Chapter 2, Page 9
Added 2021-07-24 15:52:59 +0000 UTCPrevious coloured pages here: https://www.patreon.com/geknebelt?filters[tag]=Coloured%20A%2BR%20Comic
Folder for coloured Prologue/Ch. 1: https://mega.nz/folder/nYVmlDZI#uzwk2diQsLCHOxRbzdJ91A
I changed the dialogue a bit in the first two panels! This way it sets up the vibrator gift joke a little better. Also, I hope the lighting makes sense! In the first panels it's dark 'cause they're in a shaded street, and then in the third panel they're going into a cafe with the sun hitting it.
Trying to give the outside some realistic atmosphere, haha. I'm doing that whole 'going from light to dark' thing again, since Rebecca's gonna be exploring her 'dark side' again very soon! :P
Hopefully it was worth the extra effort!
Comments
Yup.. well it looks really cute
Elena El
2021-07-25 04:34:27 +0000 UTCHaha yeah, it's weird going through this part of the comic now! When I scripted and drew it, everything was still normal ^^; Fortunately in my area casual outings are kinda back, though we still have indoor mask mandates.
2021-07-24 20:29:58 +0000 UTCI miss casual outings😭
Elena El
2021-07-24 18:55:50 +0000 UTCThanks! Haha yeah, from Anna's expression she's probably thinking the same thing!
2021-07-24 16:54:03 +0000 UTCHopefully that's not a bad thing! If anything it might be the way that the mouths kind of cut into their face while viewed from the side. It's kind of an anime-style thing to do as well--hope it's not distracting, haha
2021-07-24 16:37:53 +0000 UTCWhy do their mouths remind me of the simpsons?
Zaraaf San
2021-07-24 16:26:44 +0000 UTCThe colour change works really well. I can't help wondering if Rebecca broke the vibrator being too enthusiastic with it...
Michael
2021-07-24 16:26:36 +0000 UTC
