Black Crusade 10-1 The Last Dawn
Added 2021-05-24 11:44:36 +0000 UTCHere is the beta-ed version of chapter 48, The Weaver Option. I'm going to give it a last correction phase to see if I haven't missed anything, but it should be the very final thing.
Writing on 10-2 should begin by the end of the week.
Enjoy!
Comments
Oh yes...so he signed a new one. It's not given to any Archmagos to serve the Chosen of the Omnissiah, no? After Commorragh, he signed again for one century.
Antony444
2021-05-28 08:26:57 +0000 UTCwhy is sagami still the commander of the Enterprise spaceship? has his ten-year contract not ended?
Remi Minjoulat
2021-05-27 19:06:45 +0000 UTCWell, for now the Overlord is in the mood of 'more vermin to be exterminated'...he has a while before reaching that point...or does he?
Antony444
2021-05-25 08:22:23 +0000 UTCYou're welcome, nothing wrong can come from the Wemistress!
Antony444
2021-05-25 08:21:25 +0000 UTCI am waiting for the moment the Necron in command figures out he needs to flee. On that note, I going to bet that one of the pre-planned landing zones is near the Necrons slaughtered the 2nd legion. I call BS on the number of space marines of the blood showing up for this battle. Yes, the thousand are properly a part of the battle order. However how many other chapters of the blood are sending companies to nearby war zones that spaceships just happen to have a new upgrades need for them to join this war.
Forgottenone
2021-05-24 21:26:25 +0000 UTCnice chapter thx for writing as always loved the spiders do hope where going to get out spider priest for the church of the holy spider :D nothing wrong can happen there. good to see the orks having fun wonder what kind of fleets they have inbound for the party that is being build. interesting deal with the eldar wonder how wel and what there intell was and if it would be of value for the resources they want. interesting deal with malal will be fun to see the results of that
frank schellingerhout
2021-05-24 20:59:45 +0000 UTC1) The retired Lord Admiral works for the SDF as a 'light' retirement, but except a few mentions, I don't think he will be really mentioned for the rest of the story. 2) I always think about the possibilities of the things I'm introducing, so yes, the spiders' skills and psychic capabilities have been taken into account.
Antony444
2021-05-24 15:58:55 +0000 UTCYou're welcome.
Antony444
2021-05-24 15:57:01 +0000 UTCThanks so much, Antony As always I love seeing a new chapter, and to hear that you are already planning the next one fills me with joy.
ZeroNu
2021-05-24 15:07:33 +0000 UTCTwo questions, have you thought about bringing back the Retired Lord Admiral in some capacity for the Nyx home guard theatre and this species of spider which Psykers can communicate with (yes I saw that) which can then communicate with normal spiders have you thought of the potential Imperium wide future uses such a species represents, the Emperor, the Grey Knights, the Inquisition and sanctioned Pyskers comes to mind
Stormstar1995
2021-05-24 13:19:52 +0000 UTCNah, I have to post it soon, and since there are two threads now, I must do an announcement every time now.
Antony444
2021-05-24 12:16:27 +0000 UTCAbsolutely baseline human, like all the Imperial Guard. That is the case both for Weaver Option and canon timelines.
Antony444
2021-05-24 12:15:47 +0000 UTCAre the sororitas genetic modified, or base line human?
Ted min
2021-05-24 12:01:10 +0000 UTCHuzzah can’t wait for Corax’s response also just checking for future references in general are we allowed to tell AH when a chapter is done or when it’s been sent to the betas?
Silver Wolf
2021-05-24 11:48:05 +0000 UTC
