Chapter 284: Brown Trousers Time
Added 2020-08-20 23:00:02 +0000 UTCJason was perched on a rooftop, looking at his uncles town house from across the street. Shade appeared next to him.
Find anyone else? Jason asked.
No, Shade said. Just the one iron-ranker inside.
Meaning that that hes either alone, or whoever else they sent is powerful and capable enough to escape our senses.
Jason had no intention of staying in the town house under current circumstances, but wanted to retrieve his mana lamps if possible.
I only spotted one silver-ranker during my investigation of the networks personnel, Shade said. His aura control was insufficient to avoid my detection.
Its the ones who can escape your senses we need to worry about, Jason said.
I agree, Shade said. I would recommend either having me go, or sending Taika.
Although incorporeal, Shades bronze-rank vessel could exert enough physical force to manipulate objects. He could also store limited amounts in his own dimensional storage space.
You go, Jason said. I can use you as a conduit to talk to whoevers in there. Its possible they sent an iron-ranker in the open to show they want to talk without applying pressure.
The influence of Mr Vermillion? Shade posited.
Or wariness. They dont know what I can do.
I dont think finding out will make them any less cautious, Shade said.
No, Jason chuckled. Probably not.
Shade sent one of his bodies into the townhouse, silently collecting the mana lamps. The iron-ranker didnt sense Shade, but noticed the change as the lamps stopped absorbing ambient magic. Standing in the middle of the townhouse, he looked around. Suddenly there was a shadowy figure that hadnt been there a moment earlier.
Did the network send you? Jason asked, speaking through Shade. There was no friendliness in the cold flint of his voice.
Yes, the man said, looking over Shade. Am I addressing Mr Asano?
Yes.
My name is Michael Aram. Annabeth Tilden asked me to speak with you. We didnt think you were likely to come back here, but hoped you might.
I came to retrieve something I left behind.
I did notice a change in the magic. May I ask what that was?
Mana lamps, Jason said. Is that a thing you have here?
We do, Aram said. So, you really did go over there. The other world.
What do you know of other worlds? Jason asked.
Wait, worlds plural?
Not that much then. What do you want, Michael Aram?
Mrs Tilden asked me to open a dialogue. If you really are an outworlder, you no doubt acquired knowledge and resources along the way that would be of immense value to us. We, in turn are essential to you.
Is that so?
We are the only source of monster cores.
A murderers chuckle emitted from Shade.
You think I need monster cores?
If you want to get stronger.
I dont need cores to get stronger, just sufficiently powerful enemies to fight. Which means I might have some use for your organisation, even if you dont like it very much.
Youve only been gone a year and a half, Aram said. How can you have gotten as strong as you have just from fighting? We have a member who refuses to consume cores, and its taken him a eight years to reach category two. Since then, hes been bottlenecked.
You really do need what I know, dont you? Jason asked, his voice becoming more relaxed. There are things you can help me with, and I am inclined toward collaboration. My concern is that your organisation will try to hold me upside down and shake all the goodies out. Im not going to just waltz into that spiders nest of enchantments on your headquarters, without a care in the what the ?
The shadowy figure of Shades body dashed away, leaving Aram alone.
Mr Asano?
***
Jason was kneeling on the sloped roof with his eyes closed, channelling his sight and voice through Shade at he conversed with Aram. With his heightened senses and ability to sense both auras and magic he was far from oblivious to his surroundings, but he only sensed the attack at the last moment. It came fast and seemingly out of nowhere, Jason only detecting it as an aura bore down on him, trying to shock him with silver-rank suppressive force.
It was almost the exact same manner as the last time he was attacked out of nowhere by a silver ranker, but Jason was a very different person from the time he was kidnapped. The attacking aura smashed into the iron shell that was Jasons own aura and rebounded, giving Jason a warning instead of freezing him in place.
Even so, Jasons silver-rank attacker was faster than him and already moving as he reacted. He managed to avoid the hand reaching for his head, but was unable to avoid it gripping his shoulder.
- You have been attacked. Attacker has been afflicted with [Sin].
- Special attack [Dark Slumber] has inflicted [Sopor Toxin] on you.
- You have resisted [Sopor Toxin].
- [Sopor Toxin] does not take effect.
- You have gained an instance of [Resistant].
- You have gained an instance of [Integrity].
- Special attack [Dark Slumber] has inflicted [Vulnerable] on you.
- An instance of [Resistant] has been consumed to negate [Vulnerable].
- Special attack [Dark Slumber] has inflicted [Sluggish] on you.
