Chapter 5: Pages 36-44 (The Big Al Express)
Added 2022-04-30 22:44:02 +0000 UTCTeam S.O.S arrive at this massive train station for the biggest people in the world!
I need to figure out how to adapt that double page spread on the website. lol. Its my first time every doing it for the comic, Enjoy!
Comments
Ha! I'm a patron now! Feels like bragging rights! I think it makes sense since you're the guy I've gotten the most commissions from. So, thoughts- 1. Asuka feels very much like the mom who's trying to get her kids to get along. I love how you write her. The noogie was unexpected but I'm all for it! 2. Eric acting like, well... A hamster- Is a lot of fun! I appreciate animal jokes now and then, and I intend to use a lot myself in my secondary series. XD 3. Dex doesn't really get the "acting like a decent person" thing, does he? Gotta be a little hard dealing with him every day! ^^;
Daniel Frederick
2022-05-29 00:33:19 +0000 UTCStill debating if Eric or Lee Murr from the bus has the most powerful mustache. Also Arty flirting in the background. Can only assume the horns on the train serve a purpose.
Gally
2022-05-27 02:26:43 +0000 UTCAwesome work as always man! This came out so good!
Ermwhat
2022-05-01 05:07:52 +0000 UTCGreat to see the next pages. More of the rivalry of the Bureau with our heroes through Eric. Loved the world building with the train and the sizes of the characters. Arty flirting with a girl was funny. Rose taking note was also a good detail. I like how you captured Summer's jealousy at Asuka getting along with Ray.
FurFist
2022-04-30 23:57:16 +0000 UTCThat, he did! Lmao!
Scotty
2022-04-30 23:19:59 +0000 UTCDid Eric hop in a hamster ball? That is hilarious!
WDG
2022-04-30 23:12:20 +0000 UTC
