Magical Girl Gunslinger Chapter 24 - Death Wish: Part II
Added 2024-07-23 00:02:21 +0000 UTCMagical Girl Gunslinger Chapter 24 - Death Wish: Part II
Patch Notes
-Error's mana regeneration was incorrect in Chapter 22, it is now correct at nearly fifty-nine mana regeneration per second.
-Mai states she spent all her points buying thing in preparation, but I did my math wrong and missed 20 points. She has now spent it on buying an enhanced shirt and leggings to go underneath her other enhanced clothes and provide her the slightest bit more protection.
-Changes to some sentences to make paragraphs read better.
-The amount of ammunition Mai has for her Umbra changed slightly due to a miscount earlier in the story. She now has more filled magazines, so during a later part of the battle, it was emphasized she was going very quickly through her ammo in an attempt to stem the Anathema tide.
-Small addition near the end to show Mai's building pain/exhaustion/shock
Comments
I really like the additional armor addition.
Ethan Barrow
2024-07-23 01:44:05 +0000 UTCThe sequence from Revelations to death wish part 2 is incredible writing. Some of the most emotional, gut-wrenching, edge of the seat reading with its reveals, action, cliffhangers, and more. I sometimes go back once a month just to reread errors speech at the end of the war chapter just to feel something. I'm so glad you're sticking with the story.
rizen
2024-07-23 01:41:09 +0000 UTC