- You have resisted [Sluggish].
- [Sluggish] does not take effect.
- You have gained an instance of [Resistant].
- You have gained an instance of [Integrity].
Jasons affliction specialisation paid off against the special attack. His stacked resistance effects and ability to ignore rank disparity allowed him to resist two of the three afflictions and negate the third.
He reacted instantly, slipping free of the hand and dropping off the nearby roof edge, not even bothering to take a moment to look at his attacker. His cloak formed around him as he dropped, but he didnt reduce his weight to slow the fall. Instead, he formed a shadow arm and used it to grip the roof as he dropped, letting it stretch out before using it to spring back upwards. He sprung back over the rooftop just as his attacker peered over the edge. The attacker caught a raking slice across the torso from Jasons conjured dagger, stumbling back as Jason landed lightly on the rooftop.
- Special attack [Punish] has inflicted [Sin] on [Network Assassin].
- Special attack [Punish] has inflicted [Price of Absolution] on [Network Assassin].
- Weapon [Ruin, the Blade of Tribulation] has inflicted [Ruination of the Flesh] on [Network Assassin].
- Weapon [Ruin, the Blade of Tribulation] has inflicted [Ruination of the Blood] on [Network Assassin].
- Weapon [Ruin, the Blade of Tribulation] has inflicted [Ruination of the Spirit] on [Network Assassin].
- [Amulet of the Dark Guardian] has bestowed five instances of [Guardians Blessing] on you.
Jason alighted back on the rooftop, his cloak floating around him. He eyed off his opponent, satisfied at the silver rankers failure to resist even a single affliction. His ability didnt give him a name even after coming into contact with the man. His ability to extract information was hampered by the enemys superior rank, although the more generic label of Network Assassin told him a lot, too. Just as Landemere Vane had been described by his power as a Builder Cultist, knowing their affiliation could be more useful than a name.
The silver-ranker looked around thirty, but there was no telling with an essence user. He had short-cropped hair and black, paramilitary attire. His tactical armour wasnt magical, easily sliced through by Jasons dagger.
The man glanced down at the wound on his chest and back up at Jason. He looked startled that his silver-rank flesh had posed little more resistance than his non-magical armour.
You should come with me, Asano. We want to work with you, not force you into anything.
I could tell from the way you sneak-attacked me on a rooftop, Jason said. The man had a slight French accent, but that could have been a ruse. If Jason was a German assassin, hed probably fake a French accent too.
I dont have time to convince you. We couldnt take the chance youll say no. Dont do this the hard way.
You dont know me, but the hard way is kind of my thing.
It isnt a question of whether you get away, Asano. Its a matter of how much you get hurt coming with me.
Pain I can handle. Your fate is to suffer.
- Spell [Inexorable Doom] has inflicted [Inexorable Doom] on [Network Assassin].
- Spell [Inexorable Doom] has inflicted [Inescapable] on [Network Assassin].
- [Amulet of the Dark Guardian] has bestowed two instances of [Guardians Blessing] on you.
The hard way it is, the man said, holding up his hands to conjure knuckledusters on each hand, with three sharp tines sticking out of each. He leapt into the attack as mirror images appeared around him, all springing on Jason.
Jason lifted up his hand, which was oozing blood from the palm. A cone of leeches sprayed out over the images. Most passed through illusory doubles, including one in the position of the original body. His attackers real body staggered back as leeches clamped onto it, while the rest of the leeches were scattered across the roof by the spray.
- [Sanguine Horror] has inflicted [Bleeding] on [Network Assassin].
- [Bleeding] already in effect; [Bleeding] is refreshed.
- [Sanguine Horror] has inflicted [Leech Toxin] on [Network Assassin].
- [Sanguine Horror] has inflicted [Necrotoxin] on [Network Assassin].
- [Sanguine Horror] has inflicted [Bleeding] on [Network Assassin].
- [Bleeding] already in effect; [Bleeding] is refreshed.
- [Sanguine Horror] has inflicted [Leech Toxin] on [Network Assassin].
- [Sanguine Horror] has inflicted [Necrotoxin] on [Network Assassin].
Jason regretted that Colin didnt trigger his amulet, but he was satisfied enough with his familiars storm of afflictions. Jason was a true affliction specialist now, able to lay on plenty of afflictions himself.
The enemy was only briefly startled and didnt bother futilely plucking at the leeches easily biting through his clothes. He didnt fail to notice Gordon manifest into being and nimbly dodged the four beams of energy firing at him from Gordons floating eyes.
