Remedy Chapter Two: Abrasion 1.2
Added 2023-12-23 22:30:55 +0000 UTCRemedy Chapter Two: Abrasion 1.2
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Remedy is really good! Looking forward to reading more of your writing!
MeYouIt
2024-01-21 23:23:27 +0000 UTCThink of the chocolate! Something in me loves that line.
Ethan Barrow
2023-12-29 22:39:29 +0000 UTCAmazing story, quality equally as good as MGG, in a setting I know and love (I stan Miss Militia all day long 5ever). I love your stories so much, and not just because onion ninjas show up almost every time. I look forward to anything you write. Thank you again!
SingularCurve
2023-12-24 22:13:28 +0000 UTCThat certainly sounds like the kind of environment that could have led to 3+ simultaneous trigger events. Healing is almost certainly Aide's primary power, but if her clustermates are a third as powerful as she is on that front they might have just doubled the total amount of healing magic in the setting. I doubt the heroes will have nearly as easy of a time recruiting the others though; good odds that the ABB already have their claws in most of the rest, unless whoever prompted the explosion made off with some freshly triggered capes.(Undersiders might be a candidate, depending on how this timeline suffers from the original... Faultline would be the best case scenario but she doesn't generally take jobs that are too local... let's just hope it wasn't the E88 attacking, Ophala causes enough problems). Also, as soon as one fresh grab-bag cape displays a healing talent, anybody who knows about cluster triggers is probably going to start looking hard for the rest of the set.
Sindri
2023-12-24 11:21:41 +0000 UTCMore is good
John Smith
2023-12-24 06:51:23 +0000 UTCI wonder if she will learn sign or if she gets some tinker tech voice box. Fewer problems understanding a voice box but could be hackable…
william wallace
2023-12-24 04:49:14 +0000 UTCThis is fantastic and I want more.
BelligerentGnu
2023-12-24 03:47:36 +0000 UTCI've only known Aide for 2 chapters but if anything happened to her I would kill everyone in Brockton Bay and then myself
BadassOverlord
2023-12-24 03:07:53 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter
Bockus
2023-12-24 02:23:32 +0000 UTCAide(temp) is officially the best
Shay Lewis
2023-12-24 00:35:27 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Kyle Polkinghorne
2023-12-24 00:19:41 +0000 UTCQuite enjoying this. Please dont forget gunslinger. But more of this is good too. Happy holidays!
william wallace
2023-12-24 00:04:50 +0000 UTC❤️
John Warren
2023-12-24 00:02:36 +0000 UTCThanks!
Aldous Russell
2023-12-23 23:29:06 +0000 UTCI truly don't know how you do it but... a couple of chapters in and already starting to really care and empathize with the MC. Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us!
Harold Foster
2023-12-23 23:26:08 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Josh Delgado42
2023-12-23 22:32:53 +0000 UTC
