal Shadow, though I think it’s unclear how much Jake influenced that one. Aside from clear aspects of Superiority in some of these, the connecting thread is the idea of something not only existing, but existing during the first stage of something and forever after that. Honestly… the dictionary says the word for it is Primodial, which I don’t know how to reconcile.
Spencer Miller
2024-12-03 14:02:08 +0000 UTCOr all the faith energy with no way to go will be funneled to the Desolate Child
Mat
2024-12-03 14:02:04 +0000 UTCPretty good conclusion to the fight. Much needed upgrade to moment, and a surprise upgrade for a skill I forgot existed. Enjoyed the breaking planet combat and scale, and EH's moveset was pretty freaking cool. If I had to rate it vs the other finale fights though, I would have to give it last place. It didn't feel very stressful at all or like a difficult win all the way up until eclipse. Lots of retroactive explanations for why we weren't seeing moves, that while it made since, feels like excuses when mentioned after the fact for why we aren't seeing certain moves, strategies or abilities. Knowing his soul looks different so he's not using primal gaze would have been better transmitted to us if he attempted gaze earlier and felt backlash from the attempt, instead of him just already knowing it would do that, as that helps us feel like we are learning along with Jake, instead of author exposition filling in what Jake just knows and we don't. The biggest detractor was that Jake had already won, what, 5 chapters ago? So everything after that has felt like it's just a time sink or stretch, especially since the delusion of the celestial child is an enemy I had no investment in. Abandoning EH's personality so early in is an error in my personal opinion, doesn't feel satisfying killing a delusion, that was much more durable than it should have been. Also would have been more satisfying in my opinion of Jakes final attack was a protean arrow or spaced out over time, sneakily prepared instead of machine gunned at the very end with the celestial child doing no maneuvers or dodging. If he already had the plan in mind and had set up most of the arrows in his cracks while fighting, and the final clash he only needed one or two more, but couldn't see how to get past the celestial childs defences, and used moment to find the gaps in his barriers and the other skill to fire arrows to weaken areas of the barrier, penetrating in the final seconds to place the last arrow, would have felt better. Just feels like a step down in fighting ability when the big bad just lets you pelt them full of arrows, instead of actually having to subvert defences or sneakily have to prepare the attack. It makes the celestial child seem stupid and not actually tough. I could see the sword saint or even possibly the fallen king being able to kill the celestial child form, while when he was fighting EH, I don't think they could have done it. Just seemed like a step down from the earlier chapters, so the climax felt like it was trying to reclaim the intensity from the first half of the fight, but not quite reaching it. Despite how much it was said Jake was in danger or how much more dangerous it was, I could never really feel it. After the eternal hunger arrow, too much of the momentum of the fight was lost for it to not feel like it was stretching the end. The atmosphere in the fight was cool, and I think it was a good conclusion to the beef between Jake and elhellkan, but I don't think it reaches the duel with valdemar, the sword saint, the king of the forest, or minaga. Now that the fight is over, I'm kind of waiting to see how villy and Jake are gonna recover Jakes image after that whole charade before villies fight. They gonna try to cover up that Jake is a heretic? Or is villy just gonna be like " Of course I knew he was a heretic, it's why he is my chosen" or something funny like that. I'm really looking forward to the upcoming chapters and Jakes rewards for the fight and trade
Strlo
2024-12-03 14:00:31 +0000 UTCHonestly, I believe that EH has had his moment, he was never truly a threat to Jake, and now that the nahoom are extinct, or severely depleted with only the offworlders left, EH has nothing, as his biggest threat was that faith from his people. His only value is his bloodline to the church, amd his removal opens up the church taking a more direct antagonistic approach to Jake. Remember what Jacob said, the only loser in this fight would be the church, with EH gone, now the church has to get involved. With EH around, he'll be too broken to be anything other than a speed bump, if he's still the celestial child the church would smack him down for daring to try and usurp their belief system which he inevitably would. IF EH Is around in any form, it flies in the face of everything we've been told about destruction of a soul, which Jake witnessed happening to EH. Personally, I'd like to see a soul fragment containing the bit of Yip of Yore, make its way to some new big bad, maybe with a touch of EH but distinctly NOT EH.