The assassin jumped back while throwing out his hands and his own swarm of creatures appeared. Tiny, metal hummingbirds with long needles for heads, they buzzed with the flapping of their tiny metal wings as they darting out, spreading out to engulf Jason.
Gordon, Jason said calmly. Two of the familiars orbs launched forward, coming together just as they met the swarm. The resulting explosion of resonating-force annihilated the metal creatures, although many of the leeches scattered over the roof were likewise eliminated.
The assassin used the explosion to mask another special attack, with a storm of needled raining on Jason. His cloak intercepted the projectiles, but their silver rank power still pushed through more often than not. Their damage was diminished, however, and by the time they chewed through the Guardians Blessings, the damage was minimal.
- An instance of [Guardians Blessing] has been consumed to absorb damage. [Guardians Blessing] has bestowed [Blessings Bounty] on you.
Even that damage was quickly repaired by the ongoing healing effects of the Integrity buff, which continually replenished his health, stamina and mana, along with the healing of the Guardians Blessing. The needle storm was never intended to be the real threat, however, just keeping Jason off balance to set up the assassin lunging in with his claw-like weapons.
Sophie would have been more than a match for the silver-ranker, in speed and skill both. As it was, The silver ranker had the clear edge in speed, while Jasons experience and technique were clearly dominant. Month after month, day after day and even hour after hour of battle in the astral space had sharpened Jasons skills to a razors edge.
When he first started training, he had naïve ideas about being some kind of perfect counter-attacker. Then, the practical realities of combat slowly pounded into his head that he was not an anime character. Training with Rufus and Sophie, then battle after battle after battle had allowed him to refine that original idea into a more practical form.
Jason and Sophie practiced the same, highly versatile combat style, but they did so in different ways. Sophie used the versatility to constantly dominate, adapting her attacks into what was worst for her opponent at any given moment. It was her style before gaining powers, which only enhanced its effectiveness by piling on speed and mobility.
Jason likewise moulded his approach to his powers. With his cloak and his stretching arms, his approach leaned heavily on deception. Hiding unconventional movement and posture behind his abilities, he was hard to pin down and full of unpredictable attacks. The fact that he rarely went for more than superficial wounds with his daggers also opened up a world of attacks that others would find inconsequential.
Jason used all this to full effect against the assassin. Leaping between Shades bodies, masking his posture and movements behind his voluminous cloak. Reaching out with his shadow arms to make attacks that shouldnt be possible.
Jason dominated the fight. Despite the assassins advantage in speed, his claw weapons never landed on Jason, even getting caught up in the cloak, which Jason used to yank him off balance. When the assassin tried to yank the cloak back, it passed through his fingers, insubstantial.
This did not mean that Jason was relaxed. He was fully aware of the power disparity and knew that only a handful of blows from the silver-ranker would breach the protection of his amulet and take him down.
The assassin continued to strike out literally and figuratively, hitting air as his attacks passed through the cloak. Jasons body was never exactly where it seemed, and every failed attack was followed up with a counter attack. Realising he was outclassed, the assassin tried to back up and regroup his thoughts. Jason didnt allow it, moving onto the offensive.
Every moment that ticked by was gold for Jason as his afflictions became more and more entrenched on the enemy. Likewise, Gordon was lashing out with two beams from his remaining eye orbs, although the disruptive-force damage was specialised against magic, adding only minimal damage to the silver-ranker. If Gordon didnt share Jasons power to ignore rank disparity as Jasons familiar, the damage would have been almost ignorable.
Eventually, the assassin became aggravated at Gordon, throwing out a stream of shimmering force needles that managed to harm the incorporeal familiar. Jason had Gordon unmanifest, returned to Jason to bolster his aura strength. Neither Jason nor the silver-ranker could suppress one another despite an ongoing struggle, so they were each affected by the others aura. In this, Jason had the advantage, as his aura seemed to take full effect. The assassins aura inflicted a weakening debuff that Jasons continually resisted, actually making him stronger.
Although he had seen it before, Jason was still was amazed at the resilience of a silver-ranker. His opponent was fighting through what would have killed the most resilient bronze-rank anything long ago. The man looked almost undead under the ravages of Jasons necrotic damage.
Jason had more skill, not just with his combat skills but also in the tactical use of his abilities, outplaying one power after another despite his own being lower rank. The assassin, like most humans, was heavy on special attacks, and Jason was unsure if he was holding back the more dangerous ones. The idea seemed to be capture, rather than kill, after all.
