Chapter 901: When People See My Powers
Added 2024-05-22 23:00:03 +0000 UTCLife force was an odd thing. The more Jason rose in rank, the more his body became an arbitrarily shaped collection of blood, flesh and bone. The very concept of life force was increasingly divorced from the condition of his body, becoming more like abstract health points from a game.
The way life force manifested at high levels differed from person to person. For most, they seemed impervious to damage when their life force was high. Their health points were reduced with minimal, if any, injury to show for it. For others, including Jason, it worked differently. Like a vampire, his body seemed almost too vulnerable for its rank, yet instantaneously healed outrageous and seemingly lethal injuries.
Valdis was well versed in the variations of life force. For all the damage he had unloaded on Jason, he knew there was no one-shotting a gold-ranker. The moment his attack landed, he dashed back to avoid dagger-wielding shadow arms. Staying on the move, he unleashed another of his big-ticket attacks, Blade Wave Barrage. As the name suggested, it sent a storm of razor-sharp force waves in Jason’s direction.
By the time they arrived, Jason’s segmented body had already made itself whole. Strands of blood had reached out, grabbed the chunks of his body and yanked themselves back together as if nothing had happened.
Jason pulled his cloak around himself, appearing as if he were a portal to a starry void. Valdis believed it was nothing but more theatrics until his blade waves shot through the portal and sailed off into the void.
“Wait, what?”
***
In the participants lobby, Emir and Constance were lounging by a projection screen watching the fight and listening to the commentary. He had a beverage in a long-stemmed glass, while she was empty-handed, keeping her mind on her own upcoming fight. Although she had reached gold rank, she had always been a better administrator than fighter. She was nervous about fighting in front of such a large crowd. Emir didn’t care, being fighter enough to have long ago learned how to take the losses.
He chuckled when Valdis’ attack vanished through Jason, who was apparently now the living portal he looked like.
“I was waiting for that,” he said, saluting the projection screen with his glass before sipping from it.
“What was that?” Constance asked.
“That cloak ability of his,” Emir said. “Most people think that the gold-rank ability just turns you insubstantial, and it does, but that’s more of a secondary effect. What it really does is become an aperture to a dimensional space. I know a guy who likes baiting charge attacks into it. Living things kind of pop back into normal reality, but it messes them up quite badly.”
“That sounds strong.”
“Very. It’s a fantastic ability, but timing and judgement is everything. The mana consumption is apparently heinous, so you have to pick your moments carefully. I’ve never known anyone who could sustain it for more than a few seconds at a time.”
The commentator was likewise astounded by the turn of events.
“What did we just see? Have my eyes gone wonky? Judging by the roar of the crowd I can hear all the way from my booth, I’m going to say no! Our dark sorcerer just turned into a hole in the universe that sucked away our hero’s attacks! We thought the prince had finally caught the villain by the ankle, but he’s once again on the back foot!”
“What exactly is the point of this man?” Constance asked. “We can see what’s happening without him explaining things.”
“It’s about excitement,” Emir said. “There’s nothing wrong with a little showmanship. Jason understands that very well.”
“A little too well,” Constance pointed out. “And I don’t think this commentator is very good. I think he’s meant to be contextualising the curated events being slowed down and displayed, but he’s mostly just yelling.”
“WOO!” The commentator yelled. “Distracted by whatever we just saw, Prince Valdis is once more fleeing the creepy dagger trees. The crowd is going absolutely wild! It feels like the roof could blast right off the arena. Ted, what did I tell you about coming into the booth while I’m…”
There was some mumbling through which only a few words could be made out.
“…why would maintenance… imprinting on what... you said covering it with a wet towel would…”
“Yes,” Emir said. “I think you’re right about him not being very good.”
The commentator returned, sounding much more subdued.
“Sorry about that, audience. I’ve been asked to very specifically assure you that the arena is not going to blow up. On a completely unrelated note, I’ll be taking a short break, during which my assistant, Ned, will be taking over commentary.”