Darthnarciss
2024-12-03 13:59:48 +0000 UTCAs long as the sun father and the moons mothers exist, the Celestial Child is eternal
Mat
2024-12-03 13:54:51 +0000 UTCYou know next chapter is going to be all those juicy notifications
Ben Heystek
2024-12-03 13:54:28 +0000 UTCiv been saying he isnt going to die yet but i feel like he will be a issue later there are to many enemy currently we need some eliminated but ekhakan isnt one of them done yet he will be in the holy churchs scams
Steven Tuttle
2024-12-03 13:53:35 +0000 UTCOh boy he just upgraded some skills
Phoenixdrop
2024-12-03 13:51:31 +0000 UTC“The arm wanted to just hang limp, but he needed two more, making Jake his teeth so hard his gums began bleeding as everything hurt, especially as he kept himself in his accelerated state to keep shooting.” Forgot a word here, “making Jake clench his teeth” or “making Jake grind his teeth” would make sense.
Cody
2024-12-03 13:49:51 +0000 UTCIf it was Jake’s decision, he would kick them out. Miranda will be the one to handle all the PR nightmare aftermath and she will have to go the diplomatic root. Jake can afford to have the church as an enemy but not Miranda.
Mat
2024-12-03 13:49:19 +0000 UTCKill notification?!
shawn B
2024-12-03 13:48:15 +0000 UTC"A few barriers that seemed ot almost" Ot - to "and as everything would happen at once, not even give him a chance to keep himself together, no matter how much Willpower or how strong his delusion." Second part doesn't flow well I think, maybe change (not even give) to (he would not have). Or something like that. Great fight scene zogarth! Keep up the good work.
Joseph Coonelly
2024-12-03 13:43:48 +0000 UTCIf he doesn’t get revived, the Holy Church will be gunning for that bloodline pulling all the stops.
Mat
2024-12-03 13:43:43 +0000 UTCWeird that the world is calm as it was supposed to be in self-destruction, maybe I'm overthinking it but feels like an effect of the bloodline dying?
Bladehawk256
2024-12-03 13:43:14 +0000 UTCI'm guessing the person watching the fight from before the void sphere was Jacob who was also the person that grabbed and sealed what was left of the Desolate Child. I'm guessing he's going to do the same to EH who has already become a False God and would eventually reform.
Bi-Dailey
2024-12-03 13:43:01 +0000 UTCTFTC!!
NickDeck
2024-12-03 13:40:41 +0000 UTCOdds are EH has become a false god like the desolate child, who also didn't have a kill notification. I'm guessing he'll become a problem later, but not as big of one as he is now. Jake just beat him at EH's absolute peak, so if he shows up again, he'll probably be more of a complication than a proper antagonist, and certainly not a Big Bad.
Bi-Dailey
2024-12-03 13:39:19 +0000 UTCI really liked this fight! I hope next chapter starts with a kill notification and some achievements. Im sure Zogarth has something interesting planned! We shall see tomorrow…
Bruce Sheplan
2024-12-03 13:32:57 +0000 UTCNow that EH is dead, the system has reclaimed his bloodline Said bloodline is now up for grab as an event reward in the future
Abriel Blauer
2024-12-03 13:31:31 +0000 UTCThanks!
Trevor Mergen
2024-12-03 13:30:18 +0000 UTCNext time on The Adventures of Jake!
Michael McMahon
2024-12-03 13:27:59 +0000 UTCNo kill notification or Yip of Yore secret. Maybe a god snipes the bloodline and gets the secret or EH becomes a roach. Good: The upgrades were good and there is a fun Aeon connection. Bad: Three unresolved threads(YoY, Watcher, and William). 1 upgrade put in around ch 4 and about 1 chapter worth of content cut and I think the fight is a 9, as is 8.
Devillelouch
2024-12-03 13:27:41 +0000 UTCYeah... but where's the kill notification?