Ultimately Jason was not Sophie. Stand-up fights were where she excelled, while he was all about making the most of complex environments. The rooftop on which they fought offered nothing more than a slight slant, the open space very much to his disadvantage. If not for Shades bodies spread over it for shadow jumping, the fight would have gone far worse.
His original plan had been to turn the fight into a chase. Drown his opponent in afflictions, the make for more complex environments as they did their work. Unfortunately, not all of the assassins powers were effectively handled by Jason, with one making his plan unworkable.
The most effective power the assassin employed was a tether power, much like that used by Belinda. It did not impede him as long as he remained close, but trying to leave the rooftop brought about dangerously escalating damage. The tether even tracked him through teleports and he wasnt willing to risk a portal.
If the power managed to follow him, that kind of distance would cause the tether to kill him instantly. He knew that it would be possible to destroy the conjured rod to which the tether was affixed, but he also knew that would likely cause a powerful explosion. He would mostly likely survive the silver-rank blast, but it would hit him hard enough that the silver-ranker would have a chance to end the fight.
Jason was willing to stick out the fight, as his position improved with every passing moment. He was accumulating power while his opponent accumulated afflictions. Crucially, this included an affliction from his Hand of the Reaper power that simultaneously chipped away at the assassins speed advantage and ability to hold off his afflictions.
- [Rigor Mortis] (affliction, unholy, stacking): Penalty to the [Speed] and [Recovery] attributes. Additional instances have a cumulative effect. Each time a new instance is inflicted, deals necrotic damage for each existing instance.
Jason was satisfied with how the fight was progressing. The silver-ranker was a monster core user, with the typical weaknesses that entailed. Rufus had long ago explained that without being forced to use all their abilities in order to advance, monster core users tended to develop certain flaws.
One was that they werent as intimately familiar with their powers as someone better trained, using them less effectively and often more as an addendum to their combat instead of an integrated aspect. The big one was they developed a habit of using whatever subset of their powers had proven the most useful early in their careers, often ignoring the others and missing out on the powerful synergies of a comprehensive power set.
Jason, by contrast, had used almost every power in his repertoire, from using his perception power to observe the magic of special attacks and dodge them through his array of afflictions to his familiars.
His only regret was that he had been forced to blow up much of Colins leech supply before the apocalypse beast could have a definitive impact. Colin was normally Jasons strongest weapon, but he didnt regret the explosive attack, however. Hed seen the effects of a swarm attack too often to underestimate one from a silver-ranker.
Jason had forced the assassin into a race against time; silver-rank speed and endurance against circumstances that were turning the fight further and further against him with every passing moment. Even when he managed to land an occasional hit on Jason, the afflictions were multiplying so much on the assassin that his amulet quickly replenished the shields.
Jason used his Punition spell for a burst of damage, harming the assassin further for each of the afflictions on him. The Jason drained the afflictions away with Feast of Absolution and leaving a brutal mess of holy afflictions in their place. The assassin felt the power burning away at his insides and saw the light shining from under his skin.
Knowing that his one advantage over Jason was the raw power of his rank, the assassin bet everything on a last-ditch, desperation move. He had hoped that Jason would be stupid enough the smash the tether rod, but he hadnt. Betting his own resilience, battered though it was, the assassin smashed the rod himself. The resulting blast unleashed a shockwave that sent both Jason and the assassin tumbling off the roof and down to the street below.
The assassin realised that his gamble had paid off as he was the first to recover and push his way painfully upright. Despite the ravaging power still coursing through him and all the shields and healing Jason had put up, the sheer superhuman fortitude of a silver-ranker was that remarkable.
That was not to say that Jason wasnt recovering quickly. He was, by that point, drenched in ongoing healing effects from the afflictions he absorbed and the power of his amulet. The assassin wasted no time, reconjuring his fist weapons without spikes before leaping on Jason and brutally wailing into his head, relying on the obvious healing Jason was getting to keep him alive.
As for keeping the assassin alive, he pulled out a cleansing potion worth more than most cars and tipped it down his throat. His possession of two such potions was what had kept him from abandoning the fight as Jason layered affliction after affliction on him.
To the assassins horror, the potion he expected to wash away everything Jason had done like a cleansing flood only partially eliminated the afflictions. The terrifying light continued to glow under his skin, even if it was greatly diminished. He wouldnt be able to take the other cleansing potion immediately and drank a powerful healing potion to keep himself alive.
***
Aram had recorded almost all but the earliest moments of the fight on his phone. At a far remove, neither his aura nor his non-magical recording device has been spotted. He had been watching in disbelief as Asano fought not just evenly but at an advantage against a category three, their ranks clear to Aram as he felt their powerful auras clash. The category three looked to be on his last legs when he blasted them both off the roof and the category three brutally attacking Asano.
