Marvel’s What If #63 – Victoria Von Doom
Added 2023-01-23 04:11:04 +0000 UTCDisclaimer: So that this story
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Big Brother Ben really warmed my heart in each of his scenes (and I also wasn't expecting Parental Figure Thunderbolt Ross). But really, I couldn't be happier that you have liked this idle distraction that turned into basically a week's worth of work so much. I think in the future I should quarantine any and all thoughts about porny, silly ideas, because they turn into this and One Last Gift as soon as I'm not looking...
Agrippa
2023-01-25 00:02:50 +0000 UTC"RICHAAAAAAARDS!" "What?" "DOOM'S FACEPLATE IS DENTED, AND IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT." In all seriousness, I usually don't like Reed, but this version is far more endearing than I predicted. Kinda like a younger Snarkmaster.
Agrippa
2023-01-24 23:59:01 +0000 UTCOh God my sides. And my face, seriously Richard's had me face-palming every five seconds or so.
Evilreadermaximum
2023-01-23 12:45:31 +0000 UTCThis too me far too long to actually read, because I had to stop every couple of minutes to remember how to stop laughing and BREATHE. Holy crap Agrippa, even among your marvelous works, this one was a stand-out! The jokes were on point, and just HOW do you manage to so cleanly and clearly show us the minds of these characters, how you manage to seemingly become the characters themselves and convert them into people whose eyes we see through, and whose thoughts torment our own heads. While this is something you have already proven yourself to do fantastically (Pun not intended.) this one in particular was just something else. It was so far removed in many ways from your regular that I truly question if you aren't just a scientist who created a machine to steal these people and steal their memories for you to write down at your leisure! Also, Ben Grimm remains the Best Bro and stole a good part of the show as it were despite having so few lines in comparison to the rest of the cast.
Crimson Grave
2023-01-23 04:51:13 +0000 UTC
