New (Complete) Short Story: In Karen's Footsteps
Added 2024-08-01 01:56:11 +0000 UTCThis story was inspired by themaneloco's "Karen
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The mane loco refuses to add sub/dom romance or sex into his work though, it’s so annoying, erotica without sex. Mana Ray actually has romances:)
Six of Crows
2024-09-07 14:25:49 +0000 UTCThis was so good, I’m glad you’re still writing, themaneloco’s work is awesome but the one negative thing is he never dose sex or romance, it’s such a weakness to his work that his subs and doms don’t end up together. You nailed this perfectly, I love an exclusive sub/dom romance, and the pressured marriage worked so well. My favourite of your work is China maid, but I was always sad that Alice and Jocelyn didn’t end up together in a sub/dom relationship, that instead it was two subs together and two doms together, but this one was perfect, although I would have loved a sex scene;) Anyway, please keep writing, you’re so good and captivating Xx
Six of Crows
2024-09-07 14:23:27 +0000 UTCUnfortunately it’s not it. The original story is way better but I appreciate the efforts.
Mm Mm
2024-08-01 20:51:38 +0000 UTCAmazing story, one of the best I've read all year! When I saw that this was inspired by themaneloco's Karenocracy story I got excited and I was not disappointed by the time I finished it! The build-up and suspence of the characters thrust into this new setting and how we explore it through their eyes is superb, the domination and blackmail aspects all work well and I like the emphasis on her having 'happy thoughts' as she's made to service Barbara to emphasize how completely she's submitting. The twist ending is a lot of fun too and not where I was expecting the story to go.
damage3245
2024-08-01 10:38:40 +0000 UTC