He watched the man take a potion, which diminished the eerie glow coming from within his body, followed by another that partially healed the mans ravaged body. Even after, the man looked less like a living being and more like a glowing zombie. As he was taking the potions, three men pulled up in a pair of cars. Clearly they new the man, who yelled a series of angry instructions, although Aram was too far away to make them out.
The man jumped into one of the cars and tore off at speed, leaving the three men behind. Aram wanted to step in, but the three men were all category twos. He couldnt handle one, let alone all three. He watched them inject the contents of a huge syringe into Asano before placing a collar around his neck and bundling him into the boot of the remaining car before taking off in a different direction to the man that had fought Asano.
Aram sent the video file to Annabeth and then immediately called her.
How did it go? she asked, not bothering with a greeting.
Maam, check the file I just sent you, Aram said gravely. I think it might be brown trousers time.
Comments
Disappointed..... man its gonna just kill em. Yeah really.
Bert Babb
2021-07-27 19:30:07 +0000 UTCCorrections: Meaning that [-that-] he's either alone, or whoever else they sent is powerful... We have a member who refuses to consume cores, and it's taken him [-a-] eight years to reach category two. ...channelling his sight and voice through Shade ['at' > as] he conversed with Aram. ...they buzzed with the flapping of their tiny metal wings as they ['darting' > darted] out, spreading out to engulf Jason. The assasin used the explosion to mask another special attack, with a storm of ['needled' > needles] raining on Jason. Although he had seen it before, Jason was still [-was-] amazed at the resilience of a silver-ranker. Drown his opponent in afflictions, ['the' > then] make for more complex environments as they did their work. ['The' > Then] Jason drained the afflictions away with Feast of Absolution and ['leaving' > left] behind a brutal mess of holy afflictions in their place. Or: ...with Feast of Absolution, [-and-] leaving behind a brutal mess of holy afflictions in their place. At a far remove, neither his aura nor his non-magical recording device ['has' > had] been spotted. The category three looked to be on his last legs when he blasted them both off the roof and the category three brutally ['attacking' > attacked] Asano. Clearly they ['new' > knew] the man, who yelled a series of angry instructions...
Elmhedera
2020-09-09 01:31:59 +0000 UTC“This guy had the right idea. He brought the brown pants.”
2020-08-24 04:07:57 +0000 UTCSo he got captured, again...? Getting kinda old 😅
тђє v๏เ๔
2020-08-24 00:09:47 +0000 UTCOn one hand he really just has abilities tailormade to counter Jason. On the other hand Jason has abilities to counter rank disparity, which is also really important and Jason is not your average real bronze rank, he is among the really elite skill wise, but his abilities are still in the lower half of bronze
Tarmandan
2020-08-21 06:58:46 +0000 UTCI though that the power disparity between real Bronze and fake Silver was less. I'm pissed, but more at the fact that this is a cliffhanger than anything else :) Edit : Fuck now i'm even more pissed since we won't see jason till monday.
Exal
2020-08-21 06:38:25 +0000 UTCMan, they are going to be So disappointed when he removes the collar and pops out of their captivity, hehe.
Swinter
2020-08-21 06:02:01 +0000 UTCI’m guessing that Jason didn’t plan on getting captured but since suppression collars don’t really work on him and he nearly beat a tier 3 really means that he’s going to find a way out on top. Probably going to be pretty pissed 😤 😡 when he wakes up though
2020-08-21 05:44:21 +0000 UTCI’m guessing Jason didn’t want to kill the guy and knew that because he was a silver tanker he wouldn’t die immediately if Jason went all out.
2020-08-21 05:42:17 +0000 UTCHey Shirtaloon I'm curious why didn't Jason end the fight with Verdict before the assassin blew up the tether does he have some kind of plan
mhaj58
2020-08-21 04:39:56 +0000 UTCIs Jason actually meeting his family going to be the last thing to happen in this arc? Also, everyone panicking about the abduction when we know he can circumvent collars and they have no reason to think that's even possible.
Voltaire
2020-08-21 04:22:03 +0000 UTCI mean, he probably saw it coming, but what could he do about it? If he got further away, he took too much damage, and if he destroyed it himself, he'd be in even worse shape. Besides, it's entirely possible he let himself get caught so he could get in the middle of the organization that's after him. We know he's practiced negating suppression collars.