“What?”
“Get in here, Ned.”
“I don’t want to, Ted. You heard what they—”
“Get in the damn chair, Ned!”
There were sounds of shuffling.
“Uh, hello. I’m Ned.”
“Gods bedamned, Ned, talk about the action!”
“Oh, uh, Prince Valdis seems to have resumed his attacks on Asano’s real body—”
“Call him the dark sorcerer, Ned.”
“That seems weird.”
“Just do it!”
“Um, okay. Valdis is once more attacking Dark Sorcerer Ned in a series of hit-and-run exchanges—”
“Don’t call him Ned! That’s your name!”
“You said to call him Dark Sorcerer Ned. Everyone heard you.”
“Oh, sweet gods.”
***
Valdis was getting a handle on dealing with the shadow arms. They were impervious to normal attacks, but his Spectral Slash could easily destroy them. Asano was then forced to recreate them to keep the pressure on in the face of Valdis’ speed. That also cost mana, which was now an important factor. That cloak portal trick could absorb almost any attack, but anything that powerful had to burn through mana like fire in a paper factory.
Asano was adapting in turn, however, using the shadow arms to limit the potential angles of attack. He was also more skilled with the arms attached to his own body, one of which used a sword instead of a dagger. Even so, Asano was taking solid hits on a regular basis. Valdis had a variety of special attacks, letting him mix up trickiness and raw power. He was also just faster. If not for Jason’s absurd regenerative power, the fight may well have been over, but it was like trying to fell a tree that kept growing back.
The potency of Asano’s healing was bad for Valdis, who preferred a more in-and-out approach. He was forced to go on the offence harder, burning more mana and taking more hits himself. If he ran out of mana or Sword Soul capacity before Asano ran out of health, it was over.
Asano pulled out the orbs belonging to his familiar again. Valdis was able to break them down using his array of tailored attacks, but it cost him critical time. He pushed all the harder, and could see Jason flagging as his life force was cut away, slash by slash.
***
“Munsen, what is happening with the mana imprinting?”
“It’s everywhere, boss. The manual shutdown isn’t working. Unless we physically start hacking apart conduits with an axe, it’s going to do whatever it’s doing.”
“An axe? Those things are built to handle diamond-rank mana flow. Unless you have a diamond-rank axe essence you didn’t mention in your job application, we’re going to need another idea.”
“All out, boss, sorry.”
“At least it doesn’t seem to be volatile, so probably no explosion. That leaves the question of what it is doing.”
***
“Uh, Ted? What’s that thing on the projection?”
“Is that… the System?”
“Look, it’s got the health and mana of the fighters, that’s handy. Wow, Valdis is low on mana and… what’s a Sword Soul?”
“Yeah, but look at Asano’s health. If he doesn’t do something, this fight will be ending very soon.”
***
Valdis was looking for an angle for what he hoped was a final push. He would probably have to accept whatever one Asano set up for him and trust his skills to fight through the trap. That was when he realised that Jason had set the trap long ago. Valdis had committed a cardinal sin: fighting against a shadow magician and watching every shadow but his own.
Despite the gloom, there was never a total absence of light. Valdis himself had a shadow, almost invisible in the darkness, but still there. Dagger wielding arms erupted like the tentacles of a kraken, trying to stab and entangle him. It was a testament to his miraculous reflexes that he managed to dodge, weave and parry enough that his last shred of Sword Soul capacity wasn’t snatched away.
Unfortunately, fights were all about stealing the critical moments. Valdis knew well that to win those was to win the fight. With the speed gold rankers were capable of, it was more the case now than when he was lower rank. While Valdis was dodging, Jason was taking the chance to cast one of his slightly longer spells.
“Your blood is not yours to keep, but mine on which to feast.”