SilverSentry
2024-12-03 13:27:16 +0000 UTCYeah grit or clench is more fitting. Grind would be used if Jake was angry
Lucky Luke
2024-12-03 13:26:53 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter;
Kt-x
2024-12-03 13:26:21 +0000 UTCI don't see the notification
Grace Fuentes
2024-12-03 13:25:08 +0000 UTCFantastic end to the fight! Thanks for another wonderful chapter!
Zizawah
2024-12-03 13:25:06 +0000 UTCBomb chapter! That was exhilarating! Tyftc!
Justin Moen
2024-12-03 13:24:53 +0000 UTCWoo! Cheeto is finally dead!! Nice ending. So tomorrow is all the aftermath and skill upgrade notifications with Jacob showing up to talk right at the end of the chapter? That's my guess. I am looking forward to seeing what moment upgraded to. Out of the 3 that is whatvi am most excited to see.
Ty Cooper
2024-12-03 13:23:31 +0000 UTCThat's why they are banished from earth, they aren't gonna come back
Mohammed Sheekh
2024-12-03 13:22:50 +0000 UTCNow the question is what to do with the church. A lot of people sided against Jake because they were backing yip of yore but the church was explicitly backing orange boy and not yip of yore. They choose deliberately to be Jake's enemy and back his personal enemy.
Thatguycant
2024-12-03 13:21:25 +0000 UTCOh yeah true lol
Mohammed Sheekh
2024-12-03 13:20:52 +0000 UTCNo.
KollegvomMirgan
2024-12-03 13:19:54 +0000 UTCgrit makes more sense. you dont grind your teeth in pain.
Gavin Wayne Pitcher
2024-12-03 13:19:24 +0000 UTCIt’s not over ‘till the kill notification sings
Pantheon
2024-12-03 13:18:04 +0000 UTCYEAH BOII, THESE UPGRADES ARE WHAT I WAITED FOR!!!
BumAssBumAss
2024-12-03 13:15:53 +0000 UTCI feel like when Aeon "claimed" a moment it was much more literal. Like Aeon owns that moment in time too this day and even made it into an item of some kind. Jake just kinda took control for a moment and in a much smaller area.
Andy Swearingen
2024-12-03 13:15:07 +0000 UTCMalefic VIper--Viper
Titaniumtac
2024-12-03 13:12:58 +0000 UTCProbably next chapter
butterfly
2024-12-03 13:12:21 +0000 UTC"A pressure powerful enough to calm the planet briefly washed over it right after Ell’Hakan spoke as the eclipse formed." In the first paragraph I believe using the word "and" flows better with the sentence than "as" "A pressure powerful enough to calm the planet briefly washed over it right after Ell’Hakan spoke and the eclipse formed." Using "and" also implies his spoken word "eclipse" happened simultaneously with the event taking place.
MistuhBogan
2024-12-03 13:10:25 +0000 UTCTftc
Beemoss
2024-12-03 13:10:22 +0000 UTCUniversal. There were no other universes then
The lord of chaos
2024-12-03 13:09:41 +0000 UTCI think it depends on the outcome. 10 chapters of fighting for EH to still be around would be quite annoying
Anthony Nonhof-Fisher
2024-12-03 13:09:08 +0000 UTCI think he did both at the same time.
Jennifer Leigh
2024-12-03 13:02:07 +0000 UTCChapter 1034 - Primal Hunter vs Celestial Child (11) Ell’Hakan was born again as his world cracked like an egg. From the ashes of his world he was renewed like the phoenix he just always, ALWAYS knew he was. …
Xarow
2024-12-03 13:01:57 +0000 UTCYeah
Lucky Luke
2024-12-03 13:01:17 +0000 UTCI hope his transcendent if he ever gets one is related to using his bloodline abilities more without getting fucked up by them I bet he’ll be inspired by the sage or something
Borbino the great
2024-12-03 13:00:09 +0000 UTCIs he though? No kill notification...
Ray Light
2024-12-03 12:59:22 +0000 UTCIt's about time!! Though the lack of a kill notification is worrisome....
David
2024-12-03 12:59:01 +0000 UTCBruh. You're not supposed to attack Goku while he's charging the spirit bomb.
thendavesaid
2024-12-03 12:57:49 +0000 UTCWas it though? No kill notification..