Sean Field
2020-08-21 03:49:38 +0000 UTCI second
Addanc
2020-08-21 02:13:54 +0000 UTCNo way. Colin eats whatever stuff he was injected with and he knows how to get out of collars. He can always ditch if they are going into the warded area but if there is another player making a move he can find out about them this way.
Chris
2020-08-21 02:10:05 +0000 UTCI speak for all of us when I say we did not want to see Jason broken down like the builder forces tried
mhaj58
2020-08-21 02:01:21 +0000 UTC*sigh* another kidnapping mini arc
Addanc
2020-08-21 01:56:50 +0000 UTCMy guess is he let himself be captured. The injection may have some effect but I doubt it will be much.
Chris
2020-08-21 01:40:18 +0000 UTCI really am hoping for this, does that make me a bad person.
David Burchfield
2020-08-21 01:32:54 +0000 UTCToo bad about the papa lamps >.>
Termac
2020-08-21 01:25:57 +0000 UTCWow, it could be that they went after him because of him buying that painting vs trying to one up the local leader.
Seadrake
2020-08-21 01:18:31 +0000 UTCGUYS GUYS WERE MISSING SOMETHING. Dawn came in france right? Shes been making artwork, doing stuff, and knows his name? This guy has a french accent, says he's in a time crunch, AND Aram doesnt recognize him? (Aka hes not likely to be the local silver ranker)
Pariah
2020-08-21 01:15:18 +0000 UTCHe should really give that up. It seems to be habit-forming.
Termac
2020-08-21 01:11:04 +0000 UTCI really don't understand what you write(English is not my first language). Can you explain to me please?
Guilherme Silva
2020-08-21 00:55:54 +0000 UTCOh dear. The network is not very smart, are they?
Bastil
2020-08-21 00:51:06 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2020-08-21 00:48:10 +0000 UTCIf Jason has to fight this hard against a factory brand 2nd category, how did they even think he could threaten any organization with 1 cat 3 or multiple cat 2s?
2020-08-21 00:46:54 +0000 UTCInsert Rorschach “I’m not locked in here with you” please do it
Zak Cornell
2020-08-21 00:41:44 +0000 UTCOne something’s got to give...
Tommy Littlefield
2020-08-21 00:29:41 +0000 UTCOf course he got captured. That seems to be his thing
Joel Wells
2020-08-21 00:20:57 +0000 UTCNo matter if Jason got captured on purpose or not... Network fucked up.
B Whistler
2020-08-21 00:16:04 +0000 UTCGetting captured is kind of his thing.
11037
2020-08-21 00:11:25 +0000 UTCJason have a year and a half of training, and don't have a lot of recourses in him. Facing secular organizations, there will be people stronger than him.
Guilherme Silva
2020-08-21 00:07:01 +0000 UTCWait, do you hear that? Drowning pool is warming up their instruments....
Gygax Fan
2020-08-21 00:05:51 +0000 UTCOoh. Good catch. That's *possibly* a red herring, but possibly not.
Termac
2020-08-21 00:00:28 +0000 UTCIts Jason's "Happy Murder Funtime now."
OBS
2020-08-20 23:57:54 +0000 UTCmaybe not a suppression collar maybe one made of Semtex or the like, we kknow explosives work against magic.
Matthew A Baker
2020-08-20 23:51:05 +0000 UTCWhy he’s saying they should be shitting their pants cause they just made an enemy out of Jason. Which is pretty damn accurate
Tommy Littlefield
2020-08-20 23:50:38 +0000 UTCHere is to hoping.
David Burchfield
2020-08-20 23:49:40 +0000 UTC24 hours to find out what happened, they are going to be pretty shocked when the suppression collar doesn't work lol
Nimps
2020-08-20 23:47:12 +0000 UTCthe guy did say it was brown pants time...
Matthew A Baker
2020-08-20 23:46:33 +0000 UTCUghhhh I haaaaate cliff hangers!!
Nimps
2020-08-20 23:46:32 +0000 UTCSilver is not God is Greenstone silver was the leadership. There was dozens of silver in Greenstone. Earth have less magic, but is much greater and the strong people in Earth don't go to another places, si the strongest in Earth would have more rank than the strongest in Greenstone. Besides, Jason has been ambushed for a silver, he loss is not absurd.