That was Jason’s life drain spell, Valdis knew. It would heal him a little, but not much. Valdis couldn’t stop his life force from being drained, but he was the only living thing to target. One person wasn’t enough to…
When red lines started streaming through the dark around him, Valdis had no idea what was happening. There was no way Asano could or would drain the audience. Then Valdis saw what was happening and not for the first time, was taken aback. Valdis was very much about skill and persistence over surprise in combat, but he was forced to admit that surprise had its place.
Jason was draining life from the afterimages that Valdis was using to occupy most of the shadowy arm trees. He had seen Asano turn them red somehow, but now he was actually draining life force from them. That should not have been possible, yet not only was it happening, but it was killing the afterimages. They weren’t just dying, either, but drooping in the air like bloody ghosts. That was when things got bad.
Freed of the images keeping them occupied, every shadow tree converged on Valdis, right as he was escaping the attacks from his own shadow. He kept ahead of the attacks, every moment a hair’s breadth from defeat as he moved, dodged and deflected with every skill and defensive power at his command. That he could manage it under the circumstances was a little astounding, even to him. But while he was doing this, Asano cast another spell.
“As your lives were mine to reap, so your deaths are mine to harvest.”
Once more, streams of life force snaked their way through the dark for Jason to absorb. The bloody ghosts that had been Valdis’ force constructs now finally disappeared, whatever magic they had consumed by Jason.
That was when the fighting stopped. The arms stopped pursuing and the familiars backed away. Valdis stood, panting, even his gold rank stamina pushed to the limit. The shadow arms retracted, leaving a crowd of Jason’s shadow familiars around them. Only the arms jutting from Jason himself remained, daggers still in hand.
The gloom around them started to break, slowly letting the sun back in. The arena once more became a circle of sand. Jason moved slowly towards Valdis, looking at him with those merciless, alien eyes. In one of the shadow hands was a sword, glowing red runes carved into the black blade. Jason pushed the hood of his cloak back, revealing his face.
“You look spent, swordsman,” he said.
“You look fresh.”
“That and then some. I’ve got more health and mana than when we started.”
He raised his sword.
“Shall we make a show of it, at the end?”
“You’d challenge me to the sword?” Valdis asked. “Are you looking down on me?”
“Just the opposite. Why do you think I let you push me into this? I’ve spent a lot of time working on my swordsmanship. I want to see how it fares against a true swordsman.”
Valdis nodded and raised his sword, then was on Jason in a blur. They clashed, one sword against a sword and six daggers, Jason’s speed approaching that of Valdis himself. The sword master wasn’t surprised, knowing that this was a trick of Asano’s. If he had fallen foes to drain, he started moving and healing much faster than before. It shouldn’t have been a threat with no dead foes to drain, but Asano had managed it anyway.
The arms Jason used himself were an order of magnitude different to those wielded by his familiar. Those were powers, working on an echo of the true master, much like Valdis’ own afterimages. The daggers and sword clashing with Valdis were something else entirely.
It was a strange fighting style, not bound to the human form. This was what Valdis was constantly in search of: aspects or swordsmanship unlike anything he’d seen before. This was no gimmick, however. As much as anyone, Valdis recognised the fruits of long, hard training. Asano knew well how to make the most of his strange combat style, and was clearly experienced in its use.
The two men clashed across the battlefield at speeds staggering even by gold-ranks standards. The projection slowed the action down, struggling to catch up even with pauses between exchanges. Both men were soon grinning as they pushed the very limits of their skills.
Jason’s inhuman swordsmanship was no shallow trick, but a well-honed style. It suited someone with so many strange aspects to his power set, but that was also the problem. Jason’s approach not just to combat, but adventuring as well, required so many skills that Valdis had no idea how his swordsmanship was this good, but Valdis was a man of the sword alone.
If this was the beginning of the fight, and if this was the way they had fought it, then Valdis would have won. Even dealing with a half-dozen extra arms, he was landing more hits than Asano. But this was not the beginning of the fight; it was the end. Valdis was low on mana, while Jason was flush with health and mana both. Valdis could no longer pull out any big attacks, and Jason just healed through anything else.
