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Magical Girl Gunslinger: Chapter 22 - War

Magical Girl Gunslinger: Chapter 22 - War

Patch Notes
-Added a sentence mentioning anti-air Anathema being the reason why a Strike Team couldn't just paradrop onto the shielding station and reactivate it.

-Other Minor Edits

Comments

My theory on what the video contents are that Mai got caught digging through the garbage for food.

MooMoo195

Naiad's hair is described as 'gently flowing like gentle waves of water' which seems excessively gentle.

Schuh

The same. Fuck! I re-read this chapter often, even knowing what will happen, and each time, it is the part of Error speech, i am crying. I love how the author has written this chapter, can't wait for the rest of the story...

Azgaroth

Every time. Every single time I reread this chapter it hits SO hard. There's just something so fundamental to the human psyche pierced here. Raw and beautiful this chapter is so powerful.

Aguy768


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