Guilherme Silva
2020-08-20 23:44:36 +0000 UTCI think the final flow of this chapters fight was incredibly hard to follow, requiring me to reread it several times to understand what was going on, and that the final line for the chapter is incorrect. "Brown trousers time" would imply that things didn't go how they wanted, and while that could be partially true, their supposed assassin was getting beaten, it is not an obviously correct statement. "Brown trousers time" in my mind would be Jason stomping not 1 not 2 but holding off and winning against 3, yes THREE, Earth Silver essence users. That is an "Oh Shit" moment. Not what happened here. Jason should be significantly stronger than a monster core user, to the point of actually striking not one but potentially 2 ranks higher than himself. Otherwise there isn't really a difference in strength between the two other than sheer stat differences, which can be negated by anyone that is intelligent via tactics/strategy. The fight scenes you write have always been your weakness. You have really good dialogue, interesting world building, and very well defined societies, but god damn are your fights hard to read. The constant info dumps on his abilities are incorrectly placed. We should know what they do or have them explained outside of a fight scene. Your fight scenes read like the Dictionary man from FlashGitz's Super Future - wikis short. (3:37 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oqqQT-CcTsU) every time he starts to flow a sentence he interrupts it to explain what a noun is. Fight scenes need to flow, and info dumps in the middle of them on abilities and the effects they have just serve to yank the reader out of the flow of combat. Don't tell me something is happening, show me. Regardless, I still think you need to give this chapter a once over and fix some basic editing mistakes and then you need to watch some of HelloFutureMe's videos on YT on how to write a fight/action scene. I say this not to sound condescending, but because you are talented and are making enough money via patreon that you should be investing into your skillset to refine it. Identifying your weakpoints and improving on them is the name of the game here, and your fight scenes have always been a bit of an issue. HelloFutureMe does some phenomenal videos on writing topics, so I'd really recommend checking them out. I don't think there would be any region locking issues but I could be wrong. TLDR: Brown trousers time isn't what you call capturing a rogue agent that wasn't actually that strong, sure they may of put up a decent fight against someone grossly stronger than them but they weren't an actual threat. Brown trousers, as explained by DeadPool, are a time when you are going to shit yourself and need to hide that you've done so. Capturing a threat, tranquilizing them, and then affixing them with a suppresion collar isn't that time. Brown trousers are needed when you've just witnessed one man defeat a force that was thought to be more than sufficient for anyone. One marine getting brought down after a two hour gunfight isn't a 'brown trousers time' but the DoomBringer landing on planet after a two hour starship fight, and he intends to wreck your organization, definitely is.
RepossessedSoul
2020-08-20 23:44:27 +0000 UTCThe French accent (although Jason assumed it was fake) could imply that this assassin is from the office that either has or is looking for Farrah.
Davis
2020-08-20 23:41:56 +0000 UTCAssuming Farra is the other person in this world with Jason do you think she could reached early silver for that last battle she died in? After meditation and the whole shabang
Kemizle
2020-08-20 23:41:45 +0000 UTCGetting definite Rambo vibes here. "They drew first blood".
David Burchfield
2020-08-20 23:41:07 +0000 UTCHis opponent was silver. Rufus, one of the best in the world, a peak rank Bronze lost to a silver, and only won the second match. Jason was awesome with the result not being clear in the start. Yes, could be part of the plan, but he losing is not absurd.
Guilherme Silva
2020-08-20 23:40:09 +0000 UTCI could see Jason getting caught off guard but I could also see it as him slipping into there base...either way he has the skills to make the network regret this
Kemizle
2020-08-20 23:38:52 +0000 UTCCan’t wait till the next chapter.
Zerak
2020-08-20 23:35:49 +0000 UTCor jason let himself be captured..
Estrini
2020-08-20 23:35:29 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter :) "Although he had seen it before, Jason was still was amazed at the resilience of a silver-ranker." Needs only one "was" either "Jason was still" or "Jason still was"
Molly Hopkins
2020-08-20 23:33:31 +0000 UTCThey injected something into his blood -- I think that's just snacks for Colin. They put a collar on that he's already immune to. He still has Shade, Colin, and Gordon available. I don't think he's asleep in the boot of the car.
Kyle Aretae
2020-08-20 23:33:26 +0000 UTCI'm glad he snagged the mama lamps first. I have a feeling they will be need to return.
TaylorTot
2020-08-20 23:33:16 +0000 UTCi think he will escape or he pulled some kind of switch at the end, after all it wasn't from his perspective.