The end came when Valdis’ Sword Soul finally gave out. Rather than experience a slow and horrific ugly defeat, he yielded the match.
The magic keeping the sound out dropped and the roar of the crowd crashed over them. People were on their feet, stomping and cheering. Jason turned slowly on the spot, taking it all in with wide eyes.
“Soak it in,” Valdis said, and slapped him on the back. “Never done an arena before?”
“No. Normally, when people see my powers, they run.”
Comments
Love Valdis, The Princess Bride comes to mind every time. Even with the accent!
James
2024-07-27 05:14:56 +0000 UTCI had to look this up as to whether it was anything special. Super hero stuff, so I wouldn't have known that reference :) Thanks for pointing it out!
Splutty
2024-07-11 10:36:56 +0000 UTC"The Dark Sorcerer Ned". Terrible joke. Dad joke. (still giggling...)
JennP
2024-06-27 11:04:57 +0000 UTCThx for the chapter
Kconraw
2024-06-25 01:11:09 +0000 UTCI always thought it would be awesome if Jason could summon multiple blades of doom and now he can and it does not disappoint
Creampuffwizard
2024-06-05 01:20:39 +0000 UTCMaybe it’s similar to how they theorize essences are the inherent abilities of the soul brought out, maybe Jason’s bond with Gordon has affected his HP, instead of steady a defense+regen state it’s a more bloody regenerative state that his HP physically shows
Vincent Ciavone
2024-05-24 18:19:28 +0000 UTCYes
Frederick
2024-05-24 18:07:05 +0000 UTCDoes that last sentence feel really sad to anybody else. like Jason has made his purpose helping others, mainly by killing things which doesn’t make him sound friendly sure, but adventurers are glorified, famous, and loved by many normal people. Jason can easily make friends but when strangers see him, everything about him is alien to them or seemingly inherently evil. More then ever people’s reactions to Jason is fear, and I just can’t imagine how that sits with him
Vincent Ciavone
2024-05-24 13:04:02 +0000 UTCNik was always a person. He just has Rodger Rabbit like features 😊 Like Gary has lion like features.
Raven Brodsky
2024-05-24 12:26:39 +0000 UTCOT: one question that bothers me for so long and I don’t recall ever reading about it. Did Jason remake Nik into a person or is he still a rabbit?
Dimitri
2024-05-24 07:50:20 +0000 UTCI also love the fighting chapters. I love when you go in full detail and you're explaining the scene and how the players in the scene are reacting in the moments to the powers being brought against them. How they choose to bring their powers against those and modify on the run for an advantage. Great chapter!
DeviantSalivations
2024-05-24 02:32:59 +0000 UTCHmmm, it wasn’t Colin that got hacked apart. Nice twist! I think Colin’s regenerative ability was on display here, streams of blood reaching out and grabbing Jason Bits to make him whole again (reminds me of Colin’s ability to use leather or cloth strips to grab onto stuff). Other than Gordon providing shields, he didn’t make an appearance. It was mostly the Jason and Shade show. Good chapter!
N8rtotPlayz
2024-05-24 00:42:23 +0000 UTCI LOVE that scene. Listening to it in audio books makes me laugh every time I hear it
Crystal Donak
2024-05-23 23:38:54 +0000 UTCWe know where the destiny sense come from, Shade mentions its when a low rank person gets their souls touched while riding the wild streams through the Astral.
Alex Schellenberg
2024-05-23 21:03:11 +0000 UTCOkay, I have a theory that I have been toying with. And would love some thoughts. We know that reincarnation is a thing. And souls are reincarnated far from where they originated. Could Jason be a reincarnated soul? And that's how he has destiny/fate magic? Second thought, was a throne has a ruler that sits on it. Jason could have sat on the sundered throne but gave it up. So when the GABs sundered it, did they "kill"/sanction the original ruler. Could that ruler actually be Jason reincarnated. A soul/sanctioned being less than what he was. But something the entire universe is bending around unknowingly. It is a crazy theory but would love some thoughts.
