Dialogue Update: Chapter 2 (Pages 30-35, 38-48, 50-54, 56-57, & 59)
Added 2021-08-10 17:45:02 +0000 UTCHell-o ๐น
Got another storyline/dialogue update for ya to feast your eyes on:
Recap: I've been reworking certain dialogue scenes/pages/parts of the story in preparation of the print version of BKI, Volume 1.
The next dialogue update/round of edits I worked on were from Chapter 2. This chapter definitely had a lot of work. My speech bubble skills back then were so bad ๐ There were also parts that needed some dialogue rework to fit the story better, and I wanted to highlight the "Narration" part of the story that will be on some pages going forward.
The changes I will be implementing here are as follows:
- General retouching/reworking of most dialogue & speech bubbles (wording, positioning, flow, etc.)
- Added 4th wall narration text on Pages 34, 35, 51, & 52.
Lmk what you think! Have a wonderful day/evening! ๐
-J
ยฉ James Schleisman June 2019 All Rights Reserved.
Comments
Thank you SO MUCH!! that means the world to me ๐
Jamie Schleisman
2021-08-11 15:47:51 +0000 UTCI just wanted to say, these reworks are FANTASTIC and have pulled me in even more! Please keep it up. Can't wait to see more :)
stutzkov
2021-08-10 21:51:06 +0000 UTCMatt is such a hottie, fan favorite xD
Jamie Schleisman
2021-08-10 18:14:18 +0000 UTCAlso i just remembered from seeing this before to ask Matt out after his shift in the announcers booth.
Allan Meyer
2021-08-10 18:09:48 +0000 UTC