Estrini
2020-08-20 23:33:14 +0000 UTCif that is the case, i don't think Jason will hold it against Annabeth. just look at how he handled the whole thadwick thing with the tree farm. you don't get angry at the help for something the boss does
Niko
2020-08-20 23:33:08 +0000 UTCYea this one didn’t really make sense to me. Jason dominates the fight and then loses all of the sudden against an unskilled core user. I get it he is just stronger and faster but if a silver rank who is so bad at using his abilities can beat him it’s kinda troll. If Jason can’t beat one trash silver he is gonna get stomped all the time on Earth. Not to mention solver was like god level in greenstone cause they were low magic. And earth isn’t even close to greenstone in magic levels. Even with monster cores I feel like there should be some draw back to being in a pretty much no magic area. I know this is a bit of a vent and I still love the story but this chapter just feels off.
Clay smith
2020-08-20 23:30:17 +0000 UTChaha, they put a suppression collar on him. can't wait to see what happens, now just have to wait until tomorrow.
Niko
2020-08-20 23:28:23 +0000 UTCSounds like somebody decided to go over Annabeth's head for this one. Kinda sucks that Jason's distrust of anything organized keeps getting proved right over and over but I guess that's just reality lol
2020-08-20 23:28:13 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Stephen Pearson
2020-08-20 23:28:03 +0000 UTCThey should have spirit coins and if he used a silver one beforehand, he should be fine.
Alex R
2020-08-20 23:27:50 +0000 UTCA third of the chapter was spent explaining how awesome Jason is and how inferior his opponent was in comparison. I really hope that losing was the plan all along...
Redbeard
2020-08-20 23:27:43 +0000 UTCExactly my thought
Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland
2020-08-20 23:27:35 +0000 UTCReally wish this were a bit longer
Victor Mijares
2020-08-20 23:27:28 +0000 UTCOooh shit. They network is going to be in for a world of pain once Jason wakes up.
The Lost Pages
2020-08-20 23:25:43 +0000 UTCMy theory is that he saw that there was an opportunity to get into the heavily warded headquarters easily instead of escaping and he took it.
Jesus Nunez
2020-08-20 23:25:41 +0000 UTCQuestion. Given we know the handicap of the place being magically barren and only 1% of what it should be. Doesn't that mean the silver ranker's constant healing and skill use should have drained his mana VERY quickly?
Ziggy
2020-08-20 23:24:23 +0000 UTCJason is basically immune to suppression collars tho right? Didn't he spend a while training his ability to resist it?
Max Thomas
2020-08-20 23:23:46 +0000 UTCAgh waiting another day is agonizing
Adrian Gorgey
2020-08-20 23:23:25 +0000 UTCAram didn't know who the silver ranker was or seem to expect this attack. I'm pretty certain neither he nor Annabeth knew this was going to happen in spite of the assassin being Network. Especially since they weren't happy Jason was captured.
Ziggy
2020-08-20 23:22:09 +0000 UTCI can't wait till she finds out collars don't work that well on Jason
Tristan Praedo
2020-08-20 23:21:52 +0000 UTCWell Sydney is about to get a new river of blood
Anthony Arredondo
2020-08-20 23:19:07 +0000 UTCThat level of organizational stupid seems to be painfully realistic. I'm glad there's one more chapter this week.
Aaron
2020-08-20 23:18:15 +0000 UTCKind of silly it was described how superior Jason was the whole chapter then at the very end a hail marry attack worked to let Jason be captured again.
2020-08-20 23:17:50 +0000 UTCNot sure if i liked this. Jason went down too easily.
Worldknower
2020-08-20 23:15:49 +0000 UTCI'm tired of reading about Jason being captured and forced under some collar. Better be a shade body of some kind.
2020-08-20 23:15:48 +0000 UTCIt was specifically mentioned that Shade could interact with the physical. I think you are right.
Caizic
2020-08-20 23:14:55 +0000 UTCAnyone think Jason allowed himself to lose. I feel like after the explosion he could have slipped away but he stayed so they bring him to the base. I doubt the collar and drugs will slow him down once he decides to leave
Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland
2020-08-20 23:13:06 +0000 UTCIts rather unlucky that no matter where Jason ends up, and no matter how magic deficient an area is supposed to be, there is always at least one person around who is flat out stronger than him, even if they're less skilled
BigBuckler
2020-08-20 23:12:22 +0000 UTCYeah really not the outcome i was expecting jason taken out by a hail mary he should have seen a mile away
Wilhelm Petersson
2020-08-20 23:11:48 +0000 UTCWell that's disappointing
CentaureHeart
2020-08-20 23:10:24 +0000 UTCOh Annabeth you idiot
IWannaBeATiger
2020-08-20 23:09:32 +0000 UTCOh man, they’re so fucked.
Monty
2020-08-20 23:09:12 +0000 UTCFirst
Thaco4
2020-08-20 23:00:16 +0000 UTC