Danny boy
2024-05-23 17:43:52 +0000 UTCHot damn, this would be freaking awesome!! And when he levels up to diamond rank that percentage diminishes to 0.1%.
Ender419
2024-05-23 17:06:15 +0000 UTCI’ve had this thought for a while, but what if the cosmic throne and the system are making Jason the most powerful Astral King in existance, and giving him more authority than most gods and GAB’s. AK’s put a cap on messengers and siphon off their ‘xp’ to make themselves stronger. What if Jason, through the system, is siphoning .00001% of earned xp from every sentient being in every universe in every reality in all of existence. Individually it’s nothing, and nobody notices or realizes. In aggregate, it’s monstrous and when he unleashes it, the foundations of reality will tremble.
Michael Nix
2024-05-23 14:03:00 +0000 UTCI love reading the comments , some are just as entertaining
Lora Greenberg
2024-05-23 13:56:33 +0000 UTCFor example, I suspect Jason could have destroyed Valdis with a soul attack without difficulty.
Erik Hyrkas
2024-05-23 11:04:07 +0000 UTCDo we think Jason held back? Yes, he won, and he is clearly powerful, but did it feel like he was experimenting more than fighting?
Erik Hyrkas
2024-05-23 11:01:49 +0000 UTCHell yea. Aldis showing him true fighting style then helping him to accept the aftermath is what a true friend does. I can't wait to see where it all goes
Jacob Goodrich
2024-05-23 07:18:22 +0000 UTCI like this Valdis guy. He's a good chap.
Liesmith
2024-05-23 07:03:45 +0000 UTCI was thinking the exact same thing.
Liesmith
2024-05-23 07:03:34 +0000 UTCThere is still time.
Sam J
2024-05-23 06:17:31 +0000 UTCAm I the only one who read the commentator like the probending arena matches from Korra?
Alex Cox
2024-05-23 05:40:32 +0000 UTCEven that might not be enough, whole worlds are known to go to crap when he visits. Hope you own a space ship. Actually that might not be enough, considering some problems have been with a whole reality. I think if you see Jason, your just screwed, there’s no running, just survival.
Spicyice101
2024-05-23 05:02:40 +0000 UTCCool to see Valdis again. Also, good that Jason managed not to blow up their mirage area.
Adamanus
2024-05-23 05:00:36 +0000 UTCBeautiful ending
KollegvomMirgan
2024-05-23 04:58:52 +0000 UTCNed taking over as commentator had me laughing almost as much as I laughed at the first time Jason met Rufus' father (amphora, bovril and pamphlets).
Tyson
2024-05-23 04:38:32 +0000 UTCOf course he had to be Gold rank before he got it though.
Crystal Donak
2024-05-23 04:23:42 +0000 UTCYou better watch out, Dark Lord Ned sees across dimensions.
ouroboros
2024-05-23 04:13:14 +0000 UTCRound 1… fight!
David
2024-05-23 03:09:53 +0000 UTCSaved the city twice over, made one cosmic problem just go away due to an authority deal and might have saved the multiverse from an entropic heat death type situation. But the best heroes, don't feel the need to pursue recognition for their deeds.
Logen Felxon
2024-05-23 03:00:22 +0000 UTCOh, great. New head cannon that the System wants Jason to look cool and make sure people have fun. It’s 100% in character for him too, so a power adapted from his soul doing this makes complete sense. Edit for a typo.
David
2024-05-23 02:59:43 +0000 UTCGreat chappie m8. Can't wait for the next one.
Logen Felxon
2024-05-23 02:56:55 +0000 UTCWell done Shirt!
Kasey Lindenmayer
2024-05-23 02:27:46 +0000 UTCI really like the goofy, earnest characterization of Ned. He’s a throwaway, but it’s great. That’s like the anime side character people cosplay as for the fun interactions.
David
2024-05-23 01:54:37 +0000 UTCI laughed at the “the dark sorcerer Ned” !! Cheers!
