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Added 2022-03-25 08:26:29 +0000 UTCEpisode 3: https://www.patreon.com/posts/64247631
Heya, you'll notice soon that some episodes are a lot shorter than the others,
Originally, we plan to upload 8 long episodes on the 31st, but Tapas told me it's better to upload 10 episodes and up so Tapas manager suggested that I cut the episodes shorter.
Although, I don't think it will be a problem for the Patrons right? you get to read them all anyway without having to purchase each episodes... I think, I hope I'm right haha
BUT after the relaunch, next episodes will have decent length anyway , here's episode 2
Comments
I noticed the same thing also and came to see if anyone else had commented. If you ever want a second set of eyes to double-check the English, let us know! For the record, I work in marketing and communications for my company, so like Vesuvius, editing English is what I do for a living. And I wouldn't charge anything for the help. 😊
PFunk42
2022-03-29 22:57:20 +0000 UTCHello I appreciate you pointing this out! I'm not a native English speaker and right now I totally rely on Tapas editors I'm working with currently. If they say it's something I need to change I will but I'll take note of this for future references
NoSleepAreWe
2022-03-27 09:56:19 +0000 UTCOn a completely separate note, every once in awhile, I see a minor unusual use of English. Like in Ep. 5, Shuhei says, "I knew you'll come out." Without contractions, it would be "I knew you will come out." The word 'knew' refers to already knowing something. The word 'will' is a word that deals with what a person has yet to do. I (very respectfully) suggest, "I knew you'd come out." Or, "I knew you would come out." Will and would are both similar in use, but in this instance, would is a slightly better fit. Compared to other languages, English constantly changes and absorbs words from other places. I used to do editing, and I just note such things. I'm only posting a note in case it's important to you. If it's not, I totally understand, It's your project and yours alone. I don't want to offend at all. I love the comic too much to want to cause trouble. (Not that I ever do. I'm a marshmallow.) ;-D
Vesuvius
2022-03-27 03:47:53 +0000 UTCI'm completely cool with whatever your schedule turns out to be. I love seeing a masterwork like this unfold.
Vesuvius
2022-03-27 03:16:42 +0000 UTC"not infected" x to doubt
2022-03-25 08:38:13 +0000 UTCExcited to experience it all again. 🥰 Appreciate the hardwork!
A. Soleil
2022-03-25 08:32:55 +0000 UTC