Ray Light
2024-12-03 12:57:49 +0000 UTCOr clench? Grind?
Ray Light
2024-12-03 12:56:39 +0000 UTCTftc
Noah Mclelland
2024-12-03 12:56:36 +0000 UTCThis has been good but it feels like the chapters were broken up almost too much making this outcome too predictable with how much time was given between chapter releases. I think it will be much better as a continuous flow when it comes out in book form. Fun read though
Dallin S
2024-12-03 12:55:49 +0000 UTCJake started playing super hot. Nice chap. Next one we reap the rewards.
Martino Zanchi
2024-12-03 12:54:57 +0000 UTCKill noti?! I'm ready for all the reactions to this deadly fight
A Flashy BR
2024-12-03 12:54:06 +0000 UTCThe arm wanted to just hang limp, but he needed two more, making Jake grind* his teeth so hard his gums began bleeding as everything hurt, especially as he kept himself in his accelerated state to keep shooting.
Lucky Luke
2024-12-03 12:53:19 +0000 UTCNo notice. I hope the start of tomorrow’s chapter isn’t EH somehow being reborn with 100% health, stamina, and mana.
KenTX325
2024-12-03 12:51:45 +0000 UTCCurious... isn't the wording "Jake claimed the moment as his own" similar to what Villy described as how Aeon made his transcendence? Or was it the moment/how he became a god? tftc
Naotani
2024-12-03 12:51:17 +0000 UTCThis was an amazing end to the fight!
Winterwood
2024-12-03 12:50:05 +0000 UTCTftc. Seemed like a great opportunity to use the ring.
Goa
2024-12-03 12:49:26 +0000 UTCEl'hakan (cheeto man) is not gonna die sorry guys, the world wonder arc lines up too perfect with him alive, wouldn't make sense to kill him off here
Mohammed Sheekh
2024-12-03 12:49:21 +0000 UTCNo kill notification
AfroMocha
2024-12-03 12:48:51 +0000 UTCPerfect
Juozapas
2024-12-03 12:48:43 +0000 UTCI was happy till I saw this. You are completely right...
Samuel Nelson
2024-12-03 12:48:18 +0000 UTCWoooo!
Samuel Nelson
2024-12-03 12:47:25 +0000 UTCDon't forget about his ring that can teleport him to earth whenever he wants, so he's fine
Mohammed Sheekh
2024-12-03 12:46:51 +0000 UTCZogarth you have surpassed yourself. This is absolutely amazing thank you.
Rewdan
2024-12-03 12:43:22 +0000 UTCHell ya great fight scene Zogarth!
greg belokopitsky
2024-12-03 12:43:07 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! It was exciting.
Arieh Sochaczevski
2024-12-03 12:42:57 +0000 UTCYes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth!
JJB4345_80_815
2024-12-03 12:42:34 +0000 UTCStill waiting for the kill notification
Abriel Blauer
2024-12-03 12:42:12 +0000 UTCThe next chapter is going to be full of notification and long ass descriptions... 😂
Navdeep Kumar
2024-12-03 12:41:55 +0000 UTCTTFC
Dave
2024-12-03 12:40:59 +0000 UTCThe arm wanted to just hang limp, but he needed two more, making Jake (grit) his teeth so hard his gums began bleeding as everything hurt, especially as he kept himself in his accelerated state to keep shooting.
Alexander C Hyde
2024-12-03 12:39:12 +0000 UTCThe stronger Jakes Soul gets the more his bloodline is going to upgrade his skills without system nerfing it. It's the impression I get. Villa said it before that the system probably kept his bloodline from turning his to beyond legendary to not outright kill him.
NoctisMi
2024-12-03 12:37:48 +0000 UTCI have a dreadful feeling that the new Desolate Child will merge with the Celestial Child, and we'll get a "surprise" bullshit enemy. I hope not, but I got this gut feeling as we didn't get a kill notification
Wheels42
2024-12-03 12:37:32 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
BlackRazaras
2024-12-03 12:37:31 +0000 UTCWell it looks like Jake might need some R and R for a little bit after this fight but honestly with El'Cheeto gone if they can take out that Emporer/King guy the galaxy will belong to Jake almost completely. Great writing Zog can't wait to see what Jake does now.