Naotsugu97
2024-05-23 01:51:43 +0000 UTCThey better cheer you done saved the city twice
ItWasIDIO!!
2024-05-23 01:38:23 +0000 UTCI don’t know if there was a pool on it but I definitely lost big
Alejandro Piña
2024-05-23 01:33:06 +0000 UTCI mean, I wouldn’t just run for the hills, I would try to make sure there’s a good few cities between us if I ever saw Jason fighting near my area 😂
Allastin
2024-05-23 01:05:52 +0000 UTCSeriously OP at this point. Can stab you from your own shadow with omni-directional attacks. He can teleport, has 4 familiars (and we still don't know what Arbor can do). Not to mention Soul and Aura attacks, escalating damage, passive buffs. and at the end wiping you from existence...probably still couldn't beat Sophie though.
Tommy S
2024-05-23 00:40:38 +0000 UTCWho had “Jason pulls himself together” 😂 someone said it last chapter. We all thought it was Colin and that Jason was off eating a sandwich😂
DirePants
2024-05-23 00:39:04 +0000 UTCEpic.
Anthony
2024-05-23 00:34:58 +0000 UTCThat was an excellent t chapter, Shirt! I'm often not a big fan of the fights, but this one was nicely entertaining. And really, who can go wrong with Dark Sorcerer Ned?
Ligeia
2024-05-23 00:33:25 +0000 UTCYep probably could beat Valdis with a surprise Soul Attack if he was serious.
Tommy S
2024-05-23 00:31:25 +0000 UTCWell done!
Allen Wilding
2024-05-23 00:12:53 +0000 UTCIt's not really Thadwick. It's an Energy Vampire that has his memories, not the same thing
Justus Saucedo
2024-05-23 00:08:06 +0000 UTCThe cloak skill is basically the same thing he was doing before, manipulating space to move out of the way of stuff. I think this mostly gives him a fallback option for when spatial distortion isn't quite enough
Morgan Amacosmos
2024-05-23 00:04:07 +0000 UTCOversoul jason took the commentators lack of skill personally, and upgraded the arena himself.
John Grizzly
2024-05-23 00:01:11 +0000 UTCYessss amazing chapter, thanks shirt!
Jordan Brennan
2024-05-23 00:00:36 +0000 UTCDrop Dead Ned?
Andrew Whewell
2024-05-22 23:58:23 +0000 UTCI'm surprised it wasnt Colin. But its also really cool to see Jason go Full Spider with his weapons. It seems that the Gold Rank Blade of Doom lets him bestow it to each appendage, and hand of the reaper let's him bestow it to others like his cloak did at silver.
Aubrey Listi
2024-05-22 23:57:18 +0000 UTC😂🤣 love it
Walter Kimberly
2024-05-22 23:51:45 +0000 UTCYeah
Stephanie Washburn
2024-05-22 23:45:56 +0000 UTCYeah, it was a good balance this chapter
Stephanie Washburn
2024-05-22 23:42:39 +0000 UTCJason Asano, God of Sports Graphics.
Stephanie Washburn
2024-05-22 23:41:59 +0000 UTCDamn. Really encapsulates how lonely Jason is. The only people who really understand what he's going/gone through are truly alien beings with no concept of mortality in the first place, while for the longest time, Jason was a mortal desperately in over his head and trying to make it work .
Cameron Baldwin
2024-05-22 23:41:56 +0000 UTCDoes this make Jason Other Ned now?
Walter Kimberly
2024-05-22 23:38:55 +0000 UTCNice chapter Shirt. One of the best.
John Durrett
2024-05-22 23:38:26 +0000 UTCLove the way this fight went and very satisfying seeing Jason and Valdis just in a straight up sword fight. Although I very much still believe that Jason was holding back a good bit to not show how powerful he actually is and he was probably using the sword fight as more training as to how to counter opponents who can match or exceed his speed when ramped up. Also really enjoy the crowd cheering and Jason getting to see the masses embrace his evil looking powers as being pretty awesome
Jake Mardis
2024-05-22 23:35:46 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! TYFTC! Can we get back to Farrah now?
Justin
2024-05-22 23:34:37 +0000 UTCWhile I would have liked it, too, I’m glad Shirt respected the tyranny of rank. Jason is still gold rank. I don’t think he should be able to curbstomp any gold ranker, but he likely can beat every gold ranker 1 on 1.
Daniel Wills
2024-05-22 23:34:16 +0000 UTCThat was quite satisfying! Tftc!
Brad Gammey
2024-05-22 23:34:04 +0000 UTCJason deserves that after all he has went thru.. 😢.. I’m not leaking your leaking. But seriously I needed this before Thadwick shows back up
Walter Kimberly
2024-05-22 23:32:34 +0000 UTCKind of de-villaining Asano. People see him fight but not kill.
Landsraad
2024-05-22 23:32:10 +0000 UTCImagine if it eventually leads to his "soul universe" and he can suck people into it lol
Landsraad
2024-05-22 23:30:25 +0000 UTCI can't wait to see the full list of his gold rank abilities. The new ability of his perception skill seems especially potent and his cloak seems ridiculous
Rick Delallata
2024-05-22 23:30:09 +0000 UTCIf anything, he probably just gave it a System Upgrade. Which is gonna make the arena even more popular.
Daniel Wills
2024-05-22 23:29:38 +0000 UTCI like to think irs similar style to General Grievous from Star Wars but more shadowy
Landsraad
2024-05-22 23:29:32 +0000 UTCI wonder if he went with a Street Fighter 2 style hud overlay for arena.
Razeel Nightfall
2024-05-22 23:29:02 +0000 UTCJason is totally the tasmanian devil. With swords.
Kevin Anderson
2024-05-22 23:28:36 +0000 UTCamazing chapter!! Constance is right that commentator sucked.
The-DM-Dino
2024-05-22 23:27:26 +0000 UTCDark Sorcerer Ned vs Valdis, great match!
Chuck Haeberle
2024-05-22 23:26:21 +0000 UTCYou do just the right amount of humor Shirt, too often it gets overdone, but you thread it well.
Nathan Emerson
2024-05-22 23:26:00 +0000 UTCWoo! Nice ending, but I can't help but worry that Jason is claiming the arena as his domain....
Justin Fralin
2024-05-22 23:24:15 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter
brian phillips
2024-05-22 23:22:51 +0000 UTCNed was awesome!
Kalanaere
2024-05-22 23:22:34 +0000 UTCWhat a chapter. Is good to see Jason's grinding stone years with the astral beings paid off with his own unique swordsmanship fighting style. Also the prince should have known better. Jason was already making stones and metal bleed and decay. So how surprising is it that he is able to drain afterimage of life force. Well written chapter
Sprightly Ebbie
2024-05-22 23:22:32 +0000 UTCAww.
Alexander Dupree
2024-05-22 23:22:23 +0000 UTCIt added the system to the arena.
Justin Smith
2024-05-22 23:21:37 +0000 UTCThe gold rank cloak ability is OP. I can't wait to see diamond.
Razeel Nightfall
2024-05-22 23:21:37 +0000 UTCGreat! Now we just need to find out what all happened with that imprinting did on the diamond rank magic stuff that all the diamond rankers are gonna freak out about
Jordan Rogers
2024-05-22 23:20:52 +0000 UTCTyfc
gavin knoell
2024-05-22 23:20:48 +0000 UTCFood!
Charleaux
2024-05-22 23:20:34 +0000 UTCGolf clap and nod!
chris k
2024-05-22 23:20:21 +0000 UTCNot critique but expressing my own silly personality: I am actually not much of an action fan, unless it reveals or expresses something (about the characters, the story, the world). I am not sure what I learned in this battle. Again, that's just me and a battle just for the heck of it would be equally valid naturally.