Pickled Rick
2024-12-03 12:36:40 +0000 UTCͼ(ݓ_ݓ)ͽ beautiful
Joshua landry
2024-12-03 12:36:26 +0000 UTCI knew he was gonna upgrade moment
eatingpitza314
2024-12-03 12:35:58 +0000 UTCLet's go the orange fuck is dead wooo
butterfly
2024-12-03 12:35:24 +0000 UTCWe'll get it next chapter in the aftermath I bet. That is just too perfect a place to end the chapter.
Stevean Bozek
2024-12-03 12:35:14 +0000 UTCVeryy nice. Tftc
Jeremiah Lambert
2024-12-03 12:34:30 +0000 UTCTftc
Chris Warner
2024-12-03 12:34:26 +0000 UTCTo the guy in the comments last chapter asking about Gaze, Momentum and Charge - there you go haha
Vincent Schneider
2024-12-03 12:34:24 +0000 UTCI knew his fight with Ell'Hakkan would be hard fought and push Jake to new limits but that was probably his closest fight since The King of the Forest. Far too close to complete annihilation at the hands of a man who was already dead 1000000000x over. Absolutely wild final showdown.
Stevean Bozek
2024-12-03 12:34:17 +0000 UTCI hope it’s the first thing we see tomorrow
John Looney
2024-12-03 12:33:53 +0000 UTCEeeh. Ttfc
Exaiter
2024-12-03 12:33:25 +0000 UTC"And then the planet exploded as Jake had totally forgotten about the pylon being sold off for some beer" Now we see if there is any last second POV from the cheeto. Jake upgraded 2 skills and hes seriously starting to dive into the time affinity/aspect of his skills. I wonder if we will start to see Aeon start to pay him some attention as Jake ascends to and through B rank. Not the transcendent skill I was thinking Jake might create but we are on the path to it I hope. Great fight! tyftc
Darshar Griffonmane
2024-12-03 12:32:53 +0000 UTCTftc
Frost1005
2024-12-03 12:32:14 +0000 UTCYaaaaaaaaaaaaasssss
Inneedofducks
2024-12-03 12:31:55 +0000 UTCNo kill confirmation notification 😬
Djinko
2024-12-03 12:31:05 +0000 UTCNice ending
Keldra
2024-12-03 12:30:53 +0000 UTCWhew what a ride.
Gavin
2024-12-03 12:30:37 +0000 UTCTftc
Matthias
2024-12-03 12:30:11 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Callumcleverley
2024-12-03 12:29:10 +0000 UTCYAS
Lizy Flore
2024-12-03 12:28:52 +0000 UTCI was so focused on this chap that when it ended i thought it was a shorter one... nope. Just that good of a chap
Joseph Serret
2024-12-03 12:28:51 +0000 UTCRemember everyone nothing's dead till you get the kill notification...........having said that HELL YEA TAKE THAT ARROW UP YOUR CELESTIAL ASS YA EGOCENTRIC PRICK!!
Valhazstromoz
2024-12-03 12:28:20 +0000 UTCMaybe because el Hakan is already considered dead by the system? This should just be a random delusion of his that still persists.
Unlisted Pokémon Hudson
2024-12-03 12:27:24 +0000 UTCFinally got some good records from this Cheeto fuck
Michael Ferguson
2024-12-03 12:27:19 +0000 UTCTyftc
Frédéric Cantin
2024-12-03 12:27:13 +0000 UTCCan’t wait to see the aftermath!
mitchell kaiser
2024-12-03 12:26:44 +0000 UTCHoly, TFTC
Paulo Furlaneto
2024-12-03 12:26:24 +0000 UTCLet’s gooooo
Unlisted Pokémon Hudson
2024-12-03 12:23:33 +0000 UTCI didn’t see a kill notification
Bob Fight
2024-12-03 12:23:26 +0000 UTCThank u for the story
C0bra$
2024-12-03 12:21:20 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Connor
2024-12-03 12:21:18 +0000 UTCThanks!
I Solis
2024-12-03 12:20:24 +0000 UTC