Namorat
2024-05-22 23:20:17 +0000 UTCNothing can match the power of the cosmic sandwich maker
Sylphie
2024-05-22 23:20:14 +0000 UTCAwesomeness
Grayvisc
2024-05-22 23:19:07 +0000 UTCExactly what i was hoping for 👌
Adrian
2024-05-22 23:17:40 +0000 UTCDang! That was very satisfying.
ReadingObsessed
2024-05-22 23:17:25 +0000 UTCLol
m4l4ch1m4v3t
2024-05-22 23:16:59 +0000 UTCAbsolutely fantastic. I love that Jason fighting GABs for a decade or more has transformed his fighting style and his swordsmanship. Rufus is going to be proud of him.
Chris Furry
2024-05-22 23:16:38 +0000 UTCDamn that was a cathartic end to the fight, a nice balance of showing off Jason's new strength without making him seem too overpowered. Also, those commentators really are terrible; they should have hired Clive's wife instead, she's a well known "orator".
DeltaByte
2024-05-22 23:15:34 +0000 UTCdammit Ned lol
Carl
2024-05-22 23:14:58 +0000 UTCBrilliant chapter! The pacing of the fight felt really nice.
morgan
2024-05-22 23:14:52 +0000 UTCDamn I was really hoping he’d pop out at the end and say “Nice job Collin”
Taylor
2024-05-22 23:13:57 +0000 UTCThanks shirt!
Hemlock
2024-05-22 23:13:46 +0000 UTCI thought for sure this chapter was going to open with a “suddenly, Valdis was covered in leeches” moment. I would’ve enjoyed it, but I’m pleasantly surprised by this outcome as well.
Bingus McCready
2024-05-22 23:13:33 +0000 UTCI love this. People accepting Jason's horror! Yes!
JonO
2024-05-22 23:13:12 +0000 UTCThere was healing done in that fight I think.
Sena
2024-05-22 23:12:38 +0000 UTCFirst Marcus, then the crowd cheering. Bout time Jason gets the praise he's earned.
Michael Fannon
2024-05-22 23:12:19 +0000 UTCBiscuits
Cordell Patrick
2024-05-22 23:11:48 +0000 UTCAwesome fight, glad that it was not just a Colin finish with the cliffhanger of last chapter and shirt continues to surprise us with new things. I still think Jason was toying with him just to train more but that's just Jason at this point.
Thomas Black
2024-05-22 23:10:42 +0000 UTCThank you for the amazing story
C0bra$
2024-05-22 23:10:35 +0000 UTCTYFTC One of the best fight scenes personally
Charles A. Pehl
2024-05-22 23:09:35 +0000 UTC"You said to call him Dark Sorcerer Ned. Everyone heard you.” Ned, you are commentator gold.
Scott McCarthy
2024-05-22 23:08:24 +0000 UTCtftc
Matthew Cicero
2024-05-22 23:07:36 +0000 UTCBiscuits that was a good chapter
jacob butler
2024-05-22 23:07:20 +0000 UTCTFTC! This was a great one.
Bingus McCready
2024-05-22 23:07:13 +0000 UTCKickass, I hope Valdis and Rufus will clash swords again
mhaj58
2024-05-22 23:05:10 +0000 UTCBiscuits
Benjamin Grant
2024-05-22 23:04:58 +0000 UTCTYFTC!
Madelyn Bird
2024-05-22 23:03:12 +0000 UTCTYFTC
Clarence Williamson
2024-05-22 23:01:42 +0000 UTCBiscuits!
Darkdragon
2024-05-22 23:00:46 +0000 UTCI love seeing Jason’s reaction to the crowd cheering for him. It’s pretty accurate now that I think about it, that people almost never have a positive reaction to his powers. There’s almost always at least some undercurrent of fear or wariness.
Connor
2024-05-22 23:00:31 +0000 UTCBiscuits
Anthony Moreno
2024-05-22 23:00:25 +0000 UTCTYFTC
Joshua Bladow
2024-05-22 23:00:25 +0000 UTC